Drake Delison Posted August 5, 2012 Report Share Posted August 5, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/NCybx.jpg[/img] Lore: This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by banishing 3 LIGHT attribute Warrior type monsters from your field or Graveyard. Once per turn, you may banish a face up LIGHT attribute Warrior type monster on your side of the field (excluding this card), to inflict damage equal to half of that monster's ATK to your opponent's life points. The Start of a New Archetype Theme I'm working on. I figure besides other Sanctus cards I create, this card would assist the Light/Warrior Archetype even more. Real cards to support would be:[list] [*]Lightray Grepher [*]D.D. Warrior Lady [*]Blade Knight [*]Freed the Brave Warrior [*]Lightray Gearfried [*]Gaurdian of Order [/list] I'll add other Sanctus monsters if I feel its worth the pursuit. Comment on anything and everything you feel is great/horrible about the card. Thanks! Drake J Delison Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drake Delison Posted August 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2012 I'd Really Like some Feed Back Please :/ Anything? Good, Bad, Horrific? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drake Delison Posted August 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 Anything? :/ Is it really that hard to get one person's opinion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom01 Posted August 6, 2012 Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 well, the card seems overpowered regarding is ATK and how it is really easy to summon.. plus you have some capitalisation issues in your effect, like : - special summon ====> Special Summon - graveyard====> Graveyard - Ligh====> LIGHT . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drake Delison Posted August 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 [quote name='kingdom01' timestamp='1344215442' post='5998355'] well, the card seems overpowered regarding is ATK and how it is really easy to summon.. plus you have some capitalisation issues in your effect, like : - special summon ====> Special Summon - graveyard====> Graveyard - Ligh====> LIGHT [/quote] First off, thank you for your Feedback :] Second: I edited it. First for the grammar errors you mentioned, and then I dropped 200 ATK and 500 DEF. Finally I adjusted to where you have to remove 3 Light/Warriors instead of 2, then added only to the lore, to bump it down a bit more. Overall, I tried to compromise the best I could without changing the idea of it. Thank You for your Feedback ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheThieves Posted August 13, 2012 Report Share Posted August 13, 2012 Nice looking card but it will be un-appreciated because there aren't many light warrior archtypes besides D.D's i see it being looped with D.D survivor once per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strider Tigerwolf Posted August 13, 2012 Report Share Posted August 13, 2012 This card is just,,,wow. So broken, and not in effect but function-ability. There's is increadibly little "consistent" support for this card, very very very few if no targets worth for using his effect, and it doesn't make a deck at all. The best target you can get for "decent" burn is BLS-EotB for just 1500. I mean, you could probably do something Excalibur and several equip cards so that it can deal a heck ton of damage, but that combo would be incredibly flawed and fragile that it won't see play. Lightsworn engine to get cards in to the Grave for this card, and it's still a bad design. AND NO! Don't put the damage equal to a card's ATK, because then that breaks the card into a potent OTK, maybe even FTK if given the correct cards (still unlikely). Tbh...idk how to fix this O_o.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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