Dryad Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Wavering will..Crumbling heart..Clouded thought..Blind eyes..Dying flame.. Melancholy comes..Without spite..Without grief.. The world around closes..Leaving all behind the doors of sadness.. Enjoy :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casaditymaker Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 I think it is very calming! Good job :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 hmm rather short, a list of complaints, try adding activity, it will make it sound better, ^^_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Its short and sweet. ^_^Nice poem, but I'm still the poem king, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Its short and sweet. ^_^Nice poem' date=' but I'm still the poem king, lol.[/quote'] And White Rose is not Male, and cannot be a king even if she wanted too :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 It sounds great ^_^ and very cheerful :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Wavering will..Crumbling heart..Clouded thought..Blind eyes..Dying flame.. Melancholy comes..Without spite..Without grief.. The world around closes..Leaving all behind the doors of sadness.. Enjoy :) Most thought provoking line underlined, can anyone explain why? (I am not asking the maker of this poem specifically, I merely wish to see opinions expressed and voices heard, from anyone and everyone.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted March 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 Wavering will..Crumbling heart..Clouded thought..Blind eyes..Dying flame.. Melancholy comes..Without spite..Without grief.. The world around closes..Leaving all behind the doors of sadness.. Enjoy :) Most thought provoking line underlined' date=' can anyone explain why? (I am not asking the maker of this poem specifically, I merely wish to see opinions expressed and voices heard, from anyone and everyone.)[/quote'] I was beginning to wonder if people would have not caught that part. Without Hate or Sorrow, melancholy can come. True, melancholy can be inspired from Grief, but sometimes that does not cause it, an example is the Blues, those who played the blues sometimes did not feel grief though "Tamed" anger can also be accompanied in this as well. My final example is maybe somebody is the wealthiest person on the face of the plant but overcome by melancholy as they are not feeling Spite or Grief, just loneliness is the cause for this person's depression. Thank you, Sheogorath, it was a pleasure to answer your question :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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