DSS Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 My newest card ,realistic that israte and comment and please tell me if it needs improvement -------------------------------Owner: WallasaurusLink: http://wallasaurus.deviantart.com/art/glacial-terror-74718794Place: Devianart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 It could go better with just Beast but I like it 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow of Ake Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Well,some mistakes,and Ice-Beast type...In realistic cards we only have types which can be on real cards...but Effect is good,picture too...8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 three thingsdestroy isnt capitalizedCard after Spell and Trap capitalizedand also is spelled with an arating7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Cool card. Bloodrun placed all in places. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted March 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Glad you like it guysthree thingsdestroy isnt capitalizedCard after Spell and Trap capitalizedand also is spelled with an arating7/10Thanks for telling me Bloodrun ,i just edited it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 It should be:"you may Special Summon this card from your hand" and, summoned by itself is not capitalized. Also, there should be a period after Trap Card, not a comma. And the last line should read more like this: "As long as this card remains face-up on the field, Warrior-Type monsters on your opponent's side of the field lose 300 ATK points." Other than that, pretty good! overall - 12.09/13.69 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Nice card sonic. ^_^You have a few errors though, but bloodrun took care of that. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted March 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Thanks CS and browarod ^_^ glad you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 i like it. and the image is really really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Good effort, I like the idea ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted March 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Thanks CD , Yankeefan07 , victorydragon glad you guys like it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dude64 Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 9/10It's Awesome, and the picture is Sweeeeet! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted March 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 Glad you like it Moderater and Shadow Dude64 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchro-Dude Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 8.5/10 Could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 It's a bit overpowered, but good idea. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 awesome. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted March 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 thanks guys glad you like it :DIt's a bit overpowered' date=' but good idea. 7.5/10[/quote']I don't know how can it be overpowerd ,anyway thanks for rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 Maybe it should be 3 or less. Lower the DEF to 500-1000. That would make it good, right now, it's a Super Monarch XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 Maybe it should be 3 or less. Lower the DEF to 500-1000. That would make it good' date=' right now, it's a Super Monarch XD[/quote'] nah dude the cards fine. the card seems rather balanced nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 ^uh, Special Summoing a monster with 5 or more Cards in your Graveyard, how easy is that, lowering it to 3 or less would be better alot better, also the DEF is too high for an effect like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 ^uh' date=' Special Summoing a monster with 5 or more [b']Cards[/b] in your Graveyard, how easy is that, lowering it to 3 or less would be better alot better, also the DEF is too high for an effect like that it is very easy to get 5 monsters in the grave, lowering its DEF doesn't help much it's good the way it is. foolish burialshinning angelgiant germmorphing jarcard destructiongiant rat. need i continue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 ^It already has 5 or more cards (read that card) (thats why i said 3 or LESS) thats why I said it's Overpowered, and lowering it's DEF would help, as there are restrictions which make cards overpowered, learn them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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