My First Cards

[CosmicCore]

These are the first cards I've made on this site. I had tons of fun making them. Feedback is much appreciated!
[spoiler=Demonic Terror - Qerl]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/Cz74V.jpg[/img]
When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you may Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 or lower FIRE monsters from your Deck to your side of the Field. The selected monsters have their DEF points decreased by 800. Then shuffle your deck. If a monster Special Summoned by this card's effect is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x300.
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[spoiler=Demonic Terror - Vyus]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/FFWeF.jpg[/img]
[color=#9BA2A9][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]When this card is Special Summoned by the Effect of a FIRE monster, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points for every FIRE attributed monster in your Graveyard x300. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 1 Monster card from your Hand to the Graveyard to select 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard ("Other than Demonic Terror - Vyus") and add it to your hand.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#9BA2A9][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
[spoiler=Merciful Phoenix]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/MURc6.jpg[/img]
If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of an opponent's card effect, you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Hand or Graveyard to your side of the Field. As long as the Special Summoned monster remains on the Field, it cannot be destroyed by battle and cannot attack directly.
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[spoiler=Overheat Dragon]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/TDFPv.jpg[/img]
When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, destroy every Equip Spell card on the field and decrease the ATK and DEF of this card for each one x200. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.
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[Gojira/Godzilla]

I have Tried to Balance out the Effects of the first 2 monsters.
[spoiler='Demonic Terror - Qerl Edited lore'] When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you may Special Summon up to 2 FIRE Monster(s) from your Deck to your side of the Field. The selected monsters have their DEF points decreased by 800. Then shuffle your deck. If a monster Special Summoned by this card's effect is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x300.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Demonic Terror - Vyus Edited lore']When this card is Special Summoned by the Effect of a FIRE monster, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points for every FIRE attributed monster in your Graveyard x300. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 1 Monster card from your Hand to the Graveyard to select 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard ("Other than Demonic Terror - Vyus") and add ait to your hand. [/spoiler]

These are very good for someone's first cards.

[CosmicCore]

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I have Tried to Balance out the Effects of the first 2 monsters.
[spoiler='Demonic Terror - Qerl Edited lore'] When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you may Special Summon up to 2 FIRE Monster(s) from your Deck to your side of the Field. The selected monsters have their DEF points decreased by 800. Then shuffle your deck. If a monster Special Summoned by this card's effect is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x300.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Demonic Terror - Vyus Edited lore']When this card is Special Summoned by the Effect of a FIRE monster, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points for every FIRE attributed monster in your Graveyard x300. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 1 Monster card from your Hand to the Graveyard to select 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard ("Other than Demonic Terror - Vyus") and add ait to your hand. [/spoiler]

These are very good for someone's first cards.
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Thank you for the feedback and compliment! Yeah, they do seem slightly powerful. Your changes do balance it out well, like putting that it's any FIRE monster other than Vyus in the second effect.

[CosmicCore]

Would anyone else like to give any advice?

[Professor Tetsu]

You sure hve a thing for FIRE, don't you? Anyway, these cards are very good. Personally for Qerl, I'd say you can Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster(s), but that's just me. 10/10

[CosmicCore]

Ha-ha, yeah, the fire thing. To be honest, the only cool YGO card-worthy pictures I've been able to find online so far have been ones that are about fire. I like them, in any case, and I'm happy that you like the cards.

Now that I think about it, Qerl's effect for summoning FIRE monsters should totally be changed. He'd be able to summon FIRE monsters with a lot of ATK points (since monsters with a Level of 5 and higher usually have a good amount of ATK points), so I agree that there should be a limit for that. Thanks! Your review is very helpful.

[AbyssOfBliss]

Cool

Or shall I say hot