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UPDATE #1: Thunder. Thunder? Thunder! The Olde Tale of Lightning Dragons(that aren't Dragons?)


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The Olde Tale monsters are a revival of Thunder Dragon, and brings more destructive force to the Thunder Archetype, They are based around getting the big guns out by targeting your opponent's Dragons, destroying a little here and there and, well, that's it mostly.
[u][size=6][color=#FF0000][b]Rate. Critique. Enjoy.[/b][/color][/size][/u]

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Lore: [color=#800080][b]1 "Thunder Dragon" + 1 "Olde Tale" monster[/b][/color]
[size=3][b]You can Fusion Summon this monster by Banishing the above Fusion Material monsters from your hand or your side of the field. When this monster is Fusion Summoned you can Destroy all of your opponent's face-up monsters or all of your opponent's Set Cards, ignoring other card effects. If this card is destroyed, Banish all Dragon-Type monsters on the field.[/b][/size]

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[b][size=2]If you Tribute Summon this monster by Tributing 2 Thunder-Type monsters, destroy all of your opponent's monsters, this card cannot attack that turn. This monster cannot be attack except by monster's whose Levels are equal to or greater to the Level of this monster.[/size][/b]

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I really like the effects; (some are )not OP'd or UP'd. Although this set of thunder type cards wouldnt really fit in with most current list of thunder type monsters. The reason i say this is all but 1 of your cards is not lvl 4 or lower. So it would have to rely on other(existing) Thunder type monsters to be brought onto the field.
If you could make a couple related lvl 4 or lower "olde tale" Monsters, then you'd have a pretty good set of cards

King Thundrus 9.5/10
higher draco 7/10 --> this card is a OP'd,in my opinion Either get rid of "[b][size="1"]This monster cannot be attacked except by monster's whose Levels are equal to or greater to the Level of this monster. "[/size][/b]

[size="1"][size=4]Or[/size][/size]

[b][size="1"]"You can Banish this face-up card to negate the activation and effect of 1 face-up monster and Destroy that card"[/size][/b]

[size=4]But thats just my opinion[/size]


[size=4]Paladin Draco 9/10[/size]


[size=4]Ion/boom/electrum: all 8/10[/size]

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Thank you for your feed back.
[s][b][size=1]"You can Banish this face-up card to negate the activation and effect of 1 face-up monster and Destroy that card"[/size][/b][/s][b][size=1] <[color=#ff0000][size=5] GONE[/size][/color][/size][/b]
Added 1 low level as well as some support spells.

[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][size=8]"[/size][size=2]I really like the effects; (some are )not OP'd or UP'd. [/size][/background][/size][/font][/color][color=#ff0000][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][size=2][size=4][b]Although this set of thunder type cards wouldnt really fit in with most current list of thunder type monsters.[/b][/size][/size][/background][/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][size=2] The reason i say this is[/size][/background][/size][/font][/color][color=#ff0000][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][size=2][b][size=4] all but 1 of your cards is not lvl 4 or lower. So it would have to rely on other(existing) Thunder type monsters to be brought onto the field.[/size][/b][/size][/background][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#0000ff][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][size=4][b][u]If you could make a couple related lvl 4 or lower "olde tale" Monsters, then you'd have a pretty good set of cards[/u][/b][/size][/background][/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][size=8]"[/size][/background][/size][/font][/color]

[color=#ff0000][size=2][b]Works as intended[/b][/size][/color]
[color=#0000ff][size=3][b]They are not designed to be a 'Standalone' Archetype. That's the type of thing that created a dead zone of unused cards in the Franchise.[/b][/size][/color]

[size=3][b][color=#000000]Extra note: [size=2]If you have 1 "Olde Tale" and Thunder Dragon in your hand you already have King Thundrus, in fact you could get 2 in one turn(Thunder Dragon Engine).[/size][/color][/b][/size]

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Well they seem better now :)

I think static draw might need some work. I think it should be at least "you cant activate other spell cards during the same turn you activate this card" or "you can only activate 1 static draw per turn"; some players would probably abuse your current static draws effect.

Or...

you could keep the "draw 2 cards" part and instead of discarding a thunder type; you could make it tribute a thunder type. I think that would make it slightly more balanced.


The rest of your spells are very good though :)

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