My first post

[liam2ster]

D.O.D means Demon of destruction. This is my first post.... I hope you guys like the cards


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[BioWulf]

Hi,
I am not that experienced in card making i made my first post today too,but i think i can help you balance and fix your cards.Anyone is free to correct me if i am wrong.
Ok here we go:

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D.O.D. Arch Angel
There is no such thing as Demon in Yu-Gi-Oh it's called Fiend change that.Also for a Level 7 Synchro monster it got a bit higher attack than usual level 7 monster have maximum 2800 usually.Also the text is a bit messed up i think you should change it to this:

Card Text:1 "The Weak Angel" + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters
This card gains 500 ATK for every LIGHT monster your opponent controls.All LIGHT monsters your opponent controls lose 500 ATK.



D.O.D. Blazing Abomination
Like last card change type to Fiend.Also for a only 2 Fusion Monster it got too much attack considering it also has piercing effect,and a nuke effect with no cost.Also it gains 500 attack from the card used to fusion summon it,so to make it balanced thats how i would change it:

Card Text:1 "D.O.D. Blazing Beast" + 1 D.O.D. Reduki
This monster can only be Fusion Summoned with the Spell Card,"D.O.D. Cauldron of Fusion and De-Fusion".When this card is Fusion Summoned you can destroy all cards on the field.If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent.
ATK:2700 DEF:500

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D.O.D. Blazing Beast
Ok this card is pretty good i wouldn't change a thing about it,except the card's text:some terms.

Card Text:Once per turn,during your Main Phase,you can randomly discard 1 card from your opponent's hand.If this card is targeted for an attack you can chose the target instead.

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D.O.D. Emperor of Dark Magic
This card is balanced in my opinion i will just fix the card text.
Card Text:As long as this card remains face-up on the field,your opponent cannot Normal or Special Summon level 6 or higher monsters.Once per turn,during your Main Phase,you can send 1 card from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard to target 1 Spell or Trap card; destroy that target.

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D.O.D. Reduki
There is nothing imbalanced in this card except that it got too short description.Also change that type to Fiend.
Check this card example that would fit.

Card Text:A fierce demon lurking in the underworld.It wields a powerful sword but it lacks any defence.


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Desperation
A card that could be splashed in ANY deck its too good in my opinion.I think this is better.

Card Text:Discard 2 cards.Add 1 "Hell" or 1 "D.O.D." card from your deck to your hand.

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Hell
Too good without a cost.
Here's my call.

Card Text:Activate this card by paying 1000 Life Points.All D.O.D. Monsters gain 500 ATK.All D.O.D. Monsters are unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap cards.

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Return Attack
OK thats a second magic cylinder lol.
Fix.
Card Text:When an opponent's monster declares an attack: Target the attacking monster; negate the attack, and if you do, inflict damage to your opponent equal to its ATK.

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Return of the Demon
Ok but not perfect.
Here's my call.
Card Text:Special Summon 1 D.O.D. monster from your Graveyard.Target up to 2 Spell or Trap cards on the field;Return those targets to the hand.

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Change this card to D.O.D. Cauldron of Fusion and De-Fusion to be able to search it with Desperation.
Fix.
Card Text.Activate this card by choosing 1 of the these effects:
-Banish "D.O.D." monsters written on Fusion Monster and Fusion Summon that monster.Any level 8 or higher monster summoned by this effect gain 500 ATK.

-Banish 1 "D.O.D." Fusion Monster you control and Special Summon the banished Fusion Material Monsters written on that monster.

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The Weal Angel
I would change the card text a bit and also change the card type to Normal like D.O.D. Reduki's background,yellow not brown.Also angel type to fairy.

Card Text:A weak, and chained up angel.It is said to tune with Arch Angels.

I hope i was helpful.

Sheeesh.I helped you now i hope someone helps me LOL.