i'll move my king first (you can not do that in chess) THIS IS YUGIOH

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a mean king deserves a mean effect
kinda king thats care for his people when they are silent and follows his every command
and will crush any underling in his path to reach his goals
his opponents tremble at the whisper of his name

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[color=#000000]You can banish 1 card in your Hand except "Zimgabze Kane Voknaul The Golem King" and destory 1 face-up monster (except "Zimgabze Kane Voknaul The Golem Kingl") you control to Special Summon this card from your Hand or your Graveyard. When this card is Summoned: You can add 1 "Zimgabze" monster (other than "Zimgabze Kane Voknaul The Golem King") from your Deck to your hand OR you can Special Summon 1 "Zimgabze" monster (other than "Zimgabze Kane Voknaul The Golem King") from your hand. When this card is removed form your side of the Field banish all Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard except this card. While this card is face-up on the Field, all your Opponent's monster lose ATK and DEF equal to the number of banished EARTH Fiend-Type monsters x 100.[/color]

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bump

[mikel.]

[b]You can[/b] send 1 card in your Hand except "Zimgabze Kane Voknaul The Golem King" and destory 1 face-up monster (except "Zimgabze Kane Voknaul The Golem Kingl") you control to [b]Special Summon this card from your Hand or your Graveyard. [/b]When this card is Summoned, [b]you can add 1 "Zimgabze" monster form your Deck to your Hand or you can[/b] [b]Special Summon 1 "Zimgabze" monster in your Hand[/b]. When this card is[b] removed form your side of the Field banish all Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard [/b]except this card. While this card is face-up on the Field, [b]all your Opponent's monster lose ATK and DEF equal to the number of banished Fiend-Type monsters x 100.[/b]


I see one sided card.
This card can clean about 3 cards fast, the bold card are thing you should look at, fix a bit. Your card is OP'ed.
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[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Mikel kind of addressed the OCG issues with the card, so I won't delve into that.

However, as mentioned, this is OP'd and perhaps broken in a swarm deck. And, if you pop Dimension Fusion and/or Return from the DD mid game, this guy basically gets the chance to destroy everything. I suggest cutting the last effect entirely.

And I'm guessing that it was made EARTH and not DARK to avoid something like Fran Ken. I agree with that. Stats are fine. If you are going to make this into a set of Zimgabze cards, then perhaps you can change the one sentence to this:

When this card is Summoned: You can add 1 "Zimgabze" monster (other than "Zimgabze Kane Voknaul The Golem King") from your Deck to your hand OR you can Special Summon 1 "Zimgabze" monster (other than "Zimgabze Kane Voknaul The Golem King") from your hand.

If you decide to do that, then you can probably boost the ATK and DEF up some to keep it from being UP'd.

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[quote name='.Mikel.' timestamp='1346466074' post='6017039']
I see one sided card.
This card can clean about 3 cards fast, the bold card are thing you should look at, fix a bit. Your card is OP'ed.
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you did not explain why its op'ed just stating [b]"IT'S OP'ed"[/b] does not help anyone

2nd it you must offer a face monster you control and banish 1 card in your hand to special summon it and its need 2 for a normal summon so you would be giving up alot for that then your opponent possible [b](lets face it like 90% chance having some trap spell or monster's eff to negate or destroy it as soon it gets placed down)[/b]

[quote name='GodWynn' timestamp='1346467015' post='6017046']
Mikel kind of addressed the OCG issues with the card, so I won't delve into that.
However, as mentioned, this is OP'd and perhaps broken in a swarm deck. And, if you pop Dimension Fusion and/or Return from the DD mid game, this guy basically gets the chance to destroy everything. I suggest cutting the last effect entirely.
And I'm guessing that it was made EARTH and not DARK to avoid something like Fran Ken. I agree with that. Stats are fine. If you are going to make this into a set of Zimgabze cards, then perhaps you can change the one sentence to this:
When this card is Summoned: You can add 1 "Zimgabze" monster (other than "Zimgabze Kane Voknaul The Golem King") from your Deck to your hand OR you can Special Summon 1 "Zimgabze" monster (other than "Zimgabze Kane Voknaul The Golem King") from your hand.
If you decide to do that, then you can probably boost the ATK and DEF up some to keep it from being UP'd.
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alter the effect to prevent self summoning

[mikel.]

[quote name='Garthfunkle Vii Backwards' timestamp='1346467306' post='6017047']
you did not explain why its op'ed just stating [b]"IT'S OP'ed"[/b] does not help anyone
2nd it you must offer a face monster you control and banish 1 card in your hand to special summon it and its need 2 for a normal summon so you would be giving up alot for that then your opponent possible [b](lets face it like 90% chance having some trap spell or monster's eff to negate or destroy it as soon it gets placed down)[/b]
alter the effect to prevent self summoning
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Look this is how I would play your card if it help:
<Me>[quote name='.Mikel.' timestamp='1346466074' post='6017039']
[b]You can[/b] send 1 card in your Hand except "Zimgabze Kane Voknaul The Golem King" and destory 1 face-up monster (except "Zimgabze Kane Voknaul The Golem Kingl") you control to [b]Special Summon this card from your Hand or your Graveyard. [/b]When this card is Summoned, [b]you can add 1 "Zimgabze" monster form your Deck to your Hand or you can[/b] [b]Special Summon 1 "Zimgabze" monster in your Hand[/b]. When this card is[b] removed form your side of the Field banish all Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard [/b]except this card. While this card is face-up on the Field, [b]all your Opponent's monster lose ATK and DEF equal to the number of banished Fiend-Type monsters x 100.[/b]
I see one sided card.
This card can clean about 3 cards fast, the bold card are thing you should look at, fix a bit. Your card is OP'ed.
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It's in my hand>
Dark world monster-graveyard
OTK move with it x3

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[quote name='.Mikel.' timestamp='1346532131' post='6017452']
Dark world monster-graveyard
OTK move with it x3
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Foolish Burial a Dark World monster
OTK move with it x3

how can you otk using darkworld and this ? could you explain it to me REAL QUICK

EARTH Fiend-Type monster are the target of the banishment effects last time i check dark world monster are well dark you could use gate grapha beirge combo to destory destory cards and have good beaters for major damage

[mikel.]

Oh yea, I mis read some thing sorry it's fine as it is now.

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[quote name='.Mikel.' timestamp='1346537023' post='6017512']
Oh yea, I mis read some thing sorry it's fine as it is now.
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sweet

do you like it ?

[mikel.]

Still confuesed on how to use it, might like it you tell me.

[Love of Ghibli]

I sense the feeling of regret preparing to waft over me but I will say that this card by himself is not broken and is actually pretty balanced considering its a fiend Trade-in target. That said I feel like the only true way to support it is to see the rest of the archetype that it comes from. Of course I fear archetypes you make but that is another subject for another topic.

[-Griffin]

You should really include links to any existing cards from the archtype. There is no TCG/OCG cards with that name, so the following will assume part of his effect doesn't work at all:

Trade-in-able 2000 ATK beatstick isn't too bad. ATK drain is minimal in most situations. Overall, I feel I'd much rather use Soulkius in most Decks. Especially with him being more useful for Xyz and Synchs, and Grave usually being preferable to banishing. This card's main use would be in Decks where they get useless monsters/tokens on the field often, such as blasting a Treeborn Frog or Level Eater often for the Summon.

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[quote name='.Mikel.' timestamp='1346550837' post='6017641']
Still confuesed on how to use it, might like it you tell me.
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normal summon or special summon a monster (wind up zenmaine eff 2 for 1 lol) beside that then banish a card in your hand to summon then you to add anthor zimgabze to your hand or deck or special summon from 1 from your hand banish more EARTH Fiend-Types then even this card gets destoryed you can brink it back but this time due it effects your opponents will be munch weaker which you can keep repeating resulting your opponent monster worthless

ss a monster like treeborn frog ns tour guide its eff ss anthor touguide the xyz number 17 or number 20 then ss zimgabze kan voknaul by banishing treeborn kane voknaul eff will weaken your opponents monster more EARTH Fiend-Type monsters banished use number 17 or numbe 20 eff to tip the scale in your favor

you can banish alot of EARTH Fiend-Type monster then SS this to make a wall for stall tatics

[quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1346553699' post='6017664']
I sense the feeling of regret preparing to waft over me but I will say that this card by himself is not broken and is actually pretty balanced considering its a fiend Trade-in target. That said I feel like the only true way to support it is to see the rest of the archetype that it comes from. Of course I fear archetypes you make but that is another subject for another topic.
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[quote name='-Griffin' timestamp='1346591007' post='6017807']
You should really include links to any existing cards from the archtype. There is no TCG/OCG cards with that name, so the following will assume part of his effect doesn't work at all:

Trade-in-able 2000 ATK beatstick isn't too bad. ATK drain is minimal in most situations. Overall, I feel I'd much rather use Soulkius in most Decks. Especially with him being more useful for Xyz and Synchs, and Grave usually being preferable to banishing. This card's main use would be in Decks where they get useless monsters/tokens on the field often, such as blasting a Treeborn Frog or Level Eater often for the Summon.
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there a set comming up which makes this make this guy eff way more usefull

[mikel.]

Yeah, it's cool just my not my type of run though i would feel fear from it, no lying in there as from me using it i find it hard to love and play with it, i like simple quick moves and more of future response this has not any of them. (Tell me where am wrong)