Machine King Continuation/Support

[Iriq]

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[spoiler=Effect]Once per turn, you can target 1 face-up Machine-Type Monster you control; equip the targeted card to to this Monster(Max 5), OR Unequip that card and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. This card gains 500 ATK for each Monster equipped to this card. If "Machine King Mobile Part" is equipped to his card, no other Monsters can be equipped to this card.[/spoiler]


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[spoiler=Effect]Once per turn, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a face-up "Machine King"monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a "Machine King Brawler" by this card's effect, each time it destroys a Monster by battle, halve your opponent's Life Points. (If the equipped Monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.)[/spoiler]


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[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Machine King Brawler" you control that's equipped with "Machine King Mobile Part". This card's original ATK/DEF is equal to the number of Machine-Type Monsters on your side of the field x 2000.[/spoiler]


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Comments?Ideas?Suggestions?

[Gojira/Godzilla]

These seem decent enough, but they could do with some Spell/Trap card(s) to back them up.
Lore edits/Balancing:
[spoiler='Machine King Emperor'] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Machine King Brawler" you control that's equipped with "Machine King Mobile Part". This card's original ATK/DEF is equal to the number of Machine-Type Monster(s), (other than this card) on your side of the field x 2000. [/spoiler]
[spoiler='Machine King's Guardian'] As long as this card remains Face-up on the field, "Machine King" monster(s) you control, (other than this card) cannot be Targeted for an Attack. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 "Machine King" monster you control (Except this card) and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the tributed monsters original ATK. [/spoiler]
Reviews of "Machine King Emperor" and "Machine King's Guardian"
Machine King Emperor: Once this thing hits the field, it is basically a Vanilla, and it doesn't have the machine king effect: "This card gains ___ATK for every Machine-Type monster on the field", and you might want to think about giving it an additional effect that could help other "Machine King monster(s) survive.
Machine King's Guardian: this card is quite similar to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Castle_Gate"]http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Castle_Gate[/url] because it has high DEF and 0 ATK, and it has an effect that allows you to tribute a monster to inflict damage to your opponent.

[Iriq]

[quote name='~shadow~' timestamp='1346441162' post='6016784']
These seem decent enough, but they could do with some Spell/Trap card(s) to back them up.
Lore edits/Balancing:
[spoiler='Machine King Emperor'] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Machine King Brawler" you control that's equipped with "Machine King Mobile Part". This card's original ATK/DEF is equal to the number of Machine-Type Monster(s), (other than this card) on your side of the field x 2000. [/spoiler]
[spoiler='Machine King's Guardian'] As long as this card remains Face-up on the field, "Machine King" monster(s) you control, (other than this card) cannot be Targeted for an Attack. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 "Machine King" monster you control (Except this card) and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the tributed monsters original ATK. [/spoiler]
Reviews of "Machine King Emperor" and "Machine King's Guardian"
Machine King Emperor: Once this thing hits the field, it is basically a Vanilla, and it doesn't have the machine king effect: "This card gains ___ATK for every Machine-Type monster on the field", and you might want to think about giving it an additional effect that could help other "Machine King monster(s) survive.
Machine King's Guardian: this card is quite similar to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Castle_Gate"]http://yugioh.wikia....iki/Castle_Gate[/url] because it has high DEF and 0 ATK, and it has an effect that allows you to tribute a monster to inflict damage to your opponent.
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Thanks for the feedback; your lore for the cards seems better; although i dont what kind of effect i should on add to him; but maybe support spells/traps could help instead?

[Captain Murphy ☆]

Wth, these are gundams...