Yu-Gi-Oh! Gates of Despair (Started/Accepting/PG-16/OOC)

[Spirit of DMG]

Echo, Joseph is Lord JZ of the Enigma. The guy who posted on the last page reserving a spot as a Cultist.
PS: One thing you should know about Onee-Sama, she hosts a Roleplay elsewhere. She's quite used to getting her way. That's my Onee-Sama. ^.^~

[Love of Ghibli]

[quote name='True Silent Echo' timestamp='1346897442' post='6020003']
That's fine then. One question, though; who exactly [i]is[/i] Joseph? ^^" No offense to him, I'm sure, but I'm totally new to YCM and am not at all familiar with the forum regulars.

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Joseph is most likely Lord JZ of the Enigma not a bad person in my opinion.

[Spirit of DMG]

[quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1346897938' post='6020010']
Joseph is most likely Lord JZ of the Enigma not a bad person in my opinion.
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Indeed he is not. Quite a fair person, and in fact I think Nii-San would be good to Co-Host.

[Love of Ghibli]

I have redone my Titan I now want to see if he okay to be used. In short I put it up for review.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/euTUu.jpg[/img]

Shouldn't be too overpowered and his effect is related to the one fact I think is relevant about him. lol

[ListenToLife]

I didn't mean totally relate to it, but there should be some similarities. Prometheus was an intelligent and rather peaceful seeming titan that was chained to a rock. Not a large warrior with a flame sword. But that's just me being my usual self, picky. XD

[quote name='Nmbr101:DonovynMikaraGerra' timestamp='1346897747' post='6020007']
...she hosts a Roleplay elsewhere. She's quite used to getting her way.
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I'm sorry, but I dont see how these relate to each other. I've hosted many RPs, but that doesn't mean I should get my own way all the time. I try to be fair, reasonable and as original as possible. Not trying to be mean or anything, merely saying that no-one 'gets their own way' all the time.

[Aqua Girl]

[sup]so much food...[size=3] [/size][/sup]

[sup][size=3][size=5]Uhm, Well yes, I agree about prometheus, Buts on the matter of effect, He can only be summoned by the effect of the trap card, and since this isent all originaldecks [/size][/size][/sup]

[sup][size=3][size=5]I'm shure solemn and veiler are a thing unfortunately. and I dident mean to have it destroy everything I ment it to only destroy monsters., and I said it destroys all monsters that are not pyro types, My entire deck is like reverse windups. all the same eliment but a variety of types, I'll fix the level and make it so it only kills monsters. But the first turn invulnerability[/size][/size][/sup][sup][size=3][size=5] is justified becaous of its god status, and the fact, that it takes so much to get him out. My monster has to get destroyed the s/t has to survive and the spell/trap can to be negated, 4-5 things have to go perfectly right for it to come out. and I'm a very experienced Roleplayer I wont abuse him. I'm suprised your not freaking over Inferno dragon >.>. I guess the Great serpent effect is enough for you.[/size][/size][/sup]

On the aspect of his look, Hes been sealed away for milienia for case of association. I'd assume he would be vengefull or at least angry, Gods have no constant physical form, in many cases of gods changing form or look becaous of their anger. His look is justified and the general aspect of the trap goes along with him being freed from the seals(Chains were humans interpritations of what was doe to them, I'm shure it would take more than chains to hold a god.)

[Reinforce]

[quote name='ClearAngel' timestamp='1346895284' post='6019961']
So if my servant minor character is ok to use can I have her use Photons(just running this by, to make sure I'm not stepping on any toes).
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No can do sorry, my character has already taken the Photon set.

[Lord JZ of the Enigma]

that was a lot to read, I never asked to be the leader of the cultists actually, but I would like to know if I could use Rhea, I haven't seen her taken yet, the card will be made later, here is the app

Username: Lord JZ of the Enigma
Name: Jaine (last name forgotten)
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual
Appearance:
[Spoiler Normal Appearance][url="http://safebooru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=837345"]http://safebooru.org...=view&id=837345[/url][/spoiler]
[Spoiler Cultist Appearance]http://safebooru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=734585[/spoiler]
[SPOILER Bio:]
Jaine was once a promising young middle school student, she was cute, popular with most everyone and above all loved gardening with her brother. Despite their mother's death during her birth and their father subsequently leaving them, thanks to her brother she saw life was nothing more then a garden and she learned that everything grew to a beautiful bloom, only to have a tragic end when the most beautiful of flowers lost it's petals.

Despite the years of happiness she shared with her brother, in order for him to care for both of them he held two jobs and also dealt with keeping his sister in school and out of harms way, especially as she began to develop into a young woman, she saw her growth as a sign of maturing and felt her time to bloom was near, becoming reckless and worrying him constantly, he claimed she had become a different person all together, but she didn't pay him any mind.

Dueling had become a large aspect in culture over the years, and her brother saw this as a way to reconnect with his younger sister, she had always loved playing games with him when she was younger, after scrounging up enough money he bought her a set of cards, nothing too special, just what he could afford and presented her with them. She scoffed at the idea, she wanted nothing to do with a card game and after learning the tastes of being on her own she wanted nothing to do with him. something she would regret later on.

Jaine had lived a difficult yet comfortable life, never being pestered by unwanted men, never having to hear anything negative from anyone,
she began feeling on top of the world until she learned from one of her friends, her brother protected her too much, he had kept vile men away from her, he had reasoned with many about her attitude, and in a way, he had still been a big part of her life, she didn't understand why he would still be so vigilant over her when she was in her bloom, it was her time to shine, and he had no place in it any longer, she confronted him about it, and left their small home, to make herself be known.

During this time she learned how unprepared she was, unable to find employment, keeping herself away from any danger was the most difficult and she soon learned that her brother didn't overprotect her to get in the way, but because she had been such a spoiled brat she wasn't ready to leave his side yet, her time had not come, but his had.

While she was away he had been visited by some loan sharks whom he had used to get money over the years for food and rent while he had kept his own money for Jaine's future college fund, when he was late for payment, having believed his sister had left him forever, he had refused to pay, and to add to the matter, he had attacked them, as if he was hoping they would finish him off, they did so...and seeing what they had left in her home, was when she felt a petal drop.

Being completely orphaned at an older age she was given a choice between living on her own, going to an orphanage of possibly joining a convent, she had decided to work as a shrine maiden for the small shrine her brother used to take her to after each new years, for a while she simply tried to live a normal life since her brother's passing and often remembered him when she gardened, the visits from the public soon began to show increasing numbers in duelists and remembering her brothers gift she began to learn how to duel, and the passion of knowing the deck was her brothers gift to her made her strong.

One day, while looking through her belongings she had found a book, one she remembered her brother would often read, it was the story of the Utopia of long ago and how the power of the gods could grant any one wish, he had always read it with much hope for him and his sister, now she read it with a delusion, possibly from her previous pains, seeing as Rhea had her brother taken from her as well, she sympathized, she wondered why one would separate two siblings apart, no matter what the other had done, even if some ideals were morally wrong....
Her brother was only keeping bad people away, her brother was just trying to keep order, her brother was trying to make her life easier......Kronus was just making sure that she was safe......KRONUS had been wrongly imprisoned.....Her brother was TRAPPED IN TARTARUS......the gods.....THEY HAD TAKEN him away.....She wanted HER brother back.....Kronus should be free......her BROTHER should be free......SHE WOULD FINALLY COME INTO BLOOM.....

.......her mind shattered into two, and while keeping her sanity as a Maiden, she had sought a way to release "her brother" and it found her, the Cultists found her, and she was willing to do anything to bring "him" back.[/SPOILER]
Personality: her personality changes drastically depending on her situation, while she's out in the open she is normally calm and kind, a little ditzy and with a cute motherly quality befitting her love of nature, however when she is doing an operation for Kronos she has a far more seductive and violent demeanor, bordering on the psychotic to further her goals, her true self lost long ago it is unknown which of her two selves is the true one any longer, the one that wants revenge on the world she now lives in, or the one that wishes things would go back to normal.
Faction: Kronos
[Spoiler Immortal: Rhea][img]http://i.imgur.com/IjaLl.jpg[/img]
[Spoiler Lore]You can Special Summon this card by Tributing 3 cards you control. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card returns to the hand during the End Phase of the turn it is Special Summoned. During your Main Phase you can select 1 of the following effects:
* Inflict 300 Damage to your opponent for each monster on the field OR gain 500 Life Points for each monster on the field.
* Discard any number of Plant-Type monsters from your hand to return that many Spell or Trap cards on the field to their owners hand.
The effects of this monster can be used only once while this card is face-up on the field.[/spoiler][/spoiler]
Deck: Poison Ivy (plant deck)

[Spirit of DMG]

Hmmm. I like her. ^.^~ -looks at the pictures- hey, Echo, what is this RP rated?

[Lord JZ of the Enigma]

My titan has been made, I'll update my previous post, note that the picture I'm using is Gaia, but the Titan is supposed to be Rhea.

[a bad post]

@Simdoggy Oh I could have sworn you were the guy with sea serpents, well I'll figure out what deck type she has after school.

[deadaim98]

Well the rp, sure does have quite a few ppl now... I feel real bad though.... my bio was so short, despite my ability to entend it...*sigh* I guess I am suffering a major degree of sloth ^^;

Just noticed the few number of hetrosexual characters, no offense, nor do I really care but just saying that the balance has tipped far over the scale (but I guess comedy is accepted in all manner ^^

Hope none of you guys mind me saying any of this, and can't wait to rp with you guys.

[Spirit of DMG]

Well, I guess since we're just waiting on neutral duelists.... How long tip we can start this party? I want the cake.

[True Silent Echo]

[quote name='Nmbr101:DonovynMikaraGerra' timestamp='1346912991' post='6020126']
Hmmm. I like her. ^.^~ -looks at the pictures- hey, Echo, what is this RP rated?
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16+, Why do you a-.....[size=1]Oh my[size=4].....[/size][/size]

@Lord JZ: Nice app ^^ It's accepted, though I'd like to clarify; you [i]don't[/i] want to be the Cultist leader? Either way is fine with me.

@DaWeirdGuy & Beginning: How about I make the battle damage reduced by half and a level 4 or lower monster summoned instead?

@Kneesocks: I think that you should make it so that your opponent only takes damage for each of their own cards that is destroyed. But more importantly, you should add 'Monsters you control cannot declare an attack the turn this card is summoned'. I mean, think about it. Life points in this role play start at 4000; Prometheus would pretty much be an instant kill.

@Number101: We should be starting soon, I just have to finish up my second app and decide how to begin. Any opinions on how I should start? ^^" I'm not quite sure of the proper protocol for beginning role plays on these forums...

[Spirit of DMG]

Well, Normally, Echo, each member gets to post an introduction post. In this case, it'd probably be wise to allow everyone to show up at the tournament grounds. You being the RP Lord of this Role Play, the Opening Post should be by you, showing your character, probably lost in the sauce, showing up to here the tournament beginning being announced. This tournament is being hosted by someone, right? They'll probably make an announcement to the participants reminding them of the rules and whatnot, and explaining exactly [i]why[/i] the grounds are divided into so many fields. A set up which hasn't been used since Duelist Kingdom. ... which I just remembered never happened in this particular set of YU-Gi-Oh! history. Still.

EDIT:
I just noticed that BLUR and Wierd Guy are both Level Three. We have a chance at Leviathan Dragon spontaneously appearing here!

[Aqua Girl]

Okay Echo. I for one am an experienced player and take going in to him first turn as massive power playing. I wont abuse it, I'll probably only go in to it much later on, and not untill late in the duel when I'm mostlikely to win anyways. And My card maker is messed up. As I stated I entended to only destroy monsters. And my deck if you look at my monsters, are all different types, so my cards have a posibility to be killed. and then theres the fact that another thing I stated 5-6 things muct go perfectly for my card to even go off, my trap as to survive not being mst'd, my monster not being bottomlessed. my trap going off not being warningd or seven tools'd in a RP where you can magicaly have any card you need in your hand. its fair, I'd be willing to compromise if the RP was all original cards or 8000 LP.

Oh also I dont mind taking 1-2 duelist's spots aswell. and I forgot to do this..... *Glomps DMG in to Joseph*

And... D: I like jaine/samara she heems sorta broken, *Has a thing for damaged girls*(And boys >.> Looks at joseph x33)

[True Silent Echo]

@Kneesocks: You're right, that's certainly better. Sorry about that ^^". I was unaware that you had made that change. I've been really distracted with stuff in RL, and must've accidentally missed your previous post. Oh, and I'll make some reserve(s) for you if you'll clarify exactly how many you would like.

Speaking of which, I'm cancelling my reservation of the last Cultist. Since a lot of stuff has been happening recently, I don't want to bite off more than I can chew. [b]This means that there is one more Cultist space open for grabs.[/b] I might make a factionless character later on, once I know that I'll be able to keep up with another one with out holding up the role play.

@Number101: Good. It's pretty much the same as any other role playing forum I've been to ^^ My initial idea was to start the roleplay about an hour after the opening ceremony, giving some time for our characters to enter the grounds so that we can get right into the story. If you think that an opening ceremony scene is necessary, though, I can always include it.

[Aqua Girl]

I re read what I said and I feel I was being very pushy I have a habit of doing that when I feel I'm being treated unfair wich I wasent. x3 I tend to forget my place. but if my card's are fine, I'd like to know. am I accepted? also. May I introduce a new summoning mechanic for one of my characters. I'f You'll give me the time of day I'll gladly explain the way it works for you.

[a bad post]

I've decided to give my maidservant character Chaos (mostly dragons). I swear if anyone already reserved that I'm going to eat you! If someone has Chaos I then give her Heriatics.

[Dwarven King]

[quote name='ClearAngel' timestamp='1346927960' post='6020159']
@Simdoggy Oh I could have sworn you were the guy with sea serpents, well I'll figure out what deck type she has after school.
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I be the Sea Serpent guy mainly because Poseidon =/= Lightsworns. :3

Also, I'm proud to say that my boss card is the only XYZ monster! =D I hope it stays that way. Plus nobody has told me it's OP'ed. ^^

[Aqua Girl]

[sub]Dwarven you know... technicaly.... there already is a posiedon card ._.[/sub]

[Spirit of DMG]

[quote name='Dwarven King' timestamp='1346967420' post='6020386']
I be the Sea Serpent guy mainly because Poseidon =/= Lightsworns. :3
Also, I'm proud to say that my boss card is the only XYZ monster! =D I hope it stays that way. Plus nobody has told me it's OP'ed. ^^
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That card is insanely op'd. Nothing about it is balanced, and it's the most broken card I've ever seen. It's in more pieces than Shooting Star Dragon. Plus the picture doesn't fit at all.
Actually, that's a lie. I haven't even looked at the card. XD

[True Silent Echo]

@KneeSocks: Oh, it's fine ^^ I appreciate that you care, though. Yup, you're accepted. And sure, I'd love to hear about your new summon mechanic :3 Ascension, was it?

@Clear: You're good, neither are taken ^^ (at least, I don't think so o.o)

@Beginning: Awesome card :3 Interesting yet simple effect, and I don't quite know why, but I love the image o.o Thing is, I'm not [i]quite[/i] sure about the cost (or lack thereof). Don't get me wrong; I'm not saying that it's way too powerful, but it just seems a little easy to get. That's just my opinion, however. I'm not concerned enough about it to ask you to change it. So long as long as you're conservative with it in the role play, I'll count it as accepted.

[ListenToLife]

[quote name='Lord JZ of the Enigma' timestamp='1346911117' post='6020119']
[Spoiler=Normal Appearance][url="http://safebooru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=837345"]http://safebooru.org...=view&id=837345[/url][/spoiler]
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O.O
Humana Humana Humana Humana Humana Humana Humana Humana Humana (...)

Erm, sorry. Got a bit, err, side-tracked there. XD
I still think that Prometheus is a bit broken, due to it basically being a OTK card (No matter how hard it is to summon. Exodia's hard to use, it's still the most broken card in Yugioh history) You should probably restrict the amount of monsters it can destroy, or lower the life point damage. If it destroys more than 3 monsters, the Opponent is OTK'd. Which is never good. I'd change it to maybe 200-300 LP per monster? That means it'd take at least 5-8 monsters destroyed to OTK.

Also, Kneesocks, no offense meant, but can you please stop saying you're an Experienced RPer, as if it'll give you special priveliges? Again, no offense meant by it, it's just that most if not all of us are experienced RPers, and none of us are flaunting it around. It's just slightly irritating to me. Hope I'm not being too insulting; just a bit annoying is all.
And your grammar will improve in IC, wont it? I just keep noticing you make quite a few grammar mistakes in these posts.

@Donovyn; Techinically I should be at 5/6. Things, err, happened; my previous account is regrettably...unusable. '

[Aqua Girl]

*Restrains self, and smiles*
I'm saying I'm an experienced roleplayer, not to get special treatment, if thats the way you feel I'm trying to make out... I'm just explaining I could runa Horocarthy deck and I could be trusted not to abuse it, where as a less experienced player would abuse it.

As I stated His effect is different, and if you want to bring in real life yugioh in the mix, any real player shouldent spam his field with 5 monsters unless their going to win. It takes 5-6 thing to go perfect in a roleplay where you can have Any card in your hand/field that you want, one seven tools/warning/Judgement, and my card is dead ._.

Literaly, its not as bad as you claim, and the owner has already agreed. If this was all costom cards I would be fine and reduse him but its not and when I have to deal with warnings and bottomless and solemn mystical, its not that broken.


Echo, An ascend summon is treated as aspecial summon its sort of like an synchro and an Xyz but I came up with this idea before xyz were around. Basicaly the mechanic is based around a Rising monster, You Exile (not banish, basicaly the card is permenantly removed from the game.) the apropreate rising monster to special summon the Ascend monster from the Extra deck.

Rising monsters basicaly, are special monsters that must undergo a Trial or special set of actions, before they can be used to ascend summon a monster. Those actions can be as simple as being sucsessfuly being summoned to destroying an oponets monster by battle. [img]http://i.imgur.com/Du6Wt.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/L61G1.jpg[/img]

And an asend monster can take only 1 Rising monster or 3 depends on the player/ thebroken ness of the card.
[img]http://i.imgur.com/jjEnK.jpg[/img]
1 "Ellisa, the Wanderer"
Once per turn you can change this cards Type to Fairy-Type or Warrior-Type. This card gains the following effect depending on its Type: Warrior-Type, If you controll a monster who has their orriginal Type that monster can attack the opponet directly. Fairy-Type, Any monster ypu controll that is being treated as a Fairy-Type that monster can destroy a monster with this cards effect without aplying damage calculation. Nither of these effects apply to this monster.

The Rising monsters are actualy suposed to be red. But do you understand/are there any questions?