Spirit of DMG Posted September 6, 2012 Report Share Posted September 6, 2012 Wait, other account? Isn't that... Anyway, hey, didn't you say you were planning to make some kind of book into a card for this RP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted September 6, 2012 Report Share Posted September 6, 2012 [quote name='Nmbr101:DonovynMikaraGerra' timestamp='1346972898' post='6020466'] Wait, other account? Isn't that... Anyway, hey, didn't you say you were planning to make some kind of book into a card for this RP? [/quote] Awkwardness happened, that is all I am saying. And Apologies were made. Lots of them. Anyway, yes. I should probably get on with that. I've got a couple of cards to due, as I've realised that most of the monsters in this deck will be custom, and a lot of the support as well. ¬_¬ Dammit, I've not thought about this at all. [quote name='KneeSocks' timestamp='1346972831' post='6020465'] *Restrains self, and smiles* I'm saying I'm an experienced roleplayer, not to get special treatment, if thats the way you feel I'm trying to make out... I'm just explaining I could runa Horocarthy deck and I could be trusted not to abuse it, where as a less experienced player would abuse it. [/quote] Merely stating that you seem to be trying to use your apparent experience in RPing to get away with using what (in my opinion) is a broken card. I may have merely 'received the wrong vibes', and I'm sorry if I did. Please dont let this escalate into a full blown argument. We should not incur the wrath of the Lord Rinne. You have been accepted, and I will accept that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted September 6, 2012 Report Share Posted September 6, 2012 Da... Who were you before? You seem simaler to someone... and you know yeah Rinne can be cruel some times... tho that was when rinne was new to bein a mod x3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted September 6, 2012 Report Share Posted September 6, 2012 Magnet Soldier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted September 6, 2012 Report Share Posted September 6, 2012 Rinnie is still inexperienced in theatrics. Still believes that Role [b]Plays[/b] need to be written as a book rather than as a script for characters to follow. =P Weird: Alpha, Beta, or Gamma? And how many times did you make Valkyrion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 I have never seen Rinne do anything cruel or unfair. He is generally just in his decisions, and our constant off-topicness will set him upon us. Also, RPs generally should be a mix, preferably more of a story. It is a shared story displayed from numerous perspectives. A script is much less detailed and would fail to bring across the sense of realism and escapism at the same time. It needs to be told as a great story. And it's not Roleplay, really. That's short for Roleplaying. As in, we each play some roles. These sort of things originate from word-based RPGs.[quote name='Nmbr101:DonovynMikaraGerra' timestamp='1346975748' post='6020492'] Rinnie is still inexperienced in theatrics. Still believes that Role [b]Plays[/b] need to be written as a book rather than as a script for characters to follow. =P Weird: Alpha, Beta, or Gamma? And how many times did you make Valkyrion? [/quote] ???? No, I was Magnet Soldier, not warrior. I had intended to make a deck surrounding them when I started the forums in early 2009. Kinda failed, and I had the name. It sounded decent and was unique, so I kept it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 Username: KneeSocks Name: Jeanne De'launce Age: 17 Gender: F Sexuality: Hetero Appearance: (I’d REALLY like all of you to use an actual image. Make sure that it’s anime-style.) Bio: Jeanne was born in to a Catholic family, her family just so happens to be from a long line of templars. Ever since she was a child Jeanne was force fed information from and of the bible, and of worse, thoughts she was implanted with were heavily Templar Ideals. So she grew up learning that anybody that was not of god, was a heathen and needed to be "Saved". The worse of all things, she learned was the Worship of other religions, especialy ones that denied the prospect of one true god. or the savior being jesus christ. Of most things she learned about yugioh and how people fawned over the cards. so she went to the World tourny, in a chance to eraddicate the game, and "Save" people form their obsessions. Tho she defied her father to do so, she took the sin apon her.... as no one human ever has a pure heart. Personality: Jeanne has a stoic personality, Shes very cold to every one, she completely shuts down any boy that comes to her. Shes had no experience with boys becaous of her up bringing, and is prone to getting violent tward persistant boys, even drawing her sword on them. But this is truely a cover becaous of her emberasment over being shy tward boys. Faction: Templars Immortal: God Deck: Justice [Spoiler=Justice][img]http://i.imgur.com/gZXsB.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/eTU7t.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/fzpzC.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/jMh1K.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/2ialG.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/nIS0r.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/1C0M6.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/sSyLF.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/KTB4h.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/yFp0V.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/FXyTd.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/KXrUT.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/gipE5.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/4T9pY.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/yFNTY.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/tf3ne.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/1CgSd.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 Hmm, interesting. Uhhh... I see you are a really big supporter of Christ, there, Onee-Sama. Aside from that... I'll Let Echo deal with further details. EDIT: Actually, I will go one detail further. Your spoiler... kinda failed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 How I fix it D: And thats just the way the character is lol. would be funny if your character was still a witch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a bad post Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 Well the last spoiler is spelled wrong, and I'm pretty sure the first spoiler has to go above the cards. @Echo then I'm taking the Chaos for my maidservant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 Lol.... Justice is white never came out..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 [quote name='KneeSocks' timestamp='1346981159' post='6020526'] How I fix it D: And thats just the way the character is lol. would be funny if your character was still a witch [/quote] Hmmm... This can be arranged. Echo, put that Edit into my app? Just post the detail at the beginning of the Bio? (Would make more sense just for you to edit that in in the OP than to re-post my app. It's one sentence.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 Herm, Well thoughts people?/ I have the Sins. I want opinions before I add them a fiew I hastily put together but I think their costed properly. [spoiler=The Seven Sins of Justice][img]http://i.imgur.com/jGbe3.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/ZMG6V.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/D7kin.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/ilzOD.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/qTJBM.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/gKYFl.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/x6wfS.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 Thanks to my honey I decided to update Jaine's evil appearance to something more fitting of her seductive persona, also, I don't feel Jaine would be a good Cultist leader, but if the RP master would like I could work something up for the leader, only if he wants to though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 Can you guess who's who?Can you guess who's who? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 1) Didn't I get scolded by half of YCM when I made a card with "Panty" as part of the name? 2) My only complaint is Lucien's effect. While taking damage for each discarded card balances it fairly well, I think having a 3 card minimum would be good. You do have to banish 10 Justice monsters from the Grave just to get him out, so maybe I'm just being nit-picky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a bad post Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 [quote name='Nmbr101:DonovynMikaraGerra' timestamp='1346984027' post='6020548'] 1) Didn't I get scolded by half of YCM when I made a card with "Panty" as part of the name? 2) My only complaint is Lucien's effect. While taking damage for each discarded card balances it fairly well, I think having a 3 card minimum would be good. You do have to banish 10 Justice monsters from the Grave just to get him out, so maybe I'm just being nit-picky. [/quote] Donovyn she's a girl though she can make a card with Panty in it. Why are these cards being made though, I'm so confused also I read her app, but I don't get your second cahracter's role who is she? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 I think these cards are going into her deck. She's using a mostly (If not all) custom deck, and these are some of the cards. I think. Onee-Sama, is this correct? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 Shes a Random duelist... and yes but pantu is her name DMG. and their being made becaous if yu read I said I wana add those but wanted opinion first. and DMG lol it takes 10 to get out so yeah lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 Lol, you remember that Set, right? The only complete Set I ever... completed? ... [sub][size=1]I can't believe my Tearful Archetype didn't get any support. I worked hard on that. [/size][/sub][size=3]Anyway, that's not important in any way. What is important is that these seem to be balanced, and that I would like to see this deck in action. [s]That, and this tournament needs more muffins.[/s][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 Okay fine I'll do some commenting. [spoiler:Sins] [u]Sins[/u] Baal: Broken, one sac 3300 atk creature...nothing is balanced about that while saying he can't attack directly is a funny way of trying to balance that, it doesn't. It just promotes the random appearance of skill drain. Stock: so at the very least the cards base ATK is 3100 I guess being on the field somewhat balances it out. Panty: That should probably be reworded to say banish all "other" monsters you control because as it stands she banishes herself. Azara: Surprisingly not bad at all. [/spoiler] [spoiler:Justice] [u]Justice[/u] Chi: I don't understand how it has a trial it doesn't have to do anything? All it has to do is change to a fairy and then its all of a sudden useful. So why not just make it a fairy and save some lines of text. Balth: I'm not really a fan of midget swarm especially so blatant, but I guess a small +1 isn't too bad. Omega: So a monster gets destroyed and you can summon [s]Alcadias[/s] Divinity from your deck, yep for that one reason alone it is broken. In short there should be a level cap on it. Swift: So summon any midget Justice and drop Divinity for free. I think the problem is pretty clear here. Queen[sup]1[/sup]: I can make divinity swing directly...well that isn't to bad actually. Divinity[sup]2[/sup]: Can't read all of it I could somewhat make out that the monster are the swarming angel things but that's about it. Black[sup]3[/sup]: If exiled is the same as banished then this thing is broken, it just perpetually gains attack points over and over. UNLESS: the second effect about gaining a monsters attack was meant to be used when it is only treated as a fiend. Broken Justice: How apropo, a field nuke that summons a beater being named "Broken." [sup][size=4]*[/size][/sup][size=4]:[/size]Okay it took me a minute to figure it out but they're a new gimmick for the game...though they really read like fusion monsters with effects (in fact all of them could just be effect monsters) but I guess there was no other template to choose from and why go through the extra work to design your own. It makes sense when I think about it...somewhat. [/spoiler] @Echo: Thank you for accepting my card. There is no cost simply because his effect doesn't really warrant one in my opinion. His effect only happens when he is summoned so it really goes off once. Not much can be abuse with it lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a bad post Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 @Beginning: I was reading your reveiw her exiled is supposed to be a "higher" for of banished, and can't come back from being exiled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 The whole set reads very MTG-esk but I can't knock creativity I guess. My next review (probably some form of edit in this post) will be about the Inferno set and the remaining Titans. @Echo: I don't care what level you get back I just don't want it to be from the deck. You can fish any Beast ...etc from the Hand or grave its just the deck I want free from the effect [spoiler:Inferno] [u]Inferno[/u] DragoLv2/Lv12: Oh I see why you thought this was something to be concerned about. Its not, unfortunately Yu-Gi-Oh isn't like Cardfight Vanguard where you can still resolve effects while you've lost the game. The second your lifepoints hit zero you've automatically lost so 2 would never go to 12 because you killed yourself at 2. C.O.D.E: So +2 to your graveyard to give your opponent a -1. Sounds sketchy to me but its not overtly broken. Prodigy: Besides the fact that you never say where you add the card to (I am assuming your hand) this thing is broken. Its a 1900 FIRE searcher who's trial is to just hit the field. The only thing that could have been worse is if you made it 200 DEF. True Justice: Unless I missed the mechanics of Ascending this is pretty instantaneous thanks to the brokenness of Prodigy which is okay since the effect is really a selfish Jurrac Giganto. Hearts: Okay...I like poetry Hiita: This is rude, you took [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Laval_Volcano_Handmaiden"]Laval Handmaiden's[/url] effect and gave it to another monster and its a level 3 no doubt so perfect with Xyz shenanigans. Broke Summoner: Junk Synchron on steriods, I actually I don't mind it that much, the fact that it combos with the broken Hiita is truly the problem. Javelin: That should be a counter-trap so it can be used in the damage step. [/spoiler] Aphrodite: The effect and stats are fine, but is it really meant to be synchro summoned with ONLY two monsters? That and you don't need to put attribute it would read 1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 LIGHT non-Tuner monster. Poseidon: Okay the stats and effect of that thing are over the top and broken (this is not joke), its just plus after plus or nuke the field. The ONLY reason why I can't fully speak against it is because 3 level 3's is [s]hard to make with existing cards[/s]. Scratch that I forgot that Atlanteans have a Legendary Ocean. So the attack needs to drop by 600 (which still makes its an overpowered Bahumut target), the first effect should only grant you one of those great things, and well the second is fine I think its more based on mythology anyway. Hades: That is oddly great, well done best Olympian so far. That field card however just screams Malefics lol Hephaestus: Its not broken and its clearly theatrical enough for an RP so yay. Don't know how practical it is though Zeus: Big fairy beatsticks...I miss that deck of mine I should use it more often. But yeah a giant beatstick is a giant beatstick nothing much to say about it lol. Prometheus: I can't seem to find the nerfed win condition but it doesn't change the root problem. He's still a win condition, so if there are 28 steps for him to work then he really says: do these 28 things and you win. Second the point of saying we can magically have anything we want to stop you is pretty much negated by the fact that on that same line of thought you could do anything you wanted to stop us from stopping you. Rhea: That sounds fun for a 4000 LP duel, its not broken at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
True Silent Echo Posted September 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 @KneeSocks: That sounds like a cool summoning idea :) I don't have any problem with you using it. Like Number101, I can't wait to see it in action. On a more personal note, I'm a tad uncomfortable with your second character. I happen to believe in the Bible, so it bothers me when people make what I believe in out to be judgemental or hateful. Really though, that's just how I feel. I'm not going to deny acceptance or anything, though I'd take it as a personal favour if you would keep any possible insults to a minimum ^^" @Lord JZ: Sorry, I wasn't trying to force that role upon you ^^" I originally thought that you had wanted it. If you don't, that's totally fine :) @Beginning: I guess I can do that. Thing is, all of the level 4 or lowers I'd be using have a maximum of 1800 ATK, and for the most part can only activate their effects when special summoned by another Bestia monster. However, I guess it doesn't matter [i]that [/i]much, seeing as how the point of that summoning effect wasn't so much to get a card from the deck as to start a Bestia chain (or whatever you would call it). Speaking of which, I'd love it if some of you would be willing to critic my cards :3 Anyone have suggestions on how to improve or balance them if need be? [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/288321-bestia-arch-type/"]http://forum.yugiohc...stia-arch-type/[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 I could still do it, but I would also possibly like to make a second character since I see you accepted Ascend summons (which my honey isn't giving me credit for making.....*eyetwitch*) but I'll do that later, I have to get to work, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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