shinigami23 Posted September 3, 2012 Report Share Posted September 3, 2012 9/3/12 - Posted first cards. 9/4/12 - Added new Dark Order cards and included the revisions. More coming later, probably Rebel and Rebellion. [img]http://i.imgur.com/aJe8p.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/zowqg.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/dJLhL.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/KTTMh.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/GCF7h.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/MwHej.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/GrNro.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/JLh2g.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/T2nFY.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/jLvzO.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/r9Moi.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/ReNVn.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/LeI1K.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/XHosR.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted September 3, 2012 Report Share Posted September 3, 2012 2000 LP might make it seem balanced, but when you have a card with 2700 ATK and a card with 3600, it's not. I'm not saying raise the LP cost, but maybe nerf the ATK and the ATK boost some more.It's really destructive. Also, just some advice, most people on here don't like normals. Most of them, myself included, will tell you that they don't require any creativity. They only time they're useful is when you make lots of support cards for it. Also on creativity, the effects of S and Jounichi just kinda go for each other. I'd say add some more effects in those two. But really, not bad for first cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shinigami23 Posted September 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2012 Revised cards [img]http://i.imgur.com/TMnZ3.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/6Cmq8.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/lXXwv.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted September 4, 2012 Report Share Posted September 4, 2012 Better. OCG isn't bad either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wightpower Posted September 4, 2012 Report Share Posted September 4, 2012 I think your idea works better with the new revisions. Rebel Soldiers get to buff each other and gain power from other Rebellion cards, and with your changes, S and Jounichi seem a lot more balanced. I don't really see anything wrong with the Blazing Angel or Tenebris Nomen. Are you sure you don't want Jounichi to have Rebel or Rebellion in his name? Sure, it would defeat his ability to get S on the field, but Special Summoning a 2900 ATK monster isn't a bad backup plan. Besides, if you wanted to craft a narrative out of this, players might want to know what makes this Dark Order different than the rest of the Rebellion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shinigami23 Posted September 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2012 Well I've been writing a story and just recently got back into Yu Gi Oh and with it yugioh card maker. I thought, "Why not use the characters and archetypes from my story to make some cards?" and thus the "Rebellion" and "Dark Order" cards were born. I'm going to be posting more cards soon that should show how the two are different. Thanks for the feed back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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