Renji's Redlocke[Fire Red Nuzlocke](PG-13)

[CMRenji]

So dis is my Nuzlocke. I plan to update it as often as possible.

If I'm breaking any rules, please tell me, cuz I'm new to this section.

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[spoiler=Chapter 1: Adventure get]
It's a quiet day in Pallet Town, and outside of Professor Oak's lab stood a sole trainer. He stood silently for a moment, then slowly stepped up to the Professor's door. His eyes gleamed with the thoughts of adventure.

"WOAAAAAAOAOAH, I'm here for my Pokemon old dude!" The trainer yelled.

"Why hello there little person, did you come to fetch me my parcel?" Oak proclaimed.

"No way, I'm here for my Pokemon!"

"Oh... well I REALLY need that parcel. It's important... there's stuff in it..."

"Fine, fine. But I want my Pokemon first!"

"Very well… um... what was your name again? And your gender? Also, who am I… and why are we all here?"

"Renji, Male, Professor Oak, and I'm not a damn philosopher."

"Ah, I understand completely. You may now choose a Pokemon, Male."

Renji didn't hesitate choosing the Fire Starter, Charmander.

[i][color=#ff8c00]~Cynder joined the party! / Lax / [/color][color=#ff0000]Female[/color][color=#ff0000]~[/color][/i]

Cynder gave a loving look towards her new friend and master. "Hello master. I hope we will be the best of friends on our journey." Cynder couldn't help but be adorable.

"Cynder, call me Renji." He started heading out the door with her. "It's you and me Cynder! Nothing can-"

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A**hole Rival, entered stage right

"It appears that your journey has met an early grave, Renji! I've chosen Squirtle, and there's not a damn thing-"

"Oh that's right! His name was 'Prick'!" Oak shouted.

Prick stood in awe for a moment. "...Squirtle... don't even leave a body."


[b][size=5]Renji VS Rival Prick![/size][/b]


Prick yelled with burning passion. "Squirtle, use Water Gun!"

"Bro, listen, I know what I do, aight?" Squirtle rushed towards Cynder with a rather weak Tackle.

"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?"

Cynder brushed it off easily, and spewed a small flame from her mouth. "Come at me bro."

The two began a melee of Scratches and Tackles.

Prick yelled at the top of his lungs. "Squirtle, Taaaackle!"

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Renji looked on to see Cynder, who was barely hanging in. "Cynder!"

She got back up, health in red, and looked Squirtle dead in the eyes.

"I hope you enjoyed that... because that's the last time you'll ever be that close to victory again!"

She jolted towards Squirtle, and finished him with one swift Scratch.


After the battle, Renji and Cynder, both somehow wearing shades, proclaimed "GG" to Prick and his Squirtle.

"That battle was glorious, stupendous, outrageous!" Oak handed Renji a knife as he said this. "Now, off you go to get my parcel. And no cops!" He said with an eerie smile on his face.

The camera panned to Prick, who was devastated after his loss. He stared into space, his eyes filled with a burning rage.
[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Chapter 2: Every Rattata has its Day]
Renji now had to cross the perilous environ of Route 1 in order to collect oak's parcel and truly begin his journey.

"You heard the voice, Cynder! Let's continue onward!"

"Yes, Renji. But I don't really believe this place is all that perilous though."

"Cynder, this place is filled with rats! Rats and birds! What could even be more danger- ASDFGH- HOLY F*CK, LEDGE!"

Renji, using his cunning wits, managed to discover a way past the menacing ledge. Then, he and Cynder began to tear through any Pokemon they happened to encounter in the area.

"Renji, aren't we supposed to befriend the first Pokemon in each route?" Cynder questioned.

"Sorry Cynder, but we can't start until we get some Pokeballs. Until that moment, it's all out melee." Renji said as he put his war face on.

After a few moments, they had made it through the route and made it to Viridian City. Renji walked past the market to see if he could make it to Viridian Forest, but an obstacle in the shape of an old man blocked his path. The old man began sleep talking.

"Weedle.. I always capture you.... but imagine if it were the other way around, Weedle. You could capture me, Weedle... and teach all the Weedle trainers how to catch us.. That would be so nifty, huh Weedle?" He let out a large snore.

"I don't like old people." Renji said looking at the old man.

Ignoring the old man, he headed back to the market. But before he entered he noticed a parcel on the ground beside the door.

"Oh, guess this is it."

Renji looked on the back to see the words "Leave the money under the rock" written in sharpie.

"...Oak is wierd." Renji stated before heading back to deliver the parcel.

Renji bursted through the door and gave Oak the parcel. "Here ya go old man, now, am I done being a chore boy?"

Oak handed Renji a Pokedex and 5 Pokeballs. "Oh on the contrary, you're just getting started Male."

"I REALLY don't like old people." Renji said as he walked off into the grasses of Route 1.

"Aight Cynder, this is a big moment for us. We're gonna catch our very first Pokemon!" As Renji said this, a rather unkempt Rattata appeared before them.

"Oh... yeah.. Rattata." Renji said a bit uneasy.

With a few swift battle tactics, Rattata was caught.

[i][color=#800080]~J the Rattata joined the party! / Hasty /[/color] [color=#0000ff]Male~[/color][/i]

Renji let J out his Pokeball.

"Alright J, you are a Rattata. Just.. sit back, dude."

"Hmmph, whatever. I didn't feel like being a battling Pokemon anyway." J muttered.

Cynder walked beside J. "It's okay J, he just needs to get to know you is all. We can all be great friends." Cynder said before walking off.

J just stood silently for a minute, then continued walking with the others.

They continued on into Viridian City, then swiftly headed left into Route 22 to dodge the old geezer.

[i][color=#daa520]~Sano the Mankey joined the party! / Modest / [/color][color=#0000ff]Male~[/color][/i]

"Aww yeah, less get you some levels Sano!" Renji exclaimed.

"As you wish, sensei." Sado replied.

"Okay Sano, beat the hell outta these chumps!"

With many swift Scratches, Sano was quickly leveling up.

"A Rattata? Sano, beat him ass."

The wild Rattata lunged forward with an exceptionally strong tackle.

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Renji gasped as Sano fell. "I... Sano, I- I didn't mean for it to.. I.."

"It's okay sensei, worrying about one solider will only bring the group down. It was nice knowing you."

[u][b]Sano fainted, Lv 3-4[/b][/u]

"..." Renji took a deep breath. "Guys.. let's grind... Sano would want that.."

Cynder nodded in agreement.

"I thought I wasn't WANTED in your battles." J proclaimed.

"J, look I'm sorry for what I said. But I need a tough team, and I know you can help with that. So, are you willing to?"

J nodded in response.

After some intense grinding, the group wandered back to Route 22.

"Aight guys, this spot looks good for more grind-"

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"Fml sideways.." Renji groaned.

"Well well Renji, we meet again! But this time, I'm more prepared. Look, I even caught a Pidgey!"

Prick's Pidgey began running around in circles after its tail, believing it was a worm.

"Looks like Pokemon and trainers ARE very alike." Renji said with a smirk.

"I'd like to see you act all smug after I wipe the floor with you." Prick retorted.


[size=5][b]Renji VS Rival Prick![/b][/size]


"Pidgey, beat his Rattata up and throw sand in his wounds!" Prick shouted.

The Pidgey hit J after flailing about a bit.

"J, show him what's up! Quick Attack!"

J moved as fast as a bullet, easily taking down Prick's Pidgey.

"Next." Renji said with a slightly trollish smile.

"Squirtle, let's show 'em that we aren't slouches. Now, Water-"

Squirtle tackled J with all his might, leaving J wounded but not out.

"...What the hell, man?! You actually KNOW it this time!"

Squirtle crossed his arms as if he were trying to be cool. "Yo bro, chill. Imma tactical genius, bro. Everything is goin' all according to-"

J jolted himself into Squirtle at lightning speed to take him out.

"Aww no, bro..." Squirtle mumbled as he fell.

Renji looked at Cynder. "Um.. Cynder... was Squirtle-"

"Dropped on his head when he was young? Yes. Multiple times in fact." Cynder responded.

Prick called back all his Pokemon.

"You've won this battle, Renji, but the war still rages on! So smell you later loser, I'm gonna race my way to the Indigo League!" Prick ran off, keeping his confidence intact.

"He lives up to his name." Cynder said, laughing.

"No doubt." Renji turned twoards J. "I really shouldn't have doubted you J, you were awesome back there."

J let out a chuckle. "S'what I do, Renji."

"Now, on to Viridian Forest!" Renji exclaimed.

Renji stood still, prepared to lunge at a moment's notice. "GOGOGO!" He yelled at his Pokemon as they jolted past the old man.

"Hey, don't you wanna know how to cathc Pokemon?!" The old man yelled.

Renji searched through some tall grass until he spotted a Caterpie.

"Okay Caterpie.. be good and get in the ball, sweetie."

"Do you think I'm a moron? I won't just join you like that, I'm not like all these other idiotic bugs."

Renji looked up to see two Kakuna swinging and smashing into eachother.

"LET'S- OW- BECOME- OW- BEEDRILLS- OW!" The two Kakuna shouted as they collided.

"Yep, I understand." Renji stated. "Aight then, J tackle!" J tackled the Caterpie with enough power to leave Caterpie with half its strength. "Now, go Pokeball!"

*One shake... two... three*

[i][color=#008000]~Megan the Caterpie joined the party! / Quiet / [/color][color=#ff0000]Female~[/color][/i]

"Well, you caught me fair and square. Let's just go on and do this whole 'adventure' thing."

Renji looked at Megan with a smile on his face. "Awesome to hear you're in the zone, Megan." Renji turned to everyone in the party. "Now guys, it's GRINDIN' TIME!"

After some intense grinding, Megan had evolved twice and become a Butterfree.

"Well, don't I look radiant?" She said gleefully.

"You sure do, Megan." He turned his attention back to a nearby Weedle. "Okay, now Ember, Cynder!"

Cynder fried the garden variety Weedle with one flame. Then, she began glowing.

Renji just stared as she slowly changed into a Charmeleon.

"So, do I look good as well?" Cynder asked with a smile.

"You look amazing, Cynder." Renji said with a warm smile. "Now, let's all head to Pewter for some healing. Then, we'll challenge Brock!"

After getting everyone healed up and fed, Renji faced the Pewter City Gym.

"Alright guys, hangs, claws, paws and..."

"Just say 'hands'." Megan said.

"All of our forelimbs in!" The group put their hands, claws, etc. together. "Victory!" They all shouted.

Renji opened the door and glared into Brock's..... eyelids..

A child jumped in front of Renji to try and stop him. "HA, you WISH you could take on Brock! You're light-years away from-"

The trainer's Geodude and Sandshrew lied on the floor with claw marks on their faces.

"Let's go Brock!" Renji shouted.

"Alright then, let's rock and r-"

"Please, I beg of you, don't start this sh*t."


[size=5][b]Renji VS Gym Leader Brock![/b][/size]


"Go, Cynder!"

"Geodude, you're up!"

"Now Cynder, Metal Claw this bish!"

Cynder's claws glowed white as she charged Geodude. She clawed him with enough force to send him flying across the room.

"Geodude, don't go down that easy! Let's see some tackling action!"

"DUUUUDE!" Geodude shouted as he tackled Cynder. He barely left a scratch. "D- dude?"

Cynder backhanded Geodude into the nearest wall with her Metal Claw, casing him to faint.

"Hmm.. you're a tough one indeed. I have to pull out the big guns now. Go, Onix!"

Onix let out an earth shaking roar as it entered the battle.

"Oh... oh no... I... I don't know if you can take his Onix, Cynder. At least, not now."

J walked in front of Cynder to oppose Onix. "Renji, call her back."

Renji and Cynder both looked shocked by J's statement.

"Cynder, return." Renji said. "But... what do you plan to do J? None of your attacks will do much damage to that monstrosity."

J shook his tail with excitement.

"..." Renji and J locked eyes for a moment, until they both nodded.

"J, use Tail Whip!"

J whipped his tail in Onix's face, lowering its massive defense.

"Please, your attacks won't do anything even IF his defense is lower. Onix, use Rock Tomb!"

Onix let out an intimidating roar as rocks fell from above and onto J.

"J!" Renji yelled.

"Again!" J shouted to Renji.

".....J, Tail Whip!"

J whipped his tail at Onix yet again.

"You must have learned that your little tactic won't work. Onix, Rock Tomb again!"

J was again pummeled by huge rocks, barely hanging on. "Renji..."

"J, ret-"

"Renji, we both know that Megan can't take a Rock Tomb on the switch in. And I doubt either of us would want to risk Cynder being hit by it."

Renji and J locked eyes yet again. Renji gripped his fist as tighgtly as he could, holding back tears. "J... use Quick Attack..."

J launched himself at Onix and managed to take off a scrap of health.

Cynder's pokeball began to shake, as she managed to break free from it.

"Ahh! Cynder!"

"Renji please, he can't die! Not for me! No one needs to do this... for my sake."

"I don't just need to, Cynder." J thought back to the moment where they first met, when Cynder gave him comfort. "I want to."

With one more Rock Tomb, J was completely crushed.

"J!" Both Renji and Cynder shouted.

"It's okay... after all, I died doing what I love."

[u][b]J fainted, Lv 2-10[/b][/u]

"You... you..." Cynder's eyes turned ablaze as she rushed Onix. "DON'T YOU EVER HURT MY FRIENDS AGAIN!"

"Onix, keep it together! Rock Tomb!"

Onix sent out a baragge of rocks towards Cynder. She endured the pain and lunged towards Onix again. With one swift swipe, Onix fell.

"Well trainer, you've bested me. Take the Boulderbadge and this TM as your prize."

Renji grabbed the badge and exited the gym, Cynder by his side. He sat on the ground. Cynder ran over to him and hugged him as tightly as she could.

"We'll remember you, J." Renji said in a solemn tone.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Chapter 3: Journey to Cerulean]
Renji and the group was heading east from Pewter City, trying to make their way to Mt. Moon.

Renji looked over at Cynder who was still upset over J's death. "Cynder, I'm sorry to say that things are how they are. But we can keep fighting, we can keep ourselves strong. That's what J would have wanted. It's very likely we could lose more friends on this journey, but we just need to keep their spirits strong and stay on the path to victory!"

Cynder silently nodded as they walked.

"Now, let's head on to Mt. Moon! We'll be sure to find some new allis on our way!" Renji exclaimed.

"HOLD UP KIDDO!" A man in a lab coat shouted just as the group made their way to Route 4.

Renji turned to him. "Uumm... yeah?"

"ARE YOU TIRED OF WALKING? WANNA KISS YOUR OLD, TIRED SOES GOODBYE? WELL I'VE GO THE SOLUTION FOR YOU; MOM BRAND RUNNING SHOES!"

"How did you get my shoes?!"

"STOLE 'EM RIGHT OUTTA YOUR BACKPACK WHEN YOU WEREN'T LOOKING! NOW, SHOES LIKE THESE COULD COST YOU UP TO 199, 299, EVEN 399 POKEDOLLARS! BUT TODAY YOU CAN GET THEM FOR 3 EASY PAYMENTS OF 19.99 POKEDOLLARS! PLUS, IF YOU ORDER NOW, YOU GET A FREE OLD RO-"

As the clearly deranged man was yelling, Megan used Confusion to scramble his brains. This caused him to fall over and drop the shoes.

"You're welcome." Megan said in a somewhat arrogant tone.

Renji grabbed his shoes and headed down Route 3. After encountering some hikers, bug weirdos, and a child with a shorts fetish, Renji had finally made it to the entrance of Mt. Moon.

"Well, that was a nice training session, wouldn't you guys say so?" Renji proclaimed happily.

"My shorts..." A voice echoed in the distance.

"Oh look guys, a Spearow!"

"Shaaa, how's it goin'?" The female Spearow said in a breathy tone.

"How would you like to join us on our journey?" Renji questioned.

"Sure, like, whatever." She replied, uncaring.

[i][color=#cc6666]~Beverly joined the party / Quiet /[/color] [color=#ff0000]Female~[/color][/i]

After a bit of grinding, the group headed into the unknown.

"Oh jeez, it's a Zubat!"

Megan groaned. "Are you really gonna waste a Pokeball on that thing?"

"I've learned not to doubt Pokemon just because they seem weak." Renji tossed a Pokeball and caught the Zubat rather quickly.

[i][color=#0000cd]~Grimmjow joined the party / Mild / [/color][color=#0000ff]Male~[/color][/i]

Renji was full of confidence. "I'm sure Grimmjow will be a valuable-"

"HSSSSKACHEEEEE!" Grimmjow screeched as he flew around the cave, bashing himself into walls and various other Zubats.

"...I can totally work with this." Renji said less confidently.

After some more trainer battles and several thousand Zubats, Renji and the group had run into some unexpected opposition.

"Ey Tony, what say we start da boss's evil operation?" A man in all black said, grinning.

"Ya darn right we's gonna. First we capture all of the Zubats here, then use some for fighting and some for eating." His ally replied.

The group stared blankly at the men.

"Then, we steal these fossils!"

The entire group gasped.

"THOSE B*STARDS!" Renji proclaimed.

"Heechekyakeke.." Grimmjow screeched frightened.

"Hey, a kid! Ey, let's use our Pokemon to beat 'im up!" One of the men yelled.

The two men then began throwing Rattatas and Zubats at the group.

Cynder charred anything that got in her path.

Megan scrambled their weak minds.

Beverly pecked and tackled her way through them.

Grimmjow was being a Zubat.

"Impossible! 'Ow could a 'lil punk like this take down us proffesional Rocket members?!"

"You're from Team Rocket?" Renji asked.

"Ay, Tony! We wasn't supposed to say nuthin about that! Why don't you tell 'im bout our secret base in Celadon while you're at it?!"

"...Maybe we should leave now, eh?"

The two Rocket grunts ran into off into the darkness of Mt. Moon.

"Yep. Total. F*cking. Proffesionals." Megan said.

Renji was nearly out of the huge labyrinth, until he ran into a nerd.

"Hey, can I examine your Spearow? She looks ever so intruiging." The nerd said with a nerdy smile.

"Hang on guys... I like, totes got this." Beverly said as she flew behind the nerd. She grabbed the back of his undies and gave him a terrible wedgie.

"OWOWOW THE PAAAIN!"

"Bullying isn't cool, Beverly." Renji scolded.

"He was like, coming on to me; Me and my hawt bod. I had to defend myself; Myself and my hawt bod." She explained.

"Beverly, I understand completely. And by that I mean I don't. Now, let's just all get out of this h*llhole of a cave."

"Shaaa." Beverly sighed.

The team escaped the cave with their collective arses intact.

"SUNLIGHT, GOOD BUDDY, I MISSED YOU!" Renji exclaimed staring directly into the sun.

"Hey buddy! I gotta move for you that you'll love!" A tough looking guy yelled.

"No, mine's better! It's got more power!" A similar looking guy objected.

"Mine's more accurate!"

"Well here's the kicker; Mine is Mega Kick!"

"Well here's the punchline; Mine is Mega Punch!"

"Yours didn't even make sense!"

"There ya go Cynder! Mega Punch!"

"Oh well you can just go straight to hell." The kicking fellow said.

"Aight guys, let's meet our new friend!"

After walking through the grass a bit, Renji encountered an Ekans.

"Thup?" The Ekans hissed.

"Isn't it 'ssssssssup'?" Renji asked.

"I have a lithp."

"A lithp? You know what, doesn't matter. Pokeball. You. Now."

"If you thay tho."

[i][color=#cc66ff]~Mr. Hissy joined the party / Timid / [/color][color=#0000ff]Male~[/color][/i]

After some grinding and relaxation at the Pokemon Center, the guys headed to Nugget Bridge.

"Well I'm just saying Cynder that I'd prefer if they had a French Fry Bridge. I mean, nuggets are nice and all, but-"

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"You know, I used to hate him. But now it's turned into deep loathing."

"Renji, Renji, Renji. It's so cute how you attempt to keep up with all THIS." Prick said pointing at himself.

"Oh sorry, I'll try and slow down." Renji retorted.

"Oh Renji, you're SO funny."

"Look, there's a chicken nugget on the other side of that bridge with my name on it. We can do this the easy way, or Cynder's way."


[size=6][b][size=5]Renji VS Rival Prick![/size][/b][/size]


"Go, Pidgeotto!" Prick shouted.

"Pidg- Pidg- Pidg-" His Pidgeotto screeched whilst chasing its own tail.

"Cynder, do it."

Cynder spewed fire at the stupid turkey, easily roasting it.

"I haven't even BEGUN to fight!" Prick said tossing Rattata out.

"Cynder, Mega Punch!" Renji commanded.

Her claw became a shimmering white as she punched Rattata into unconscienceness.

"...COME ON GUYS!" Prick sighed. "It's fine, I have Abra."

".....Go Grimmjow."

"A LOW LEVEL POISON TYPE AGAINST MY PSYCHIC TYPE? WOW, YOU ARE A NOO-"

Abra began teleporting in place as Grimmjow Leech Life'd him super effectively.

".....You're still a total noob..."

After 3 of his Pokemon had fallen, Prick sent out his ultimate weapon: Squirtle.

"Dude, Imma totally put the hurt on this guy, ya know?" Squirtle proclaimed arrogantly. "Imma tactical genius."

"Ahaha, ahaha, hahahahaha, aha, no." Megan stood before him ready to battle.

"A bug? Bro, I don't fight weak little insects... and... why is everything yellow?"

Megan had sent out a cloud of stun spore on Squirtle.

"It's fine, I still got- AH, CAN'T MOVE!"

"Megan, Supersonic!"

"Ah, d*mn... I've got a plan." Squirtle punched himself directly in the face.

Megan looked on in shock. "I... but... it missed..."

Cynder, who was standing beside her, explained. "His brain was soft and squishy when he fell on it."

With another Supersonic, Megan began ParaFusing Squirtle.

"OW PARALYZED... OW HIT MYSELF."

Squirtle had been easily defeated by Megan.

"Who's the tactical genius now you little b*tch?" Megan said proudly.

"AHAHAHAHAHAHA! Well that was a nice little warm up for my upcoming battles, but you really should practice more Renji. Smell ya later!" Prick shouted as he walked off.

"Seriously, I don't think anybody would notice if he 'fell' off the bridge." Renji said.

Cynder looked over at Cerulean Gym. "Renji, are you ready?"

"Well, we might wanna train from Nugget Bri-"

"Renji, let's go! I think we're as ready as we'll ever be!"

The rest of the group agreed.

"...Alright then guys, let's go!" Renji yelled to inspire confidence.

After easily taking out the two lackies and they're weak water types, the group stood ready to face Misty.

"Yeah! Come on, let's go! Fight, fight, fight!" Misty screamed.


[size=5][b]Renji VS Leader Misty![/b][/size]


"Megan, go!"

"Let's get this over with."

Misty sent out her Staryu. "FIGHTFIGHTFIGHT! WINWINWIN!"

"Megan, it's PARAFUSE TIME!" Renji yelled donning a troll face.

With a swift Stune Spore and Supersonic, the battle was already won.

"OOOOOOOOOO!" Renji shouted in singsong.

"Fight... fight... KILL!" Misty yelled as she sent out Starmie.

"Ha, we'll just do like before. Megan, Stun Spore!"

Megan sent out a cloud of stun spore onto Starmie, but it didn't hamper it much.

"Starmie, Water Pulse!"

"HYA!" Starmie shouted as it sent out a torrent at Megan.

"Megan!"

"I'm fine... just can't take another hit is all..."

"Okay, hopefully this'll be a safe switch in considering Paralysis. Return Megan, and get 'em Beverly!"

"Shaaa" Beverly sighed as she was sent out.

Starmie barely took notice of its paralysis as it launched another pulse of water towards Beverly.

"BEVERLY!" Renji screamed.

"Sh... sh... shaaa..."

[b][u]Beverly fainted, Lv 6-18[/u][/b]

"N-... no.." Renji was in sorrow over the loss of Beverly, but he had to stay in the battle to keep his other friends alive. "Okay.. I don't know if anyone can tank a Water Pulse right now... who should I send out...?"

"Go, Mr. Hissy!" Renji finally decided.

"Mathter, ith everything okay?" He said with his lisp.

"Mr. Hissy..."

"Water Pulse." Misty said in an ominous tone.

[u][b]Mr. Hissy fainted, Lv 10-10[/b][/u]

"No... I... why?"

Cynder stood in shock, seeing her friends fall before her eyes. "Renji, send me out!"

"Cynder, I can't! Starmie... I know it has enough power to..."

Grimmjow stood before the two, launching himself at Starmie.

"It's... it's just like before..." Cynder remembered J fighting to his last breath in Brock's Gym.

"Water Pulse." Misty said again.

HEEKCHAA..."

[u][b]Grimmjow fainted, Lv 8-9[/b][/u]

"I've got one last idea. It's the only way we can win. Megan... I choose you."

"I heard all the commotion." She looked around the room at her fallen friends. "They're really all..."

"Megan, this is it. If we can pull this off, we'll make it out just fine. Now, Supersonic!"

Megan sent out a beam that confused the already paralyzed Starmie.

"Starmie... Water Pulse." Misty said with a sadistic grin.

"NO, MEGAN!" Renji cried.

"I knew I wasn't cut out for adventuring. Well guys... have a nice journey."

She got hit full blast by Water Pulse.

[u][b]Megan fainted, Lv 5-19[/b][/u]

"...Renji... this is all my fault. We could have trained more... we could have..."

"Cynder." He said grabbing her attention. "That's in the past. The others believed they could do it as well, so don't put so much blame on yourself. We all make mistakes in life, but we have to keep going. Cynder, they believed that we all could do it, so let's do it, for them."

"I... I will fight for my friends. Even the fallen ones." She stood before Starmie focused as ever.

"Starmie Wa-" Before she could finish, Cynder launched forward towards Starmie and back-handed it with Mega Punch.

"ST- STARMIE, FIGHT, WIN! WATER PULSE!" Misty screamed.

Starmie stood still, unable to move due to paralysis.

Misty was shocked. "Wh- What?!"

"Cynder. GO!" Renji yelled.

Cynder launched herself as fast as she could go and punched Starmie dead center, completely smashing its jewel and sending it flying.

"No... NO... I can't lose!" Misty cried.

"You just did." Renji replied, swiping the Cascade Badge from her. Renji then grabbed the bodies of thier friends. "Come on Cynder, let's get out of here."

The two dug some graves just outside of Cerulean and neatly buried their lost allies.

Renji held the Cascade Badge up high. "We earned this... together." Renji said grasping the Cascade badge tightly.[/spoiler]

[Lord English]

If I'm not mistaking, you aren't breaking rules.

This is just beautiful XD [color=#fff0f5]*applaud*[/color]

The grammar and spelling are pretty good, but some tenses are a bit off and some sentences lack punctuation.

"It's a quiet day in Pallet Town, and outside of Professor Oak's lab stood a sole trainer. He stood silently for a moment, then slowly stepped up to the Professor's door. His eyes gleamed with the thoughts of adventure.

"WOAAAAAAOAOAH, I'm here for my Pokemon old dude!" The trainer yelled."

It says 'It's a beautiful day" which is present-tense and goes straight to 'The trainer yelled' which is past-tense.

Other than that, this is pretty good.
Can't wait for more :'D

[CMRenji]

Thanks for all your help, dude. :3

Hmm, I guess I'm not great with tenses, really. I'll try to better that shiz as I continue the story.

[Lord English]

Yet again, pretty good.

From what I can see, you've improved and there isn't any problems with tenses. Some grammar is off, and I'm pretty sure you didn't capitalise correctly in some parts. It was a little weird when they headed to Route 22 and out of nowhere Sano joined the team. I found it a little weird and sounds like some parts were cut off, or maybe it is me. Also, Boulderbadge should be two words.

My favourite part is probably when you stuck with the actual games and made Prick say 'Smell ya later!" XD

[Agro]

All I really can or want to say is...

FEAR THE POWER OF SCRATCH

[CMRenji]

Late reply, but scratch is the best move ever. :3

Mega Punch is incredibly awesome too, as seen in the newest chapter, which I just dun posted~