Because I haven't made a card in a while (Water Xyz)

[Demon From The Void]

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[Demon From The Void]

Bump, I do actually want feedback.

[Love of Ghibli]

I find that this card requires a LOT of things to get so little return. First you have to give up 3 level 4 WATER monsters <-- That's how it should be written btw. Which means you are forgoing Atlantean Mermail spam. Then you have to detach and banish. so essentially you are giving up 4 monsters to get one monsters existing effect. And I can't really think of a monster whose effect warrants all of that support. On the plus side it is a water xyz meaning that you do have a fun target with Bahamut Shark.

[ihop]

This is actually way better than it looks, Coelecanth can grab 4 level 4 WATERs if it wanted to, and then once you go into this you can banish the Coelecanth and swarm even more. My only issue with it is that it's outclassed by cards such as Shock Master, and most people would just want to make 2 Rank 4s like Utopia/Pearl/Maestroke/Roach rather than commit to this. Personally I'd give it an addition effect that detaches 1 material to keep it alive, a bit like Maestroke, and give it more ATK, something like 2400-2600.

EDIT: I didn't notice you banish a monster you CONTROL. Make it banish from the grave instead, that's be way better.

[Mr.WHAM]

If it is so low and so costly, make its range bigger; let it target water monster's in either field or graveyard. Keeping the banishing part allows for usefulness.