(rockhm) Grim Reaper lvl9 monster

[rockhardmoney]

just checking out the site thought this card would be good

[DrunkenSage69]

Well first I would like to say welcome to the YCM community .

Secondly, even though there are a lot of people that like to create Grim Reaper cards, I will treat yours like it was a new idea since I don't mind repeated ideas. However, be more original with card ideas if you would like to continue being an active member.

Now onto your card:[list=1]
[*]This card's OCG (card grammar) needs work. Look at real cards to help you understand how to word card effects properly. Here are my suggestions to fixing your card's OCG as its effect currently stands (changes will be in [b]bold[/b]): [quote][b]This monster cannot be destroyed by battle[/b]. This card can attack your opponent directly. [b]If this card battles a non Fiend-type monster: Increase this card's ATK by 2000.[/b][/quote]
[*]In my opinion, since this card is the Grim Reaper, it wouldn't be best for it to just attack your opponent directly OR attack a monster, so I would scarp the second effect (2nd sentence in my OCG correction).
[*]Preventing it from being destroyed by battle isn't a bad effect as long as you balance out the rest of its effects. So, I would suggest the following changes (again, in bold): [quote]This monster cannot be destroyed by battle [b]from a battle involving a non Fiend-type monster.[/b] If this card battles a non-Fiend type monster: [b]Increase this card's ATK by 2000 during the Damage Step only.[/b][/quote]
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Those are my thoughts on your card and again welcome to YCM. Enjoy your stay .