Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 "daah boss" is a nefarious mastermind with all kinds of dirty tricks. Like any other underworld king pin monster he is at his best when he already winning and when aided by his servants and or allies "the nefarious Sulua-Doi Family" ensures he will keep on winning as they help gives him a unfair advantage. [Spoiler=1st lv 2 effect monster] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/Sulua-DoiEctovvayXMan_zpsda75edfb.jpg[/img] When this card is Normal Summoned: you can draw 1 card. While this card is in ATK Position when any player Summons a monster(s) (except tokens monsters and "Sulua-Doi Ectovvay X man") you can Special Summon 1 "Blindly Faithfull Citizen Token" (Thunder-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in DEF Position. These Tokens cannot be used in a Synchro Summon or Tributed for a Tribute Summon. Once per turn during any player's turn you can tribute 1 face-up "Blindly Faithfull Citizen Token" you control, then your opponent loses 400 Life Points. Once per turn during any player's turn, while this card is Xyz Material attached to a Xyz Monster while your Life Points are lower than your Opponent's Life Points, your opponent lose 300 Life Points. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler= 2nd lv 2 effect monster] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/Sulua-DoiShallesstheHeadHunterMan_zps04f7eba3.jpg[/img] You can Special Summon this card (from your hand), when you control 1 or more face-up Xyz monster with Xyz Material(s) attached to it. When this card is Normal Summoned: you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Sulua-Doi" monster from your Graveyard in DEF Position. Once per turn your opponent lose 300 Life Points. Once per turn during any player's turn, while this card is Xyz Material attached to a Xyz Monster while your Life Points are lower than your Opponent's Life Points, you gain 300 Life Points. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=1st lv 3 effect monster] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/Sulua-DoiHenchgreenryMan_zpsf3d94667.jpg[/img] When this card is Normal Summoned: You can add 1 Level 4 or lower "Sulua-Doi" monster from your Deck to your hand. While you control 1 or more Level 4 "Sulua-Doi" monster, this card gain 1 level. Once per turn your opponent lose 300 Life Points. Once Per Turn, while this card is Xyz Material attached to a Xyz Monster while your Life Points are lower than your Opponent's Life Points, when your Opponent's card's effect would only destroy 1 or more face-up Xyz monsters you control you must pay half of your Life Points to negate that card's effect if you do, destroy that card. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=2nd lv 3 effect monster] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/Sulua-DoiVampsnarricMan_zpscc2b9541.jpg[/img] When this card is Normal Summoned: You gain 300 Life Points. While you control 1 or more Level 4 "Sulua-Doi" monster, this card gain 1 level. Once per turn your opponent lose 300 Life Points. Once per turn during any player's turn, while this card is Xyz Material attached to a Xyz Monster while your Life Points are lower than your Opponent's Life Points, you gain 500 Life Points. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=1st lv 4 effect monster] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/Sulua-DoiAzmilliaMan_zps43b7380d.jpg[/img] You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) while you control no cards. Once per turn your opponent lose 300 Life Points. You can reveal this card in your hand then send it to the Graveyard to add 1 level 4 or lower "Sulua-Doi" monster in your Deck of Graveyard except for "Sulua-Doi Azmillia Man" to your hand. Once per turn during your opponent's turn, while this card is Xyz Material attached to a Xyz Monster while your Life Points are lower than your Opponent's Life Points, when your Opponent's selects a face-up xyz monster you control as an attack target, draw 1 card before the Damage Calculation, [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=2nd lv 4 effect monster] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/Sulua-DoiHenchredryMan_zps2d3a69e1.jpg[/img] When this card is Normal Summoned: You can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower "Sulua-Doi" monster from your hand. Once per turn your opponent lose 300 Life Points. Once per turn during your opponent's turn, while this card is Xyz Material attached to a Xyz Monster while your Life Points are lower than your Opponent's Life Points, when your Opponent's selects a face-up xyz monster you control as an attack target, target the attacking monster it loses 1000 ATK until the end of the Damage Calculation, [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=1st rk 4 xyz effect monster] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/DaahbossVonbadDrozsuis_zps51df8241.jpg[/img] 2 Level 4 "Sulua-Doi" monsters This card can not be destroyed by Battle. Once per turn during any player's Stanby Phase while you have more Life Points than your Opponent, this card gain ATK equal the difference between your Life Points and your Opponent's until the End Phase. Once per turn if this card attacks or is attacked, while you have more Life Points you than your Opponent can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card target this card and the attacking or attack target then you gain Life Points equal to the difference of this card's ATK and the other target's ATK. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=2nd rk 4 xyz effect monster] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/HtimanVenggogerstheSpiteful_zps8476a2da.jpg[/img] 3 Level 4 "Sulua-Doi" monsters This card can not be destroyed by Battle. Once per turn during any player's Stanby Phase while you have more Life Points than your Opponent, this card gain 200 ATK for every face-up Thunder-Type monsters and FIRE monsters you control until the End Phase. During you Main Phase 1 or your Battle Phase You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; until your next Standby Phase, double this card's ATK. You can not Equip sany cards to this card. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=1st spell card] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/Sulua-DoiAgeoftheMage_zpsbd709976.jpg[/img] If you control 2 or more face-up Level 2 "Sulua-Doi" monsters, all face-up Level 2 "Sulua-Doi" monsters you control gain 2 Levels. Twice per turn during your Main Phase 1 you can select 1 of the effects: * you can tribute this face-up card you control to add 1 "Sulua-Doi Age of the Mage" from your Deck to your hand, if you activate "Sulua-Doi Age of the Mage" this turn you lose 800 Life Points. * you can reveal 1 "Sulua-Doi" monster in your hand then you can Normal Summon a "Sulua-Doi" monster in addition to your Normal Summon or Set. (except the card that was revealed with this card effect). *Send 1 Thunder-Type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=2nd spell card] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/Sulua-DoiArtofDegradingtheFamily_zps73e51fbb.jpg[/img] You can send this card in your hand to the Graveyard then Tribute 1 FIRE Thunder-Type monster, Destroy 1 card on the field, and draw 1 card. When this face-up card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Sulua-Doi" monster from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=even more to come] comming to a wireless broadband near you [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/MuscularBeaver_zps1d465840.jpg[/img] [/Spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted September 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2012 roll eyes BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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newhat Posted September 25, 2012 Report Share Posted September 25, 2012 There's an aesthetic problem with these cards. They have too much on them. It's fine if you want to make a complex archetype with minor burn from each monster that eventually powers up your monsters, but is it necessary to have Level 3 monsters that gain a Level? You might make a powerful archetype-specific Rank 3 Xyz, but right now it's just needless complication. The names are also wordy in odd ways ("Vampsnarric"? "Blindly Faithful Citizen Token"?). For the first monster, you had to spend a sentence to let it Tribute a Token during either player's turn for 400 burn; perhaps you could remove the Synchro/Tribute limitations and the Token could just be a Token. For the monsters that work as Xyz Material, it would be reasonable to take out the condition that your Life Points must be lower, and you don't need to mention that it works during either player's turn as it's a Trigger Effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted September 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2012 it focus on having more lp and rank 4 xyz summoning and or swarming for massive beatdown tatics the low burn was attempted for a balancing to help out when losing lp wise or to keep on winning vampsnarric vamp vampire snarric snare as he helps snare lp away as he is a vampire like uuuhhh thing whatever they can not all be gems blindly faithfull citizen token as in an italian citizen who puts his trust in the wrong people which ends up costing him his life goes with the theme synchro tribute limitation removal ? oh god no everytime when any player summons a monster ss 1 token that could be horrible broken and or abusable life lower is part of the life higher than your opponent thing and an attempt to help balance as just focusing on one aspect would weaken the entire thing as soon you start losing or winning the duel all your monster effect would be useless how would you word the effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted September 25, 2012 Report Share Posted September 25, 2012 [quote name='Garthfunkle Vii Backwards' timestamp='1346665540' post='6031625'] life lower is part of the life higher than your opponent thing and an attempt to help balance as just focusing on one aspect would weaken the entire thing as soon you start losing or winning the duel all your monster effect would be useless[/quote] -300 or +500 is -300 or +500 whether you're winning or losing. If you're already winning, increasing the distance between your Life Points and your opponent's will help you avoid dropping too low if you eventually lose Life Points somehow. [quote]how would you word the effects [/quote] I wouldn't; I'd remove some. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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