Amazoness support

[crocruler]

Just some moar Amazoness support.

EDITED

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Activate only during your battle phase when an "Amazoness" monster you control declares an attack or is selected as an attack target. Change one monster your opponent controls to defense position. It's defense becomes 0 until the end of the turn.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/ZQcsK.jpg[/img]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Amazoness monsters
This card is also treated as a Warrior-Type monster. Once per turn: You can return 1 "Amazoness" monster you control to the hand: this turn, this monster's ATK is halved and it can attack your opponent directly.This monster is unaffected by the effects of your opponent's cards while your opponent's Life Points are higher than yours."

[img]http://i.imgur.com/Dawat.jpg[/img]
Activate when an "Amazoness" monster your control destroys an opponent's monster by battle: Increase your Life Points by 800.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/43bB5.jpg[/img]

Each time you draw a card: Look at 1 Set card your opponent controls. A synchro monster summoned with this card cannot be destroyed by Dark monsters.


SPELL CARD THAT IS NOT NECESSARILY SPECIFIC TO "AMAZONESS" MONSTERS
[img]http://i.imgur.com/YyYEx.jpg[/img]
A monster equipped this card gains 1200 ATK points during your battle phase. If a monster equipped with this card is selected as an attack target, you can tribute it to destroy the attacking monster, before damage calculation.

[crocruler]

bump

[TheKaitoKid]

First the OCG Fix, then my commentary:

[b]War Scream[/b]
[b]Lore: [/b][i]When an "Amazoness" monster you control declares an attack: Target 1 Attack Position monster your opponent controls; change that target to Defense Position[/i]

It's a situational Book of Moon. Eh, not good but not bad either.


Taegra, Amazoness Shapeshifter
[b]Lore:[/b]
[i]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters[/i]
[i]This card is also treated as a Warrior-Type monster. Once per turn: You can send 1 "Amazoness" monster you control to the Graveyard: this turn, this monster's ATK is halved and it can attack your opponent directly.This monster is unaffected by the effects of your opponent's card while your Life Points are higher than your opponents.[/i]

It's a Level 7 with decent stats, though you didn't list materials. I assume it's generic? Anyways, it's effect is not that amazing, and most people probably wouldn't bother with Summoning this thing since it's at least a -1 with no real benefit.

[b]Amazoness Torchbearer[/b]
[b]Lore: [/b][i]Each time you draw a card: Look at 1 Set card your opponent controls.[/i]

Eh. This is bad. It doesn't really net you any advantage so there would be no point in running it. Not to mention to get her effect off, she has to be face-up on the field and with stats like that she's not likely to be of any use.

[b]A Beautiful Reaper[/b]
[b]Lore: [/b]Activate when an "Amazoness" monster your control destroys an opponent's monster by battle: Increase your Life Points by 1000.

Again, this is fairly useless. Maybe it'd be useful if it were a continuous Trap card that triggered each time but it's a slow one time use 1000 point boost. Why would I run this over "Dian-Keto the Cure Master"?

Overall the support doesn't really add much to the Archetype at all.

[Manpole]

[b]War Scream[/b]
[b]Lore: [/b][i]When an "Amazoness" monster you control declares an attack: Target 1 Attack Position monster your opponent controls; change that target to Defense Position[/i]

I think War Scream should be changed to "...you control declares an attack or is selected as an attack target..." to make it a little more useful.
However, whether you change it or not it can be helpful.

[b]Taegra, Amazoness Shapeshifter[/b]
[b]Lore:[/b]
[i]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters[/i]
[i]This card is also treated as a Warrior-Type monster. Once per turn: You can send 1 "Amazoness" monster you control to the Graveyard: this turn, this monster's ATK is halved and it can attack your opponent directly.This monster is unaffected by the effects of your opponent's card[b]s[/b] while your Life Points are higher than your opponents.[/i]

To make this card a little more usable I'd change her first effect to "...return 1 "Amazoness" monster you control to the hand; this turn..."
As for the second effect its very good actually, but again I'd change it a little to read "...opponent's cards while your opponent's Life Points are higher than yours."
That small change would make this card more beneficial if you are losing, instead of being more beneficial while your already ahead.

[b]Amazoness Torchbearer[/b]
[b]Lore: [/b][i]Each time you draw a card: Look at 1 Set card your opponent controls.[/i]

I actually think this card's effect isnt to bad and I like that you gave them a tuner, however, I would increase this card's level by 1 so that "Taegra" can be more easily summoned with it.

[b]A Beautiful Reaper[/b]
[b]Lore: [/b]Activate when an "Amazoness" monster you[b][s]r[/s] [/b]control destroys an opponent's monster by battle: Increase your Life Points by 1000.

This one is very UP, however making it a continuous would be a bit OP, maybe make it heal by 1500? Or if you want it to be continuous make it read:
"When an "Amazoness" monster you control inflicts battle damage to your opponent except as a direct attack, increase your Life Points equal to the damage dealt."
(I'm not entirely sure if thats how you would word it, but you get what I mean =p)

Overall I like the pics you used, except for the fact the Taegra has no real background, and I think the cards (especially with my suggestions ^^) could help the Amazoness set because their set is so small to begin with lol.

Edit: Also, are the pics you used for them all, except "Taegra", some comic character or something? They all look like they're supposed to be the same person.

[crocruler]

Great suggestions guys, when I was making these I wasn't quite sure about what I wanted them to do, so I'm grateful for the suggestions . And Manpole, the character is Red Sonja- I'm not sure who she is, but the images I've found of her are quite applicable for the cards I've made.