anatoleas Posted September 26, 2012 Report Share Posted September 26, 2012 An Updated Version of the cards. I added better pics and other stuff. Hope you like them. [img]http://i.imgur.com/cqet6.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/2mR8C.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/X6xkm.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/UJRua.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/EirpR.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/fEESQ.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/hqXFp.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/sYyb6.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/QueUK.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/75oFi.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/TERfU.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted September 26, 2012 Report Share Posted September 26, 2012 This set needs work, specially in regards to the OCG, and general grammar as some punctuation and capitalization are missing. In addition, many of the monster cards are unbalanced: "Flash" should not have 3600 DEF as a Level 4 monster. "Wonder Woman" should not have 2000 ATK and 1400 DEF as a Level 4 effect monster. Also, the only established Archetypes you used were "Warrior" for "Flash" and "Winged-Beast" for "Hawkgirl" -- which brings up an interesting point, since you have most of the monsters with their superhero names, but you also have "Jon Stewart" instead of "Green Lantern." You could probably name them more consistently. Back to the point about Archetypes and Types, you can have custom sub-types as long as you include an established Archetype, so players know how your cards interact with other cards. A crucial point is for your "Justice League United" spell card. First, monster names should be held within "quotation marks." Second, how do you have 7 monsters on the field together at once? On top of that, with a 7-turn wait you're asking the impossible, no matter how powerful they are. Finally, a lot of your pictures look squashed. You can use simple programs like MS Paint to crop pictures to fit the frames better, and your monsters will be more comfortable as a result. If you can find them, I'd like to see "Superman," "Wonder Woman," and "Batman" with more jazzed-up backgrounds, especially seeing as how they are founding members of the JLA. Lets see what you can do with this, shall we? EDIT: Oh, is "The Watchtower" supposed to enable you to bring out all 7 characters at once? In that case, you may want to add "Justice League" to each hero's name in some form, creating a new Archetype similar to "Elemental HERO." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♦~Thug-Life~♦ Posted September 27, 2012 Report Share Posted September 27, 2012 What the dude above me said. Put lore so viewers can see the effects of the cards. Use better pictures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anatoleas Posted September 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2012 thanks i ll do my best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♦~Thug-Life~♦ Posted September 27, 2012 Report Share Posted September 27, 2012 Alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbrax Posted November 27, 2012 Report Share Posted November 27, 2012 what show did the hawkgirl pic come from. would love to watch it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anatoleas Posted November 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 i think its named... Justice League - Season 3 - Wake The Dead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♦~Thug-Life~♦ Posted November 29, 2012 Report Share Posted November 29, 2012 Hey man, I recommend you post the lore of Flash, so I may read his effect. The cards seem good, and some are more balanced than others, but then you got your overpowered cards, and under powered cards. I also recommend you use actual yugioh type monsters like Warrior Type monster. Instead of Batman's Night Fighter type or Super Girl's Kryptonian type because those aren't real monster types. Some of the pictures could be better, so try to find some. I love the idea because super heroes have always been a passion for me. OCG could use work. Right now I give this set a 6/10. (Find better pictures, work on OCG, and post lore down.) Side Note: DC's heroes may be awesome, but Marvel's heroes are way better.#Team Spiderman! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anatoleas Posted November 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2012 okay i m nearly finished with the work, The only thing i need is betetr pictures Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted November 29, 2012 Report Share Posted November 29, 2012 The Batman, Superman, and Wonder Woman you switched to are better than the old ones. I wonder if you can find an even better full-body one for Diana, through. I see you have also followed my advice to add "Justice League" to the members' names -- so isn't Kara also a member? Since you have changed the names, you will have to make the appropriate adjustments to the text on "Justice League United," otherwise its effect won't affect the right targets. You've also adjusted some of the monsters' stats. Diana could use a little more tweaking: I have never seen a Level 4 effect monster with 2000 ATK and more than 1000 DEF. The most powerful ones I have seen are "Skilled Dark Magician" with stats 1900/1700 and the old "Panther Warrior," whose DEF was lower to compensate for his high ATK. Sort of like how "Goblin Attack Force" has 0 DEF for its 2300 ATK, and switches position after attacking. You also still need to at least add in standard Archetypes for the previously-stated reasons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anatoleas Posted November 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2012 ok i ll work on it. Thanks for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted December 2, 2012 Report Share Posted December 2, 2012 You still have 1 Alien-type and 2 Ultimate Warrior-types that other cards would not be able to interact with at all. Kal-el and Kara probably are a simple fit for the Warrior-type, and you can make J'on a Psychic-type. I believe he has that ability, on top of shapeshifting, invisibility, and changing density. Flash and J'on still look squished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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