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Wanderer of the Red Lotus


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[img]http://i.imgur.com/yqxeS.jpg[/img]
[quote]3 Level 3 Normal Monsters
This card gains 100 ATK for each XYZ Material attached to it. If a Normal Monster would be destroyed: Detach 1 XYZ Material; Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower Normal Monster from your Deck and this card is not destroyed. This card is unaffected by card effects that do not destroy it. [/quote]
[b]Probably[/b] needs a nerf. Namely, the ATK.

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"This card gains 200 ATK for each XYZ Material attached to it. If a Normal Monster would be destroyed: Detach 1 XYZ Material; Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower Normal Monster from your Deck and this card is not destroyed. This card is unaffected by card effects that do not destroy it."
2400 ATK / 1200 DEF

The effect is a little confusing, as it activates when a normal monster would be destroyed, then it ends up saying that this card is not destroyed? Anyways, I like the card because I hate vanillas lol, so any support for them is good. As it takes 3 monsters, I think starting with 3000 isnt to bad, however I would decrease its ATK to 2400, and make its materials give it 200ATK each, that way when you activate its effect it gives more of a drawback. (possibly even 2100 ATK and each material gives it 300) As for the fix, just change it to "If a Normal Monster would be destroyed: Special Summon 1 level 2 (I think level 3 would better match the card) or lower Normal Monster from your Deck and then negate the attack or effect that would have destroyed the Normal Monster." (even then, I'm not sure if thats correct wording.)

If you truely wanted the original effec to read "...and this card is not destroyed." Then of course you'll need to edit the first part of the effect to "...If this card would be destroyed." and also in that case, its ATK is a little high, and it needs lowering a bit.

Anyways, I love the picture! (But in the posted card it says 8 level 8 monsters, while in the lore it says 3 level 3, just think you should fix that).

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Oh my mistake. I had written 3 different effects, one which was destruction immunity for other monsters and another a swarming effect (for level 2). The actual effect is when she would be destroyed, hence why I said she PROBABLY needs a nerf.

Also, the requirements do say 3 Level 3, Yugico makes it look like 8, which is a problem. Also, I'll change the effect around a bit. I'm thinking each material being 500 and reducing her ATK to 1500.

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A cheap combo for this would be Super Robolady and Machine Duplication. After that, it would stay on the field and be a nuisance for a long time. It's still OK because the free Level 2- vanillas are more of a drawback to Deck consistency than a benefit.

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