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Winged beast Trio


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Hey these are the first cards that i created. and i was just wondering if you have any tips for me.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/6GeLc.jpg[/img]



[img]http://i.imgur.com/iiIL7.jpg[/img]



[img]http://i.imgur.com/l6epD.jpg[/img]

lore:"Kumi" + "Kami"
Fire and water type cards have no effect on this monster

please comment.

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I'll start by saying pictures for all cards are fantastic!

However, I'm not the biggest fan of vanilla cards so I wont comment on the descriptions (or whatever they're called), however in effects and descriptions you need periods ^^.

"Kami" and" Kumi" both seem a little strong for being level 4, for "Kami", I dont think Ive seen a level 4 with over 2000 ATK that didnt have a drawback. As for "Kumi" having 2100 DEF he should have nowhere near 1900 ATK.

Maybe just give "Kami" 0 DEF, and lower "Kumi's" ATK to 900.

For "Sank Ko" make him a Light type and not Divine. As for his effect, its not very useful (and when saying an attribute in a card it needs to be in all caps (FIRE, DARK, ect))
To make "Sank Ko" more playable, maybe edit its effect to make it uneffected by opponents Fire and Water monster effects to -
"This card is uneffected by your opponents monster card effects."

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