Machina Golem [Single]

[The Dark Knight]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/Lpao7.jpg[/img]

[spoiler=Lore]
2 Level 8 Monsters
This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. Once per turn you can detach 1 XYZ Material from any face-up Monster on the field and select 2 cards on the field and destroy them. You can banish this card in your Graveyard and return 1 Level 8 or higher "Machina" monster from your Graveyard to your hand.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Creds]
- (Sword-Summoner) Picture
[/spoiler]

[Manpole]

Even though this is a rank 8 Xyz I think you made it a bit OP, being able to take your opponents Xyz materials and then destroy 2 of their cards is very powerful, and his summon and attacks can basically not be negated as he isnt effected by Traps. I would tune him down a little so that he isnt effected by Traps during the battle phase perhaps? and that if you detach your opponents Xyz you cant attack with him this turn? Those 2 drawbacks still keep the essence of the card intact and imo don't make him UP by any means, yet he is still very powerful and I think would see use in play.

edit: oh, and the pic is awesome ^^

[The Dark Knight]

[quote name='Manpole' timestamp='1349402300' post='6038113']
Even though this is a rank 8 Xyz I think you made it a bit OP, being able to take your opponents Xyz materials and then destroy 2 of their cards is very powerful, and his summon and attacks can basically not be negated as he isnt effected by Traps. I would tune him down a little so that he isnt effected by Traps during the battle phase perhaps? and that if you detach your opponents Xyz you cant attack with him this turn? Those 2 drawbacks still keep the essence of the card intact and imo don't make him UP by any means, yet he is still very powerful and I think would see use in play.
[/quote]

Yeah, I did feel as though I was making him too overpowered. Wanted him to work smoothly in Machina Drain but I might've just given him too much to play with. I'll bring him down a bit when I get the chance and post the updated version.