Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted October 13, 2012 Report Share Posted October 13, 2012 [center][Spoiler=?][/center] [center][Spoiler=Info][/center] [center]This guy is one mean leader as he half-heartly spread his darkness to his troops to stomp on the enemies' hope of winning but is more full-heartly willing to save himself and, stay off the battle grounds.[/center] [center][/Spoiler][/center] [center][Spoiler=The Card! what could it be this time i wonder? maybe a numbers?][/center] [center][img]http://i49.tinypic.com/2nc111j.jpg[/img][/center] [center]3 Level 3 monsters [i]Once per turn: If this card would be destroyed by an opponent's card effect, instead, it is not."[/i]. Once per turn during any player's Battle Phase while this card is in DEF Position and a face-up monster is selected as an attack target before the Damage Step you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card that attack target gains 1100 ATK and DEF until the end of the Damage Step.[/center] [center][/Spoiler][/center] [center][Spoiler=Surport Card! plus anthor single! possible staple for Xyz Users!][/center] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/3isDs.jpg[/img][/center] [center]Once per turn during any player's turn when any player's face-up Xyz monster with no Xyz Materials attached to it is destroyed by battle or by a card's effect and sent to the Graveyard: the turn players flips a coin if called right: Special Summon that Xyz monster to that player's side of the Field, if called wrong then the other player flips a coin if called right: Special Summon that Xyz monster to that player's side of the Field, when it leaves the Field banish it instead.[/center] [center][/Spoiler][/center] [center][/Spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Shinobi Phoenix Posted October 18, 2012 Report Share Posted October 18, 2012 [quote name='Garthfunkle Vii Backwards' timestamp='1350149013' post='6043602'] Once per turn during any player's turn this card can not be destroyed by card's effects your opponent controls. Once per turn during any player's Battle Phase while this card is in DEF Position and a face-up monster is selected as an attack target before the Damage Step you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card that attack target gains 1100 ATK and DEF until the end of the Damage Step.[/quote] Let's break this down first and I will ask my questions. [i]"Once per turn during any player's turn this card can not be destroyed by card's effects your opponent controls.[/i]" Is this a state-creating effect (blankets him with a protection that last until a frame of time) [b]-OR-[/b] a immediate one-shot defense per turn similar to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Clear_Vice_Dragon"]Clear Vice Dragon[/url]. If it's creating a state, you should re-write that to specific that and when it ends and if you do that, it really should have a COST to it since it's free destruction immunity during any turn that last all turn. I will assume it's actually just the immediate one-shot defense, in which just copy-paste Clear Vice Dragon's text as a standard and add one-per-turn. [i]"Once per turn: If this card would be destroyed by an opponent's card effect, instead, it is not."[/i] BTW-- Unless it's allowed to be activated at an unusual time compared to what type of effect it is, you really don't need to specific the "any player's turn" thing. This is a quick-effect (all protection effects are normally). Hell, a protection effect that exist as an activated state only during your turn (that would be a Spell Speed 1 effect), is more likely to need that explained specifically in the text than what you put there. The second effect is ok mechanically and not very strong, so it's good to go except for fixing the grammar (not necessarily have to convert it to New Style Konami Text, but at least clean up what you currently have). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted October 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 [center][color=#4B0082][b][i][u][s][sub][size=8][u]HAVE NO FEAR,[/u][/size][/sub][/s][/u][/i][/b][/color][/center] [center][color=#4B0082][b][i][u][s][sub][size=8][u]BUMP![/u][/size][/sub][/s][/u][/i][/b][/color][/center] [center][color=#4B0082][b][i][u][s][sub][size=8][u]MAN IS HERE![/u][/size][/sub][/s][/u][/i][/b][/color][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 22, 2012 Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 Design: Good name, good picture and the picture matches the card. ATK/DEF: Pretty good for a rank 3. It is reasonable defensively and can take out most of the opponents weaker monsters. Effect: I really like this effect. It is relatively balanced and very useful. It has good coverage being able to effect any monster being targeted (including itself I believe, which also gives it good staying power). The effect remains balanced since it requires both an Xyz material and for the card to be in defence. Playability: It's easy to get out, has staying power and reasonable ATK/DEF as well as a really useful effect. I'd certainly consider using it As a side note where did you get the art work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted October 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2012 [quote name='gimmepie' timestamp='1350902182' post='6050525'] As a side note where did you get the art work? [/quote] Fan art from one lozf to anthor. I have found it a fan website online ...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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