JoKmaster Posted October 13, 2012 Report Share Posted October 13, 2012 In this topic ill be posting the cards i create.Feel free to show me yours [img]http://i.imgur.com/dBVOO.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/TojPQ.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/iC5oa.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/kZvgN.jpg[/img] For my"Absolute Darkness" Set [img]http://i.imgur.com/XiOhK.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/ttSgv.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/ytyVR.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/yYJ2H.jpg[/img][img][img]http://i.imgur.com/yYJ2H.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MORPHINGJARFORTHEWIN Posted October 13, 2012 Report Share Posted October 13, 2012 You forgot to specify how the next Level is summoned. It's not on the previous card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra Iron Man Posted October 13, 2012 Report Share Posted October 13, 2012 ble feh pics: flattened, resize needed Spelling errors overpowered/underpowered 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shocktrooper007 Posted October 13, 2012 Report Share Posted October 13, 2012 ummmmm dude i'm sorry but you made these cards to your major specifications BUT with a little weakening these can be a nice set of cards, keep at it and also i'd like to see where you got these pictures............I can't draw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted October 14, 2012 Report Share Posted October 14, 2012 Dark Angel is not a Type. You can make their type Dark Angel but it doesn't make them cool. Archangel LV3: How much does it increase its ATK for each DARK monster in your Graveyard? Where is the effect that Special Summons LV5? Archangel LV5: Where does it Summon the Level 4 or lower DARK monster from? I assume you meant this for the text: [quote&name="Archangel of Darkness LV5"]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned by the effect of "Archangel LV3". [color=#FF0000]When this card is Summoned by the effect of "Archangel LV3": Special Summon from your Deck 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster.[/color] [color=#008080]You can target 1 monster your opponent controls with DEF higher that this card's ATK: destroy it.[/color][/quote] I think this is what you meant. Not sure though. You're also missing the effect to Special Summon LV7. Archangel LV7: It's clear what it does. I'll take a crack at revising the wording. [quote&name="Archangel of Darkness LV5"]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned by the effect of "Archangel LV5". [color=#FF0000]When this card is Summoned by the effect of "Archangel LV5": You can target 1 Level 5 or lower monster your opponent controls: destroy that target.[/color] [color=#008080]Once per turn: You can target 1 Set card your opponent controls: destroy that target.[/color][/quote] By using "that target" instead of "it", the effect will fizzle if the card is no longer a correct target at resolution (say, if the opponent's Neo-Spacian Grand Mole you wanted to blow up was flipped face-down by Book of Moon, or if the face-down Gravity Bind you wanted to blow up was flipped face-up). Again, you're missing the effect to fetch LV9. Archangel LV9: All that buildup to sacrifice a card and inflict one-twentieth of the damage you need to win? Why couldn't the damage be 4000 or something? And why that particular ATK? As for Summoning of Angels: [quote&name="Summoning of Angels"]Tribute 1 Level 7 or lower "Archangel of Darkness" monster; Special Summon 1 "Archangel of Darkness LV9" from your hand or Deck, ignoring the Summoning conditions. Whenever that monster is targeted for an attack, destroy the attacking monster.[/quote] It would appear you speak Spanish, so I'm going to half-translate this. [i]Necesitas incluir el efecto en cada monstruo para invocar el proximo monstruo[/i]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoleggendario Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 Sono nuovo ma mi piacciono queste carte! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoKmaster Posted October 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 [quote name='shocktrooper007' timestamp='1350155753' post='6043649'] ummmmm dude i'm sorry but you made these cards to your major specifications BUT with a little weakening these can be a nice set of cards, keep at it and also i'd like to see where you got these pictures............I can't draw [/quote] Well just do it like i do,go to google images and try to specify what your looking for as much as you can,for example i was thinking in making thosse angel cards so i wrote: "Archangel" and there it was. [quote name='newhat' timestamp='1350250275' post='6044478'] Dark Angel is not a Type. You can make their type Dark Angel but it doesn't make them cool. Archangel LV3: How much does it increase its ATK for each DARK monster in your Graveyard? Where is the effect that Special Summons LV5? Archangel LV5: Where does it Summon the Level 4 or lower DARK monster from? I assume you meant this for the text: I think this is what you meant. Not sure though. You're also missing the effect to Special Summon LV7. Archangel LV7: It's clear what it does. I'll take a crack at revising the wording. By using "that target" instead of "it", the effect will fizzle if the card is no longer a correct target at resolution (say, if the opponent's Neo-Spacian Grand Mole you wanted to blow up was flipped face-down by Book of Moon, or if the face-down Gravity Bind you wanted to blow up was flipped face-up). Again, you're missing the effect to fetch LV9. Archangel LV9: All that buildup to sacrifice a card and inflict one-twentieth of the damage you need to win? Why couldn't the damage be 4000 or something? And why that particular ATK? As for Summoning of Angels: It would appear you speak Spanish, so I'm going to half-translate this. [i]Necesitas incluir el efecto en cada monstruo para invocar el proximo monstruo[/i]. [/quote] What you said is exactly what i mean but i wanted to make them like silent swordsman, i mean in the end of the turn the weaker monster would be destroyed and the next lvl monster would replace it.some sort of level up. Oh,and just to let you know,iam not from spain. Iam portuguese. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoKmaster Posted October 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2012 [quote name='MORPHINGJARFORTHEWIN' timestamp='1350152201' post='6043616'] You forgot to specify how the next Level is summoned. It's not on the previous card. [/quote] I know,in order to summon the next lvl monster i meant to write :In the end of the turn,destroy this card and summon (higher level monster) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoKmaster Posted October 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2012 [quote name='JoKmaster' timestamp='1350151426' post='6043611'] In this topic ill be posting the cards i create.Feel free to show me yours [img]http://i.imgur.com/dBVOO.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/TojPQ.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/iC5oa.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/kZvgN.jpg[/img] For my"Absolute Darkness" Set [img]http://i.imgur.com/XiOhK.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/ttSgv.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/ytyVR.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/yYJ2H.jpg[/img][img][img]http://i.imgur.com/yYJ2H.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/BNqFp.jpg[/img] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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