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commander mike

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these are ok, but you forgot alot about grammar

effect: ok, some things need to b e capatalised, and you just completely forgot about grammar. 4/10

power: not bad, but theres something wrong with the last samuri... cant place it, 6/10

pic: i like some of the pics, but some just dont seem to fit on a yu gi oh card.6/10

overall: 16/30! thats not too bad, but if i were you, id keep on trying ad improving these cards until you get it right! not a bda try at all tho! =)

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