Superkaiba Posted October 21, 2012 Report Share Posted October 21, 2012 Some of my cards I would appreciate some constructive criticism and maybe how can I improve them. [img]http://i.imgur.com/q7Bgz.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/S2WQk.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/nVdfY.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/V2IWC.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/WSyqf.jpg[/img] This card can not be Normal Summoned. This card can only be Special Summoned by using the ritual "Ancient Ritual of Great Unchou". This card can not be destroyed in the turn it is summoned. Once each 4 turns this card can choose any monster on the opponent's side of the field and destroy it, damage calculation is the same, but the opponent's Life Points are also decreased by 100 every turn, after the attack of this card. [img]http://i.imgur.com/OASoC.jpg[/img] This card can not be Normal Summoned. This card can only be Special Summoned by using the ritual "Ancient Ritual of Great Housen". This card can not be destroyed in the turn it is summoned. Once each 3 turns, this card can select an opponent's graveyard monster and remove it from play or summon it on your side of the field. [img]http://i.imgur.com/WgOf1.jpg[/img] This card can not be Normal Summoned. This card can only be Special Summoned by using the ritual "Ancient Ritual of Great Shimei". This card can not be destroyed in the turn it is summoned. Once per turn, this card can select an opponent face down monster and destroy it (damage calculation is the same). [img]http://i.imgur.com/TwuYl.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/yNiRK.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/oCRlX.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Mqlmy.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/wE61g.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/gUagJ.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictorSempra Posted October 21, 2012 Report Share Posted October 21, 2012 Ryofu Housen is rather confusing, since there doesn't seem to be a "gender" mechanic between your cards. Otherwise, they look great, and with a few wording adjustments they'd be great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
finlandman Posted October 21, 2012 Report Share Posted October 21, 2012 Level 7 ritual monster with over 3000 ATK!!!? Other than that nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictorSempra Posted October 21, 2012 Report Share Posted October 21, 2012 Ah yeah, didn't catch that. The ritual monsters should be toned back just a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superkaiba Posted October 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 [quote name='Maxxion' timestamp='1350843004' post='6049905'] Ah yeah, didn't catch that. The ritual monsters should be toned back just a bit. [/quote] By "toned back" you mean lower ATK and DEF??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictorSempra Posted October 22, 2012 Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 Yeah. The effects are well enough.[quote name='Superkaiba' timestamp='1350874992' post='6050368'] By "toned back" you mean lower ATK and DEF??? [/quote]Yup. The effects are well enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superkaiba Posted October 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2012 [quote name='Maxxion' timestamp='1350832122' post='6049795'] Ryofu Housen is rather confusing, since there doesn't seem to be a "gender" mechanic between your cards. Otherwise, they look great, and with a few wording adjustments they'd be great. [/quote] What do you mean by wording adjustments?? And by gender I meant in any case a monster is male or female, like warrior-type monsters that possess human-like form and therefore have a gender eventhough its not specified on the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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