MarbleZone Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Let's call this one a spur of the moment. The name kinda popped in my head when I was thinking about why do English speakers say "Keltic Guardian" instead of "Seltic Guardian". :P By the way, this guy has nothing to do with Celtic stuff, Kelt ain't even a word. :P EDIT: Oh yeah, I don't own the art of this card, I only used it to improve my work, copyright is in the Edition space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 grammar and ocg errors. nice job with the pic and the idea tho. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Knight Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Good picture bad grammer 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted March 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 I hate to disagree, but the effecct was copied from D.D. Crazy Beast and Crystal Tree, so I'm pretty sure there are no mistakes; even so, I might have missed something, so please point them out so I can edit the card...I think it's slightly unfair to get lower ratings for using correct OCG (since it has been used on actual cards, and recent ones at that.) that you guys simply aren't used to reading... :/ Criticism is really welcome, please don't be afraid to comment after this small rant, but fair, constructive criticism, since you point out mistakes but don't actually correct them... ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squall19 Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 I really like itnice effect and a nice pic 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted March 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Thanks! ;) People post cards so fast here that mine slide down to the bottom of the page in 20 minutes! Geez, don't you people have, like, school? On Saturday? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Pretty good. And the effect's original enough. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Let's call this one a spur of the moment. The name kinda popped in my head when I was thinking about why do English speakers say "Keltic Guardian" instead of "Seltic Guardian". :P By the way' date=' this guy has nothing to do with Celtic stuff, Kelt ain't even a word. :P EDIT: Oh yeah, I don't own the art of this card, I only used it to improve my work, copyright is in the Edition space.[/quote'] When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, you may place that monster face-up in your Opponent's Spell/Trap Card Zone and treat it as a Continuous Spell Card with the effect "When this card is removed from the field, inflict 800 points of damage to the controller of this card's Life Points." Cool Card. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 sauromon and chaos knight are just looking for some quick posts, so they just write "errors" on every card [i'm assuming] Excellent card though :] 8/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Errors and Good pic. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Errors and Good pic. 8.5/10 Where. Oh, and AMAZING pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 i like the pic, some problems with grammar but ok 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 wow...were you even looking at jerryfreelance's posts......very very nice....10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Wow, my card must be full of mistakes, or else people are really worried about their post count. Thanks to everybody who commented properly though :) For those who indiscriminately say there are "errors" and leave, 2 suggestions:a) read D.D. Crazy Beast or Crystal Tree/Crystal Pairb) read... well, my card, since you probably didn't even look at the text. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jester_of_Emotion Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Wow...this card is a dream to burn duellists like myself. Converting destroyed monsters into burn cards that take up your opponent's spell and trap zones. A good way to make cards such as Heavy Storm their worst enemy. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Hah, you got it! :DGood to see someone got the point! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Interesting concept, but there are indeed some minor OCG errors, Card Maker Shinigami has shown these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Hum, Card Maker Shinigami gave a good suggestion, but comparing to the Crystal Beast support cards' lore, which is very recent, it's slightly off... That's the only reason why I'm not changing it. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Well I was refering more to the number of "," you put in the card text. ^_~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Oh, that! Sorry. ;) Copy-paste. ;)But I see what you mean, I'll make another one with the lore you guys recommend and maybe post it in this thread as well. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Yeah I know but the "," seem a bit pointless when they aren't really needed just so as to separate face-up from everything else, at least it appears that way to me but I was never good with english (The Subject), but do check out the Kelt card I made though because of this thread, XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 8/10, the effects are copied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 ... Copied? :/From the Crystal Beasts, you mean? I just copied the OCG... But thanks anyway, 8 is good. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 The comment you made about this thread on mine was uncalled for Grayall but anyway. You should really expand this set and I wouldn't mind helping either since I like the theme, brings back the whole burnage concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 What I like about the card, more than the burn, is the lock. I'm a fan of Ojama Trio, and the idea of blocking Zones strikes me as much better than negating, destroying or removing. ;) Yeah, I might make a Set around this, but if I do I'd like permission to include your Kelt Armageddon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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