Single Card - Death Lord of Deathness

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As you can see, I am very aspired with my card names... Anyways, just wanted to make an other card before I went to bed *yawn.* So here's the card anyways: [URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/32678-Single_Card_-_Death_Lord_of_Deathness/128956-Death_Lord_of_Deathness][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/128956.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

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Your card is fine mostly, the taking control part might be a little strong but its very situational so I can't count it as outright Overpowered, however the OCG is terrible. You can try something more like:
When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle: Target 1 other monster you opponent controls, reduce it's ATK by half the ATK of the destroyed monster. Take control of a Normal Monster targeted by this card effect at the end of the Battle Phase.

Anyone else able to think of a better ocg fix?

[Zazubat]

[quote name='YoungPrinceDeshwitat' timestamp='1351549520' post='6056746']
Your card is fine mostly, the taking control part might be a little strong but its very situational so I can't count it as outright Overpowered, however the OCG is terrible. You can try something more like:
When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle: Target 1 other monster you opponent controls, reduce it's ATK by half the ATK of the destroyed monster. Take control of a Normal Monster targeted by this card effect at the end of the Battle Phase.

Anyone else able to think of a better ocg fix?
[/quote]yeah as said I was almost going to bed at the time so I didn't really think much of the OCG, will fix it when ever.