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Shaking off the rust


.Alpha

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Well Alpha's back.
Good to see you around again.

I like the concept, however the lighting is far too artificial and isn't consistent, meaning in some areas the lighting has higher saturation and in others less.
This style revolves around making the lighting and the flow that is produced flawless, without that you can't have good execution.
The whole thing also seems a bit LQ, and perhaps a bit sharp in some areas.

Regardless of the rust, you haven't lost your skill, your second tag will be better.

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Good to see you back in Showcase, .Alpha.

On this piece, I can see what you were going for but I'm not sur that you quite got it. The colors are kinda flat looking. Really brushed on looking.
The atmosphere of the whole tag is pretty boring. Very dark and it's hard to make out a lot of things.
You could def do better and I'm thinking that your next few will be.

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