Chance's Take On: The Legend of Dragoon [22/?]

[Strider Tigerwolf]

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[center][color=#000000][size=4][spoiler=The Characters of Legend of Dragoon][/size][/color][/center]
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[center][color=#000000][size=4][b]Lore:[/b][/size][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][size=4]When this card is Normal Summoned: Add 1 "The Dragoon's" monster from your Deck to your hand. If you add "The Dragoon's Bow - Shana" this way: You can Special Summon "The Dragoon's Bow - Shana" from your hand. This card cannot be used for the Summon of a monster except a "Dragoon" monster.[/size][/color][/center]
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[center]Dart is the most prominent of the characters throughout the LoD series. He's the one you start off with as his childhood friend is abducted from his second home village of Seles. Shana is taken to Helena Prison for some unknown reason under the orders of Emperor Dole and so he sets out on a quest to save her, unknowingly getting himself into something far more sinister than he thought. Dart in game play is always active. You cannot inter-exchange him for another character and only disembarks from his position once in the entire game, on disk 4 and as such, I wanted to make him someone you HAVE to run in a yugioh deck for full power. As such, much like in the game where he is later accompanied by several of his companions, his yugioh effect searches his companions yet Shana is special to him and as such the both of them tend to have a specified effect for the 2. In the meantime, he is also on a quest to regain revenge against the Black Monster, a creature of legend that is both myth and reality intertwined and constantly takes the lives of many in order to kill the Moon Child every 108 years. His original home town, Neet, was destroyed by the creature and that was when he was separated from both his mother and father. Within the ruins of the village, however, he finds his dad's memento and that's where his journey for revenge truly began.[/center]
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[center][color=#000000][size=4][b]Lore:[/b][/size][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][size=4]While "The Dragoon's Blade - Dart" or "The Dragoon's Lance - Albert" is face-up on the field: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once, while this card is face-up on the field and another face-up "The Dragoon's" monster is targetted for an attack: You can make this card the attack target instead and, if you do, this card gains 500 ATK during that battle only. This card cannot be used for the Summon of a monster except a "Dragoon" monster.[/size][/color][/center]
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[center]Leader of the 1st Knighthood of Basil, and best friend of both Dart and King Albert, Lavitz is the first character who joins Dart and does so when attempting to break out of Helena Prison. Within the class of steel and blood, Lavitz befriends Dart and aids him in finding Shana and escaping from the place. Throughout his role, he embarks a sense of loyalty, friendship, and bravery, key qualities in becoming a Knight of Basil, but he also holds a deep grudge against one particular person, the man who took the life of his father and once a Knight of the Second Order of Basil. Revenge is something both he and Dart have in common.[/center]
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[center][color=#000000][size=4][b]Lore:[/b][/size][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][size=4]During your Standby Phase, while "The Dragoon's Blade - Dart" is face-up on the field: Gain 700 Life Points. Once, while this card is face-up on the field: You can target 1 "Dragoon" monster on the field; that target cannot be destroyed or removed from the field (by battle or card effect) until the End Phase. This card cannot be used for the Summon of a monster except a "Dragoon" monster.[/size][/color][/center]
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[center]With a background unknown, Shana is only the childhood friend of Dart, but deeper than skin, she hides a mysterious power that brings about question of who she really is. She is the third character that embarks with Dart and company. During Dart's absence, she has grown up, becoming a trained archer and learning several key survival traits and remedies, all in the hopes that one day she could aid Dart in his journey, wherever they may lead them. But even Dart questions the power within her...and it slowly becomes the cause for the search of answers.[/center]
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[center][color=#000000][size=4][b]Lore:[/b][/size][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Once, while you control another face-up "The Dragoon's" monster: You can send 1 monster on the field to the Graveyard. Once, while "The Dragoon's Blade Dart" is face-up on the field: You can add 1 "Dragoon Spirit" card from your Deck to your hand that lists the name of 1 face-up "The Dragoon's" monster you control. This card cannot be used for the Summon of a monster except a "Dragoon" monster.[/size][/font][/color][/center]
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[center]And expert swordswoman with an eerie background, Rose was the one who saved Dart from the Green Tusked Dragon, Feybrand early in the game. She joins the characters as the fourth member of the party and awakens the power of the Dragoon within Dart on their second meeting. She holds many answers but raises many questions as well. How does she know so much about what is going on? Where did she get her power? And most importantly who is she really?[/center]
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[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3][b]Lore:[/b][/size][/font][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Once, while this card is face-up on the field: You can double this card's ATK until the End Phase. Once, while "The Dragoon's Blade - Dart" is face-up on the field: You can add 1 "Memory" Spell/Trap Card from your Graveyard to your hand. This card cannot be used for the Summon of a monster except a "Dragoon" monster.[/size][/font][/color][/center]
[center][spoiler=Info on Haschel][/center]
[center]After defeating the Green Tusked Dragon, and completing several tasks, it seems as if Basil is headed for a time of peace. That is when the characters head for a small carnival in the town of Lohan, a commercial place where several goods can be found. Dart and Haschel meet when Dart enlists in a Fighting Arena as a competitor for sport, but years before that, the duo had met and parted ways. Now, they return and perhaps as a sign of faith, both begin to learn that there's a strange connection between them, but both hold unspoken for most of the game. He is the master of the Rouge School of Martial Arts in his village and when King Albert is abducted by the Imperial Sandora and confined to Helena Prison, he decides to lend his iron fist to the group, and joins them.[/center]
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[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3][b]Lore:[/b][/size][/font][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]While "The Dragoon's Blade - Dart" or "The Dragoon's Spear - Lavitz" is face-up on the field: This card cannot be targeted or destroyed by your opponent's card effects. Once, during either player's turn while this card is face-up on the field and you control another face-up "The Dragoon's" monster: You can negate the effect/activation of a Normal Spell or Trap Card. This card cannot be used for the Summon of a monster except a "Dragoon" monster.[/size][/font][/color][/center]
[center][spoiler=Info on King Albert][/center]
[center]A genuine intellectual and a fierce fighter taught by his friend Lavitz, King Albert is the head of the country of Basil and a just King at that. During the fray at Helena Prison, a powerful heirloom is taken from him, and in retaliation, Lavitz lunges at the very attacker with all his might. Unfortunately, Lavitz losses his life in the process and the captor leaves immediately.Albert is taken to Seles undercover and joins the group both in memory of his now late friend, and as an aid to end the war between Sandora and Basil. He replaces Lavitz in the party, and uses all of Lavitz attacks and special abilities, in his own way of course.[/center]
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[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3][b]Lore:[/b][/size][/font][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Once, while this card is face-up on the field and you control another face-up "The Dragoon's" monster: You can negate the attack of 1 monster your opponent controls, then shuffle 1 face-up monster on the field to it's owner's Deck and end the Battle Phase. Once, while "The Dragoon's Blade - Dart" is face-up on the field: You can add 1 "Dragoon Spell" Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. This card cannot be used for the Summon of a monster except a "Dragoon" monster.[/size][/font][/color][/center]
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[center]An upbeat dancer who is both rough and tough and as quirky, perky and energetic as a girl living the life. She joins the group by holding knowledge they require in order to progress with their journey and becomes a very valuable asset within the game. However, just like rose, she posses many secrets about her whereabouts and where she came from and with so many secrets lingering between her and Rose, there are several times where things are awkward within the party.[/center]
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[center][b]Lore:[/b][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]If this card is Normal Summoned, while you control a face-up "The Dragoon's" monster: You can destroy 1 face-down card on the field. This card cannot declare an attack during the turn you used this effect. Once, while "The Dragoon's Blade - Dart" is face-up on the field: You can change this card from face-up Attack Position to face-up Defense Position, and send 1 face-up card on the field to the Graveyard, but this card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn, even by card effects. This card cannot be used for the Summon of a monster except a "Dragoon" monster.[/size][/font][/color][/center]
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[center]A massive bahemoth known as a Giganto, he towers as one of Sandora's prime points of power. He is defeated twice during the war between Sandora and Basil before he joins the group as an unprecedented power. However, as time progresses, he shows his reasoning and earns the trust of the entire group, even that of Rose herself and doesn't stop short of lending his massive strength aid the group throughout trouble.[/center]
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[center][b]Lore:[/b][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]During your Standby Phase, while "The Dragoon's Blade - Dart" is face-up on the field: Inflict 600 damage to your opponent's Life Points. Once, during either player's turn, while this card is face-up on the field: You can target 1 card on the field. If that target leaves the field (by battle or card effect): Add that target to your hand during the End Phase (even if this card is no longer face-up on the field). This card cannot be used for the Summon of a monster except a "Dragoon" monster.[/size][/font][/color][/center]
[center][spoiler=Info on Miranda][/center]
[center]One of the Sacred Sisters of Mille Seseau, she is an expert archer with a troubled past. Events happen in which Shana losses her ability to fight and she must take over to protect the country of Mille Seseau from a dangerous man and a rampaging Dragon. She is solid, strong and stubborn, as well as constantly conflicts with Rose and her viewpoints. However, the two manage to put aside their differences enough to work together and end several conflicts in their quest for answers, and near the end of their journey, Miranda and Rose come to respect each other despite their differences.[/center]
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[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3][b]Lore:[/b][/size][/font][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Send 1 face-up "The Dragoon's Blade - Dart" to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Red-Eye Dragoon - Dart" from your Extra Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Synchro Summon.) Place 10 Red-Eyed Counters on a monster Summoned by this effect. During each of your Standby Phases, remove 1 counter from that monster. If all counters are removed from a monster Summoned by this effect: Return that monster to the Extra Deck, then Special Summon 1 monster listed in it's Text in face-up Attack Position.[/size][/font][/color][/center]

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[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Send 1 face-up "The Dragoon's Rapier - Rose" to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Dark Dragoon - Rose" from your Extra Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Synchro Summon.) Place 10 Dark Counters on a monster Summoned by this effect. During each of your Standby Phases, remove 1 counter from that monster. If all counters are removed from a monster Summoned by this effect: Return that monster to the Extra Deck, then Special Summon 1 monster listed in it's Text in face-up Attack Position.[/size][/font][/color][/center]

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[center][b]Lore:[/b][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Send 1 face-up "The Dragoon's Spear - Lavitz" or "The Dragoon's Lance - Albert" to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Jade Dragoon" Synchro monster from your Extra Deck that lists the appropriate name of the monster sent to the Graveyard by this card. (This Special Summon is treated as a Synchro Summon.) Place 10 Jade Counters on a monster Summoned by this effect. During each of your Standby Phases, remove 1 counter from that monster. If all counters are removed from a monster Summoned by this effect: Return that monster to the Extra Deck, then Special Summon 1 monster listed in it's Text in face-up Attack Position.[/size][/font][/color][/center]

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[center][b]Lore:[/b][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Send 1 face-up "The Dragoon's Bow - Shana" or "The Dragoon's Arrow - Miranda" to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "White-Silver Dragoon" Synchro monster from your Extra Deck that lists the appropriate name of the monster sent to the Graveyard by this card. (This Special Summon is treated as a Synchro Summon.) Place 10 White-Silver Counters on a monster Summoned by this effect. During each of your Standby Phases, remove 1 counter from that monster. If all counters are removed from a monster Summoned by this effect: Return that monster to the Extra Deck, then Special Summon 1 monster listed in it's Text in face-up Defense Position Position.[/size][/font][/color][/center]

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[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Send 1 face-up "The Dragoon's Fist - Haschel" to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Violet Dragoon - Haschel" from your Extra Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Synchro Summon.) Place 10 Violet Counters on a monster Summoned by this effect. During each of your Standby Phases, remove 1 counter from that monster. If all counters are removed from a monster Summoned by this effect: Return that monster to the Extra Deck, then Special Summon 1 monster listed in it's Text in face-up Attack Position.[/size][/font][/color][/center]

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[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Send 1 face-up "The Dragoon's Mace - Meru" to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Blue-Sea Dragoon - Meru" from your Extra Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Synchro Summon.) Place 10 Blue-Sea Counters on a monster Summoned by this effect. During each of your Standby Phases, remove 1 counter from that monster. If all counters are removed from a monster Summoned by this effect: Return that monster to the Extra Deck, then Special Summon 1 monster listed in it's Text in face-up Defense Position.[/size][/font][/color][/center]

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[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3][b]Lore:[/b][/size][/font][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Send 1 face-up "The Dragoon's Axe - Kongol" to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Golden Dragoon - Kongol" from your Extra Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Synchro Summon.) Place 10 Golden Counters on a monster Summoned by this effect. During each of your Standby Phases, remove 1 counter from that monster. If all counters are removed from a monster Summoned by this effect: Return that monster to the Extra Deck, then Special Summon 1 monster listed in it's Text in face-up Attack Position.[/size][/font][/color][/center]
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[center][b]Lore:[/b][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]1 FIRE Tuner + "The Dragoon's Blade - Dart"[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. If this card is Synchro Summoned: Place 5 Red-Eye Counters on this card (max. 15). During each of your Standby Phases; remove 1 counter from this card. If this card was Summoned by the effect(s) of a "Dragoon Spirit" card: Once per turn, you can remove 2 Red-Eye Counters from this card to activate 1 "Red-Eye" Normal Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard.[/size][/font][/color][/center]

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[center][b]Lore:[/b][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]1 DARK Tuner + "The Dragoon's Rapier - Rose"[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. If this card is Synchro Summoned: Place 5 Dark Counters on this card (max. 15). During each of your Standby Phases; remove 1 counter from this card. If this card was Summoned by the effect(s) of a "Dragoon Spirit" card: Once per turn, you can remove 2 Dark Counters from this card to activate 1 "Dark" Normal Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard.[/size][/font][/color][/center]

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[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3][b]Lore:[/b][/size][/font][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]1 WIND Tuner + "The Dragoon's Spear - Lavitz"[/size][/font][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. If this card is Synchro Summoned: Place 5 Jade Counters on this card (max. 15). During each of your Standby Phases; remove 1 counter from this card. If this card was Summoned by the effect(s) of a "Dragoon Spirit" card: Once per turn, you can remove 2 Jade Counters from this card to activate 1 "Jade" Normal Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard.[/size][/font][/color][/center]

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[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3][b]Lore:[/b][/size][/font][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]1 LIGHT Tuner + "The Dragoon's Bow - Shana"[/size][/font][/color][/center]
[center][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. If this card is Synchro Summoned: Place 5 White-Silver Counters on this card (max. 15). During each of your Standby Phases; remove 1 counter from this card. If this card was Summoned by the effect(s) of a "Dragoon Spirit" card: Once per turn, you can remove 2 White-Silver Counters from this card to activate 1 "White-Silver" Normal Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard.[/size][/font][/color][/center]

[Strider Tigerwolf]

Just like in the game, I plan on making these guys work best when only 3 are on the field, and Dart is the key play.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

Nothin? No comment, no nada?

[Strider Tigerwolf]

Bumping.

[HulkTySSJ2]

Nice. Pretty good OCG from what I seen at first glance. The only thing is the pictures themselves. Have you tried looking for better ones on DeviantArt or anywhere else?
Right now 7/10. I'll rate even higher with better pics.
Also...this is just a personal opinion on my part, but I still think the card maker here is a lot more realistic looking then on Yugico.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

I prefer the Yugico card maker because it's easier to managa, looks an awful lot better, and when you print the cards it actually does look like the Yugioh cards, plus the text is a little bit clearer to see.

That aside, no I have not looked for better pics...though I'm sure there are, and I shall be updating in a few!

[Strider Tigerwolf]

The 7 Spells (+2 Alt arts) of the Original Dragoon's have been released.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

No comments?

[HulkTySSJ2]

[quote name='Chance Furlong' timestamp='1353095582' post='6071237']
No comments?
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Hardly anyone comments here anymore. I've only been getting 1-2 comments on mine every month or 2...sometimes 3. Still, I always bump my thread to the 1st page when it reaches a different one.
Any luck finding new pics yet?

[Strider Tigerwolf]

Nopes. Gonna finish the set first before updating.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

I'ma bump this.

[Vinyl.]

OMG i LOVE LEGEND OF DRAGOON. makes me want to restart my Dragoon deck I started ages ago, finish it and post it. thanks for the boost. (and fyi, the merchant will try to rob you blind for the "water bottle" )

[Strider Tigerwolf]

Bumping with 2 Dragoons.

[Hermit Purple]

[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Since i've only heard of the game and haven't played it, i'll just go by what I see.

Dart - [/font]
[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Good Searcher with an added bonus if you decide to grab a specific card. Decent Stats. Good card for main focus [/font]

[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Lavitz - [/font]
[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Searchable by Dart and he's pretty good as a first turn card as well as that "Protector" effect that shifts the attack to him and buffs him up for doing so. Pretty cool.[/font]

[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Shana - [/font]
[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]So ,the Life Point effect is fine, but that 2nd effect seems pretty OP'd. [/font]You can target 1 card on the field which means you can use it on her as well and it cannot be destroyed or removed from the field, so basically just use the effect on her take the battle damage first turn and switch it to defense mode for a permanent wall. There might be a reason for that, but that sounds way to powerful.

[color=#000000][font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Rose - [/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]After seeing her info, i see now why she gets the "Dragoon Spirit" cards. She can also get over Stardust if there is another "The Dragoon" monster, but not being too powerful for an effect like that. That's fine.[/font][/color]

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[color=#000000][font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Much better than Karate Man i'll tell you that lol. Also a good starting card just like Lavitz. I guess i'll have to wait for the Memory Spell/Trap cards to be shown until i can talk about that[/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Albert - [/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]D[/font][/color][color=#000000][font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]on't even need to explain how good he is.[/font][/color]

[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Meru - Don't mess with Meru lol (i know i wouldn't want to)[/font]

[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Kongol - Goblin Attack Force / Lyla (Well that's what i compared it to when i first saw it. I'd say lower the attack by 100 but you probably have your reasons. It's good, but i think it's a bit too powerful (at least at 2300). Sure it's only Once while he's face-up on the field, but then again there can be other copies of the dude in hand (but, still you may have your reason for this)[/font]

[font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Miranda - Seems like the opposite of Shana at first glance. Burn instead of LP gain. As well as the related "leaving the field" effect that Shana has as well. The second effect can be used on Dart so that he can be reused again and that's really cool.[/font]

Good Monsters (I'd like to see the others, but i want to space out the replies). Only wish Shana didn't have an effect like that.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

Thanks for the review! Also, updated Shana's effect so it only targets "Dragoon" monsters.

[Hermit Purple]

[quote name='Chance Furlong' timestamp='1353968669' post='6078607']
Thanks for the review! Also, updated Shana's effect so it only targets "Dragoon" monsters.
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i guess the real problem i had with her effect is the part of it that says "cannot be removed from the field". It's one thing to not be destroyed by cards, but the fact it can't leave the field just defeats the purpose of not being destroyed by card effects

If you can see what I mean?

[Strider Tigerwolf]

The reason I did that is because there are cards that say "send" instead of "destroy" and such and I wanted an absolute protection from removal. Well not it's more "specific" where as Miranda's effect is more "generic". I'll be updating with a few more cards in just a moment.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

updated!

[Cute Rotten Yoshika]

[quote name='Chance Furlong' timestamp='1354031371' post='6079178']
The reason I did that is because there are cards that say "send" instead of "destroy" and such and I wanted an absolute protection from removal. Well not it's more "specific" where as Miranda's effect is more "generic". I'll be updating with a few more cards in just a moment.
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a better way to word it then would be "that target cannot be destroyed or sent to the Graveyard (by battle or card effects)" so that the effect you intend to have still exists but you dont have an invincible wall that cant be compulsed or grand moled or anything at all.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

The thing was that I didn't want the card to be compulsed or Grand Moled either .-.

[Cute Rotten Yoshika]

hmmm. thats a pretty dang powerful effect then. the way it currently stands that monster will absolutely not leave the field unless you choose it, or soul exchange/share the pain. you may want to attach a cost and/or time limit to that since its currently very VERY powerful.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

Forgot to edit the lore. It's only a "Dragoon" monster that can't leave the field by any means, not just a "card".

[Cute Rotten Yoshika]

i understand that its only a monster. but its still an invincible wall that if you change to defense mode protects your life points completely from battle damage? the only comparable cards that currently exist are yubel series and they have very high costs to stay on the field (not to mention theyre only protected from battle), while the selected monster really doesnt.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

The thing with the Yubel cards is that (not only is it a bad example), this card can only be activated once. Once the protection is gone, it's just a monster.

[Cute Rotten Yoshika]

but with its current wording there is no expiration to the effect. and shana can just be bounced to have her effect recycled. at the absolute least, adding "as long as The Dragoon's Bow - Shana is face-up on the field" would make it not so bad.