david14 Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 I worked really hard on this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 OCG errorsThe effect seems too original :?It's still fairly good though, 6.5/10 :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Pretty good for a new member, but it's hard to read the text. I'd go to one of the helps to see about help for getting your cards on the site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Pretty good for a new member' date=' but it's hard to read the text. [/quote'] use tinypic.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dude64 Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Nice.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slade Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 The text is kind of off; usually they capitalize Summon (e.g. When this card is Normal Summoned stuff happens). Not to mention, it's too Envoy-ish. It would be banned for the same reason Envoys were. In Traditional format, painful choice could get out a 3500 ATK monster in one turn. Followed by a Return from the Different Dimension, you'd essentially get a guaranteed OTK every time. (Remove from play to summon cards are usually overpowered. Try checking out the Sky Scourges for hints of what it could be like). EDIT: Also, why do people always make cards that are at least level 8? Why can't we have a new version of Kuriboh or something? Every card I click on seems to be level 10 with 3500+ ATK... yeesh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Effect should read: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 Warrior-type monsters in your graveyard from play. Once per turn, you may search your hand or deck for 1 Warrior-type monster and Special Summon it to your side of the field." Or something similar. Rating: 7.5/10 I see your new, so it's okay. The OCG was okay, needed some changes here an there. the pic isn't the best, and the name isn't too original. But overall good. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander mike Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 u spelled except wrong 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Effect should read: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 Warrior-type monsters in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn' date=' you may search your hand or deck for 1 Warrior-Type monster and Special Summon it to your side of the field." Or something similar. Rating: 7.5/10 I see your new, so it's okay. The OCG was okay, needed some changes here an there. the pic isn't the best, and the name isn't too original. But overall good. ^_^[/quote'] Said it all! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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