Just Crouton Posted November 15, 2012 Report Share Posted November 15, 2012 Too lazy to update + bump the old thread. Among many changes, I made the Xyzs more toolboxy and made the ROTA a Trap to make it slower. I made Odachi's perma shrink/veiler effect able to use outside of attacking to make it a Main Phase 2 response to Gorz/Tragoedia to make them useless. Rulings on names: "-Oni" =/= "Oni" The rulings for these are that "-Oni" (as in Oni is after a hyphen) is not the same as "Oni" (as in any card is a target for card [x]) That's why Gadget-Oni can recycle "Violent-Oni" and not "Oni-Spirits". [spoiler=Main Deck monsters] [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Barbaric-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Barbaric-O[/b][/color][color=#ff8c00][b]ni[/b][/color] If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects from the hand or Graveyard, until the end of the Damage Step. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Power-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Power-Oni[/b][/color] This card gains 100 ATK for each face-up monster your opponent controls. If an "-Oni" monster you control attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Bashing-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Bashing-Oni[/b][/color] When this monster battles an opponent's monster, unless the opponent's monster is destroyed by battle: It is returned to the top of the owner's Deck at the end of the Damage Step. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Sealing-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Sealing-Oni[/b][/color] Monsters cannot be Special Summoned from the Main Deck. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Vanguard-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Vanguard-Oni[/b][/color] If this card destroys a monster by battle: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "-oni" monster (from your Deck), other than "Demoni". While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Aura-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Aura-Oni[/b][/color] If your opponent activates a card effect that inflicts damage to you; Negate that damage, and this card gains ATK equal to that damage until your opponent's next End Phase. While this card is attached to a "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Hammer-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Hammer-Oni[/b][/color] If this card attacks, before damage calculation: You can target 1 Spell or Trap card your opponent controls; destroy that target. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Caller-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Caller-Oni[/b][/color] Once per turn, you can Normal Summon 1 "-Oni" monster in addition your Normal Summon or Set. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Curse-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Curse-Oni[/b][/color] All face-up Special Summoned monsters your opponent controls lose 400 ATK and DEF for each face-up "-Oni" monster you control. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Exorcist-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Exorcist-Oni[/b][/color] Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can target 1 face-up Special Summoned monster your opponent controls; this turn, this monster's effect(s) are negated. All face-up monsters you control must be FIRE Fiend-Type to activate and to resolve this effect. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Wild-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Wild-Oni[/b][/color] This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards, and cannot be targeted by effects. While this card is attached to a "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Brother-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Brother-Oni[/b][/color] When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: Special Summon 1 "Brother Token" (Fiend-Type/FIRE/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 400). While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Slasher-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Slasher-Oni[/b][/color] If you control a face-up "-Oni" monster with a different name, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). If this card attacks a Defense Position monster: Destroy that monster (without applying damage calculation). While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this effect: ● If this card attacks a Defense Position monster: Destroy that monster (without applying damage calculation). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Gadget-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Gadget-Oni[/b][/color] If this card destroys a monster by battle: You can add 1 "-Oni" card from your Graveyard to your hand. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Sentry-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Sentry-Oni[/b][/color] If an opponent's monster declares a direct attack: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, if this monster would be destroyed by battle: It is not. While this card is attached to an "-Oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this effect: ● Once per turn, this monster cannot be destroyed by battle. Each time this effect is applied, this monster loses 400 ATK and DEF at the end of the Damage Step. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL1Oni-Tiger.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Oni-Tiger[/b][/color] If you control a face-up "-Oni" monster, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn, you can either: Target 1 face-up "-Oni" monster you control; equip this card to that target, OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. While equipped by this effect, the equipped monster gains 800 ATK and DEF. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.) [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL1Departed-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Departed-Oni[/b][/color] If all the monsters in your Graveyard are FIRE: You can Tribute this card to target 2 Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monsters with different names in your Graveyard, except "Departed-Oni"; Special Summon those targets, but they cannot activate their effects or be used as Xyz Material this turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells] [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/SPELLShadow-of-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#00ff00][b]Shadow-of-Oni[/b][/color] Shuffle 1 monster you control into the Deck; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monster from your Deck. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/SPELLViolent-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#00ff00][b]Violent-Oni[/b][/color] Target 1 face-up "-Oni" monster you control; until the End Phase, it gains 800 ATK, and if it battles an opponent's monster: That monster's effect(s) is negated until the End Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps] [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/TRAPOni-Spirits.jpg[/img] [color=#cc0033][b]Oni-Spirits[/b][/color] Add 1 "-Oni" monster from your Deck to your hand. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/TRAPBackup-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#cc0033][b]Backup-Oni[/b][/color] Can only be activated if there are 3 or more "-Oni" monsters in your Graveyard. Target up to 2 Level 3 or 4 "-Oni" Monsters in your Graveyard; add those targets to your hand. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/TRAPTranscending-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#cc0033][b]Transcending-Oni[/b][/color] Target 1 Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monster OR 1 "-Oni" Xyz Monster with a Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monster as Xyz Material; equip this card to that target. That target is unaffected by the effects of monsters your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect while Set: Draw 1 card. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/TRAPOni-Lightning.jpg[/img] [color=#cc0033][b]Oni-Lightning[/b][/color] Tribute 1 face-up "-Oni" monster you control and target 2 cards your opponent controls; send them to the Graveyard. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/TRAPVengeful-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#cc0033][b]Vengeful-Oni[/b][/color] Target 1 "-Oni" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target in face-up Attack Position, then, if it is an Xyz Monster, attach this card to that target as Xyz Material. When this card leaves the field, destroy that target. When that target is destroyed, destroy this card. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Extra Deck monsters] [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK10Zen-Mugen-Oni-1.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Zen-Mugen-Oni[/b][/color] Must be Xyz Summoned by using 3 Rank 4 "-Oni" Xyz Monsters you control that were not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Materials, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn: You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 "-Oni" monsters from your hand or Graveyard. Their effect(s) are negated, and their ATK becomes 3000, also, they cannot attack directly or be used as Xyz Material. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK8Dai-Kyojin-Oni-1.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Dai-Kyojin-Oni[/b][/color] 3 Level 8 "-Oni" Monsters You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 "-Oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) If this card was Xyz Summoned this way, once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this card gains ATK equal to the detached Xyz Material until your opponent's next End Phase. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up "-Oni" monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster's original ATK is doubled. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK5Ikari-Ken-Oni-1.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Ikari-Ken-Oni[/b] 3 Level 5 "-Oni" Monsters[/color] [color=#000000]You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 "-Oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) If this card was Xyz Summoned this way, once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; destroy 2 monsters your opponent controls.[/color] [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK5Kaze-Ken-Oni-1.jpg[/img] [b]Kaze-Ken-Oni[/b] 3 Level 5 "-Oni" Monsters You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 "-Oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) If this card was Xyz Summoned this way, once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Destroy 2 Spell/Trap Cards your opponent controls. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK4Amazing-Oni-1.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Amazing-Oni[/b][/color] 3 Level 4 "-Oni" monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, and, if the detached Xyz Material is an "-Oni" monster; until your next End Phase, your opponent cannot Summon monsters with ATK equal to or lower than the ATK of the detached Xyz Material in the Graveyard. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK4Wildfire-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Wildfire-Oni[/b][/color] 2 Level 4 "-Oni" Monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this turn, if the monsters you control attack a monster, the target monster's ATK is halved during the Damage Step. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK4Splendor-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Splendor-Oni[/b][/color] 2 Level 4 "-Oni" Monsters Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; this turn, this card can attack every monster your opponent controls (one attack on each monster per Battle Phase). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK4Shamaness-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Shamaness-Oni[/b][/color] 2 Level 4 "-Oni" Monsters Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "-Oni" monster (from your hand or Graveyard). It cannot be used as Xyz Material this turn. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK4Odachi-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Odachi-Oni[/b][/color] 2 Level 4 "-Oni" Monsters If you declare an attack with this card, your opponent cannot activate Spell/Trap Cards or Effect Monster's effects until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; the target monster's ATK and DEF becomes 0, and it's effect(s) are negated, also, if your opponent controls another card in the same column as the target monster, destroy it. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted November 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2012 Zenoni added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuni Katt Posted November 22, 2012 Report Share Posted November 22, 2012 i think these are awesome i dont really have any criticism but great job!! 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinobi Phoenix Posted November 22, 2012 Report Share Posted November 22, 2012 [quote name='American Machismo!!!!!' timestamp='1353019674' post='6070585'] Too lazy to update + bump the old thread. Among many changes, I made the Xyzs more toolboxy and made the ROTA a Trap to make it slower. I made Odachi's perma shrink/veiler effect able to use outside of attacking to make it a Main Phase 2 response to Gorz/Tragoedia to make them useless. Rulings on names: - "-oni" =/= "Oni" The rulings for these are that "-oni" (as in as part of a word, on the end of the word, similar to Vehicroid) is not the same as "Oni" (as in anywhere else on the card name, i.e. Mugen-no-Oni, Dai-Kyojin-Oni, Onireikon, Oni-Totsu-Geki! etc.) That's why Koguoni can recycle "Gekidoni" and not "Onireikon". [spoiler=Main Deck monsters] [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Jakuoni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Jakuoni[/b][/color] If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects from the hand or Graveyard, until the end of the Damage Step. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Amazoni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Amazoni[/b][/color] When this monster battles an opponent's monster, unless the opponent's monster is destroyed by battle: It is returned to the bottom of the owner's Deck at the end of the Damage Step. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Kanaboni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Kanaboni[/b][/color] This card gains 100 ATK for each face-up monster your opponent controls. If an "-oni" monster you control attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Demoni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Demoni[/b][/color] If this card destroys a monster by battle: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "-oni" monster (from your Deck), other than "Demoni". While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Hadoni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Hadoni[/b][/color] If your opponent activates a card effect that inflicts damage to you; Negate that damage, and this card gains ATK equal to that damage until your opponent's next End Phase. While this card is attached to a "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Hanmaoni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Hanmaoni[/b][/color] If this card attacks, before damage calculation: You can target 1 Spell or Trap card your opponent controls; destroy that target. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Buredoni-1.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Buredoni[/b][/color] If you control a face-up "-oni" monster, other than "Buredoni", you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, it can make a second attack in a row. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this effect: ● Once per Battle Phase, if this card attacks a Defense Position monster, it can make a second attack in a row. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Aiboni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Aiboni[/b][/color] Once per turn, you can Normal Summon 1 "-oni" monster in addition your Normal Summon or Set. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Jubakuoni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Jubakuoni[/b][/color] All face-up Special Summoned monsters your opponent controls lose 400 ATK and DEF for each face-up "-oni" monster you control. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Kemononi.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Kemononi[/b][/color] This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards, and cannot be targeted by effects. While this card is attached to a "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Ijimekkoni-1.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Ijimekkoni[/b][/color] When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: Special Summon 1 "Brother Token" (Fiend-Type/FIRE/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 400). While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Bushidoni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Bushidoni[/b][/color] If you control a face-up "-oni" monster, other than "Bushidoni": You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster: Destroy that monster (without applying damage calculation). While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this effect: ● If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster: Destroy that monster (without applying damage calculation). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Koguoni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Koguoni[/b][/color] If this card destroys a monster by battle: You can add 1 "-oni" card from your Graveyard to your hand. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this card's effect(s). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Saegiruoni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Saegiruoni[/b][/color] If an opponent's monster declares a direct attack: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, if this monster would be destroyed by battle: It is not. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this effect: ● Once per turn, this monster cannot be destroyed by battle. Each time this effect is applied, this monster loses 400 ATK and DEF at the end of the Damage Step. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/LEVEL4Hayaioni.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Hayaioni[/b][/color] This card can attack your opponent directly. While this card is attached to an "-oni" Xyz Monster as Xyz Material: That Xyz Monster gains this effect: ● This card can attack your opponent directly, but the Battle Damage becomes 1000. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells] [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/SPELLGekidoni.jpg[/img] [color=#00ff00][b]Gekidoni[/b][/color] Target 1 face-up "-oni" monster you control; until the End Phase, it gains 800 ATK, and if it battles an opponent's monster: That monster's effect(s) is negated until the End Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps] [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/TRAPOnireikon.jpg[/img] [color=#cc0033][b]Onireikon[/b][/color] Add 1 "-oni" monster from your Deck to your hand. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/TRAPHojuoni.jpg[/img] [color=#cc0033][b]Hojuoni[/b][/color] Can only be activated if there are 3 or more "-oni" monsters in your Graveyard. Target up to 2 Level 3 or 4 "-oni" Monsters in your Graveyard; add those targets to your hand. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/TRAPZenoni.jpg[/img] [color=#cc0033][b]Zenoni[/b][/color] Target 1 Level 4 or lower "-oni" monster OR 1 "-oni" Xyz Monster with a Level 4 or lower "-oni" monster as Xyz Material; equip this card to that target. That target is unaffected by the effects of monsters your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect while Set: Draw 1 card. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/TRAPOni-Totsu-Geki.jpg[/img] [color=#cc0033][b]Oni-Totsu-Geki!!![/b][/color] Tribute 1 face-up "-oni" monster you control and target 2 cards your opponent controls; send them to the Graveyard. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/TRAPOnisaji.jpg[/img] [color=#cc0033][b]Onisaji[/b][/color] Can only be activated if your opponent Special Summons a monster(s). Special Summon Level 3 or 4 "-oni" monsters with different names up to a number equal to the number of monsters your opponent controls. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/TRAPFukushuoni.jpg[/img] [color=#cc0033][b]Fukushuoni[/b][/color] Target 1 "-oni" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target in face-up Attack Position, then, if it is an Xyz Monster, attach this card to that target as Xyz Material. When this card leaves the field, destroy that target. When that target is destroyed, destroy this card. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Extra Deck monsters] [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK10Zen-Mugen-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Zen-Mugen-Oni[/b][/color] Must be Xyz Summoned by using 3 Rank 4 "-oni" Xyz Monsters you control that were not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Materials, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn: You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 "-oni" monsters from your hand or Graveyard. Their effect(s) are negated, and their ATK becomes 3000, also, they cannot attack directly or be used as Xyz Material. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK8Dai-Kyojin-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Dai-Kyojin-Oni[/b][/color] 3 Level 8 "-oni" Monsters You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 "-oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) If this card was Xyz Summoned this way, once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this card gains ATK equal to the detached Xyz Material until your opponent's next End Phase. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up "-oni" monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster's original ATK is doubled. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK5Ikari-Ken-Oni.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Ikari-Ken-Oni[/b] 3 Level 5 "-oni" Monsters[/color] [color=#000000]You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 "-oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) If this card was Xyz Summoned this way, once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; destroy 2 monsters your opponent controls.[/color] [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK5Kaze-Ken-Oni.jpg[/img] [b]Kaze-Ken-Oni[/b] 3 Level 5 "-oni" Monsters You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 "-oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) If this card was Xyz Summoned this way, once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Destroy 2 Spell/Trap Cards your opponent controls. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK4Enmaoni.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Enmaoni[/b][/color] 2 Level 4 "-oni" Monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this turn, if the monsters you control attack a monster, the target monster's ATK is halved during the Damage Step. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK4Soreioni.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Soreioni[/b][/color] 2 Level 4 "-oni" Monsters Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; this turn, this card can attack every monster your opponent controls (one attack on each monster per Battle Phase). [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK4Helloni.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Helloni[/b][/color] 2 Level 4 "-oni" Monsters Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "-oni" monster (from your hand or Graveyard). It cannot be used as Xyz Material this turn. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK4Odachioni.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Odachioni[/b][/color] 2 Level 4 "-oni" Monsters If you declare an attack with this card, your opponent cannot activate Spell/Trap Cards or Effect Monster's effects until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; the target monster's ATK and DEF becomes 0, and it's effect(s) are negated, also, if your opponent controls another card in the same column as the target monster, destroy it. [/spoiler] [/quote] I'm more than certain that you have that "ruling" wrong. [u]Please show an example[/u] of why you think it is correct, because Roids don't follow what you are doing with your own cards. "-(word)" would look for "-(word)" not any card with "(no dash)(word)" in the name. Roids look for "roid" not "-roid". Even the Neos cards have cards with Neos spelled with a space in between Neo and S (Neo Space Pathfinder), and that is still more correct than what you're doing. From the real game, Gem-Knight cards all look for "Gem-" (and you can look that up on [b][url="http://www.db.yugioh-card.com/yugiohdb/card_search.action"]Konami's Official TCG Database[/url][/b]). On the opposite side, try searching for [color=#ff0000][b]"-[/b][/color] with "Search By Card Text" parameter and see how many results come up. [Spoiler=Hint:]It's less than 1.[/spoiler] Searching for -" brings up any card in the game that looks up a word that has a dash ( - ) at the end of a name (because a name would in quotes such as "name-". This currently will bring up ALL the Gem-Knight cards as they are the only cards in the game that look for a name with a dash in it where the dash is at the end followed by the closing quote. The opposite search as I said... brings up a whopping zero results. Long Story Short, none of your cards work as intended ironically because while you are correct that "-oni" is not the same as "Oni" or even "oni" (though I will check on if capitol letters really matter except in the case of HEROes), you have applied this INCORRECTLY on your own cards as all of them are "oni" but the effects LOOK for "-oni" as in (dash)oni as the search parameter for deciding condition accuracy. You have to rename all of them or redo all your effect text. Period. 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Just Crouton Posted November 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 [quote name='Shinobi Phoenix' timestamp='1353607472' post='6075645'] Stuff [/quote] "-" indicates "oni" appears on the end of a word (Kanaboni) to avoid confusion with the other cards (Kaze-Ken-Oni, Oni-Totsu-Geki, Onireikon.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cuzmAZN Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 [quote name='American Machismo!!!!!' timestamp='1353019674' post='6070585'] [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Oni%20Level%204/RANK4Odachioni.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]Odachioni[/b][/color] 2 Level 4 "-oni" Monsters If you declare an attack with this card, your opponent cannot activate Spell/Trap Cards or Effect Monster's effects until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; the target monster's ATK and DEF becomes 0, and it's effect(s) are negated, also, if your opponent controls another card in the same column as the target monster, destroy it. [/quote] Hi there! Very wonderful work! I like the deck overall, very nice effects and artworks. I love those girls, LOL! However, I think this card is too overpower. Only with 2 Level 4 Monsters, you can disable all defense and effects of your opponent, and it is a Continuous effect. Also, you can use 1 material to overcome even the Monster with highest ATK by alternating its ATK to 0, that's broken. Moreover, it gains effect(s) of the overlaid material(s) which adds much more field control power to its player, such as Special Summoning after destroying a Monster, destroy a Spell/Trap... Another point is when you XYZ Summon this card, you have the right to place the card to the column of either material Monsters, which hints that you can destroy any Spell/Trap card you choose to. In short, you can freely use this card to attack with fears of neither opponent's back row nor effect(s) (including flip effect(s), effect(s) that is activated in Graveyard, hand, banish zone, or in the Extra Deck) in response, then manipulate the field severely with only 2 Level 4 Monster(s). If you could limit its advantages or create some drawbacks, I think it would be more realistic. Very nice work again. Thanks for the sharing . Tim. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted November 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 [quote name='cuzmAZN' timestamp='1353664209' post='6076125'] Hi there! Very wonderful work! I like the deck overall, very nice effects and artworks. I love those girls, LOL! However, I think this card is too overpower. Only with 2 Level 4 Monsters, you can disable all defense and effects of your opponent, and it is a Continuous effect. Also, you can use 1 material to overcome even the Monster with highest ATK by alternating its ATK to 0, that's broken. Moreover, it gains effect(s) of the overlaid material(s) which adds much more field control power to its player, such as Special Summoning after destroying a Monster, destroy a Spell/Trap... Another point is when you XYZ Summon this card, you have the right to place the card to the column of either material Monsters, which hints that you can destroy any Spell/Trap card you choose to. In short, you can freely use this card to attack with fears of neither opponent's back row nor effect(s) (including flip effect(s), effect(s) that is activated in Graveyard, hand, banish zone, or in the Extra Deck) in response, then manipulate the field severely with only 2 Level 4 Monster(s). If you could limit its advantages or create some drawbacks, I think it would be more realistic. Very nice work again. Thanks for the sharing . Tim. [/quote] Odachi only hits 1 monster at a time, and only destroys the S/T that is behind the monster it targets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted December 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2012 Too many Onis to keep track of (I made several sub-archetypes that haven't been posted yet.) Simplied the names to make them easier to distinguish. Also, added Oni-Tiger, Departed-Oni, Shadow-of-Oni, and Amazing-Oni. Dropped the Counter Trap that gives Onis up to the number of your opponent's monsters when they Special Summon because Departed-Oni. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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