Rocket Grunt Posted November 18, 2012 Report Share Posted November 18, 2012 This is my second attempt at making some cards here at YCM. I wanted to make a set of cards called "Colossus" cards. Basically, they are creatures that have high levels and do serious damage. I only have some of the monsters done so far, but I am excited to keep this project going Please let me know what you think! I wanted to start out by having at least 1 colossus of type. As you can see, I've only got a few of them done so far. [spoiler='1st Set of Monster Cards'] [img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/insect.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/fish.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/fiend.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/fairy.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/dragon.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/dinosaur.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/beast-warrior.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/beast.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/Aqua.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/plant.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/psychic.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/pyro.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/reptile.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/rock.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/sea-serpent.jpg[/img][img]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/spellcaster.jpg[/img][IMG]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/thunder.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/warrior.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/winged-beast.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m75/s3soar2006/ygo%20colossus/zombie.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] Again, please let me know what you think and what you think cool Colossus effects might be like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictorSempra Posted November 18, 2012 Report Share Posted November 18, 2012 Your spoiler messed up matey.Mort is the only one I have a problem with. Mort's effect could be REALLY abusable, perhaps tone the damage it does a little inb4 gravedump.dek appears and rapes the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocket Grunt Posted November 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2012 Ha thanks! I'll tone it down Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictorSempra Posted November 18, 2012 Report Share Posted November 18, 2012 Other than that, these seems rather interesting Can't wait to see what kind of support you come up with for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocket Grunt Posted November 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2012 Cool, thanks. I'm going to upload some more tonight I'm planning on making a lot of the support cards that will aid Colossus monsters to come to the field faster / with less tributes. I think that is their drawback - the fact that they all require sacrifices in order to come onto the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocket Grunt Posted November 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2012 Okay I just uploaded 3 more I finished the Colossuses of Plant, Psychic, and Pyro types. Please let me know what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocket Grunt Posted November 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2012 Alright, I just uploaded 3 more Colossus monsters: the reptile, the rock, and the sea-serpent. Please give me some feedback Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocket Grunt Posted November 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2012 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocket Grunt Posted November 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2012 I just added the spellcaster Colossus. Please give me some feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hermit Purple Posted November 20, 2012 Report Share Posted November 20, 2012 Ill talk about the first 2 cards right now (doin homework atm ) Mortemcilia - Not too bad, although my opponent drawing 1 card makes me think about when to SPecial Summon it from the Graveyard, its not THAT bad. (If it was like a generic Treeborn Frog effect, I would like it much better.) I Should also mention that having this card in your Grave almost always guarantees a Level 5 Xyz Material. Also on its last effect, what do you gain? (Missing) Canceris - First line should read (This card cannot be targeted by card effects.) Second should read (While your Life Points are lower than your opponent's, this card cannot be destroyed by battle.) Last line should read (You can send 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to target 1 "Colossus" monster you control; It can attack your opponent directly, but the battle damage inflicted is halved)(Pretty sure on that one, but anyone feel free to correct me if i'm wrong) It seems okay, pretty good wall, idk if he's worth the 2 tributes but then again, i wouldn't be attacking with this guy anyway. I still have to see the other guys to know whether or not it's attack directly effect is OP or not, but so far, the cards aren't so bad. just some OCG fixes here and there ,so ill say....8/10 for the moment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurazaki Daisuke Posted November 20, 2012 Report Share Posted November 20, 2012 Dude, your cards are incredible *.* The pics are awesome and the effects are also cool I think you let that pass on the OCG in Iumentum when you wrote "face-up" twice referring to the "Colossus" monsters for its ATK and DEF gain effect And, I'm not really in the nowadays' meta game but, I think Pedolo is a little OP'ed because you can use his effect as you wish by just decresing your ATK and DEF and he gains ATK for each Colossus on field and get his attack back during your next turn, and back when I paid attencion at the meta game cards that discarded cards from the other player's hand were usually semi or limited, if not forbidden, I believe a solution would be limit the effect for a Once per turn and maybe add a cost, like Tribute a Colossus monster, but it's just a suggestion so please don't take it too seriously ^^" One more time great work, hope to see the rest of this set soon~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocket Grunt Posted November 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2012 Thanks for the input everyone !!! I'm glad that you guys like them and I will make the necessary changes to the OP cards (ie maybe Mortemicilia, Pedolo, Canceris... but def I think I will work on Pedolo) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocket Grunt Posted November 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2012 Alright, I just finished adding Fragor (thunder), Bellator (warrior), Fugama (winged-beast), and Mortuus (zombie). That completes my 1st wave of monsters ! So, I now have a Colossus monster for each Type. I will go on and add supporting monsters and Spell/Trap cards now ... ... ...But, first things first, I am going to edit the cards that you guys have noted may need some adjusting . Thanks again for the feedback! Please rate and tell me what you think about my cards ! Thanks!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granzteel Posted December 28, 2012 Report Share Posted December 28, 2012 Those monsters made me remember Duel Masters, cause its image is so awesome! THAT tempest, once you figure a way to bring it back and forth your field and hand, you're immortalized! I'm sure 300 LP won't hurt so bad, and you just need the WATER colossi for the summon the ultimate badass colossus > Your cards are very versatile that it can be played with various styles, and it'll be much more if you add spell/trap cards, and some cool Synchro and Xyz monsters, maybe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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