animegirl1363 Posted November 22, 2012 Report Share Posted November 22, 2012 A place for Role-Playing, online game fan cards. [center]REPs are welcomed[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unroyal_Paladin Posted November 22, 2012 Report Share Posted November 22, 2012 Nice cards, although I have two questions there. They're not really criticism, or praise, just questions about things I don't get, which leave me confused. I don't do criticism about grammar, although maybe you should read other Yugioh cards for comparision. If it just annoys you to make effects 'in the pro language' , it's ok. So, about the questions... 1) The type of the monsters is... 'Normal', if I read that right. What's that supposed to be? A special type just to them? *confused...* 2) About the Female Brawler monster... except that the poison guy is more likely to be an archer rather than a brawler ( correct me if I'm wrong ) I didn't quite get the effect of that card. If both monsters aren't destroyed by that battle, the effect works, no problem (I guess it activates in the standby phase). But what happens when brawler leaves the field? Normally monster effects disappear when the monster is removed from the field. Just to get this straight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♦~Thug-Life~♦ Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 Love the idea. The card's statistics are fine, and the effects looked balanced. "Striker" and "Female Nen Master"'s effects are in my opinion under powered. OCG needs major work. Other than that, it's an okay start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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