Beast-Warrior Single (Siobhan)

[LeguBrit]

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Lore:
When this card is Normal Summoned while you control another FIRE monster, you can change the battle position of 1 Monster on your opponents side of the Field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can draw 1 card. If that card is a FIRE Monster card, you can pay Life Points equal to its Level x 200, and Special Summon that Monster. It cannot attack in the turn it is Summoned. If it is a non-FIRE Monster, Spell or Trap card, it is Banished from your hand. This effect can only be activated once per duel.

Rate/Hate/COMMENT. All that matters to me is the opinions of others

[Zazubat]

OCG fix, may not be 100 % correct: If you contorl a FIRE monster: When this card is Normal Summoned: You can change the battle position of 1 Monster on your Opponent's field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can draw 1 card. If that card is a Monster Card: You can pay Life Points equal to its Level x 200; Special Summon that Monster. It cannot attack until the End Phase. If it is a Spell or Trap Card; Banish it. This effect can only be activated once per Duel.

Card, well 200 x 12 is 2400 so that's the most you will ever have to pay, not the biggest deal really, so the once per Duel thing is kidna redundant IMO. I think it's too OP. Maybe make it FIRE monsters only? If you want a good card that SS upon levels x damage, try [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gishki_Photomirror"]Gishki Photomirror[/url]. I hate how 1900 atk monsters never have costs for being a 1900 atk monster, but Konami does it too, so I guess I can't complain, just seems too strong still.

[LeguBrit]

I knew the effect was OP, that's why I made it once per duel. Besides, if you have a deck with 20 monsters, 10 spells and 10 traps for example, and your first hand is 3 monsters, 2 spells and 1 trap (17:8:9) that means that you have a 17/34 chance of drawing a monster. Those odds are still pretty bad, and with the damage you would take, IMHO it's anything but OP. Anyway, 1900 ATK OP monster, have you ever heard of Flamvell Firedog? At least Siobhan isn't searchable by Firedog OR Rekindling.

[YugiohNewb]

I used a picture with that same wolf in on my topic :3. I think its a decent enough card. I would personally change the once per duel part of the effect. I would put something at the start like "If this card is normal summoned successfully,(effect here). But what do i know i only have 1 star I like this card 8/10

[Sora1499]

Honestly, the card is fine, it just needs a few little tweaks. It's not a Rekindling nor a Firedog target, and it can change the tide of a duel a bit but really not to the point of unfairness. You can either flip a face-down for some damage or run over a big boss with a mini boss you control, that's it. Then, when it is sent to the grave, you get a +, which isn't horrible. The ability to SS the drawn card is decent, and good if you draw a high level monster or something like rabbit, and this is what would make it a staple. Which leads me to my 1 problem with the card: its effect to SS the monster drawn might be a tweak too strong because you can, theoretically, Xyz or synch with this, draw a card like rabbit, lightpulsar, inzektor dragonfly or Guiaba, SS it, then net a plus with that monster. I'd restrict it to SSing a limited amount of targets, like FIRE monsters only, for example. After you restrict the sheer number of targets, the card is perfectly fine.

[LeguBrit]

Yeah, now that I think about it I should really change it to just FIRE monsters. Thanks for the review!