lennon7441 Posted November 27, 2012 Report Share Posted November 27, 2012 [img]http://i49.tinypic.com/30tozg7.jpg[/img] [img]http://i50.tinypic.com/2ymsocn.jpg[/img] [img]http://i49.tinypic.com/2myurlz.jpg[/img] [img]http://i49.tinypic.com/wl4qp2.jpg[/img] [img]http://i46.tinypic.com/332wg8n.jpg[/img] [img]http://i49.tinypic.com/21ccwvn.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forums and Card Games Posted November 28, 2012 Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 Not to be hurtful or anything, but these cards are so unbalanced. And the grammar. Oh the grammar. Its a decent idea, but needs to be balanced and corrected of grammar mistakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lennon7441 Posted November 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 can you tell me how to fix gramer anyone please can anybody help me give me some ways and cards and stuff like that younow give me the link please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forums and Card Games Posted November 28, 2012 Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 Capitalize the first word in each sentence, Capitalize the first letter of each word in the card name and put quotation marks around them. Put periods at the end of sentences. The basics. The cards can be decent cards if those were fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiohNewb Posted November 28, 2012 Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 these are really good cards (for joke cards) but the grammar in this isn't really that good sorry .You need to find better pics friend. --> 5/10. if these were fixed i would go higher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lennon7441 Posted November 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 thanks you just made my day thanks lennon7441 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiohNewb Posted November 28, 2012 Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 [quote name='lennon7441' timestamp='1354108895' post='6080040'] thanks you just made my day thanks lennon7441 [/quote] i hope i didn't make you feel sad. But i really do have to admit with a little bit of work these will become amazing cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lennon7441 Posted November 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 really thanks i love your comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictorSempra Posted November 28, 2012 Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 Might as well villianize myself a little here. Besides the grammar errors which are an easy fix.....there needs to be either more, or edits. Something that links all these together, you know? And then just fixing the attacks and defenses to be more balanced, unless again, you have cards that will unite these into a theme and boost them up dramatically. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lennon7441 Posted November 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2012 thanks canj you help me i need to know how to bdo all of that you said leave comments on how to do this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiohNewb Posted November 29, 2012 Report Share Posted November 29, 2012 good luck with other cards friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lennon7441 Posted November 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2012 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johan Liebert Posted November 30, 2012 Report Share Posted November 30, 2012 3/10 sorry dude, but punctuation/ spelling sucks plus pictures and descriptions suck too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lennon7441 Posted November 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2012 okay how do you link cards together ive been waiting for someone to tell me so please comment and by the way do any of you have school cus your up at atleast 1 am Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hermit Purple Posted November 30, 2012 Report Share Posted November 30, 2012 Here's what you can do... 1. Find a Win Condition with your cards. (What can these cards do with each other that helps them achieve the goal of winning the duel? I'd suggest looking at real cards and seeing how they work together (six sams, wind-ups, etc). After thats done you can give them stats, fix grammar mistakes (OCG), and above all, try not to make them too broken. I'd say thats a basic guideline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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