naruto8825 Posted December 2, 2012 Report Share Posted December 2, 2012 [spoiler='Jorah '][img]http://i48.tinypic.com/vdytf.jpg[/img] During either player's turn, if you control a face-up "Targaryen" monster: You can send this card from your hand to the Graveyard; for the rest of this turn, you take no Battle Damage and "Targaryen" monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Jamie Lannister '][img]http://i46.tinypic.com/dxfitz.jpg[/img] If you control 2 or more face-up "Lannister" monsters, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Your opponent can only activate 1 Spell/Trap Card each turn. If this card would be destroyed, you can destroy a face-up "Lannister" monster you control instead.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Jon Snow'][img]http://i45.tinypic.com/m9mxco.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Ned Stark'][img]http://i46.tinypic.com/v7upd.jpg[/img] Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned with "Call to the Throne" and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Special Summoned: Target 1 card on the field; destroy that target. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictorSempra Posted December 2, 2012 Report Share Posted December 2, 2012 Jaime is a Shogun SHien copy. Jon is HORRIBLY underpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naruto8825 Posted December 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2012 I felt Shogun shien's effect fit him well, I use other cards' effects for my cards if i see they fit well is this a problem? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictorSempra Posted December 2, 2012 Report Share Posted December 2, 2012 Sort of, yeah. It shows a lack of creativity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naruto8825 Posted December 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2012 I understand where your coming from I'm just so bad at creating my own effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted December 4, 2012 Report Share Posted December 4, 2012 A good attempt. I like the fact you didn't just use pictures from the HBO series for all of them. Just a few things: "Ser Jorah Mormont" should probably be an EARTH-Type, after all the sigil for House Mormont is a bear. You should also probably reduce his ATK and DEF somewhat, because he would no longer be in peak physical condition for a human, which is what I think of what you gave him. I do like that you made him so he can be tributed to save Dany, but I think you should specify that the effect is for Dany: Mormont himself seems to have no special loyalty for Viserys. It would also probably help if you could use his effect when he's on the Field. I look forward to seeing how you can return him to the hand or Field so you can use this effect more than once in the duel. "Ser Jaime Lannister" has an effect that suits him well. He could also probably get a boost when "Queen Cersei Lannister" is also on the Field. "Jon Snow, Bastard of Winterfell" should probably not gain a power boost from all monsters with "Stark" in their name. The first reason is because not all Starks like him, especially not "Lady Catelyn Stark." But he probably should get a boost from his siblings, until he joins the Night's Watch. You should also probably change the effect so he doesn't get a boost from Tony Stark. Also, while he has excellent swordsman training because he trained beside Robb, depending on when you picked him up he might need his stats downgraded slightly. I picked him up just before he joined the Night's Watch. "Lord Eddard Stark, King's Hand" has an effect that does not make sense, nor does his name. Ned never made any claim for Robert's throne, and would not have -- in fact he stepped down from it in order to hand control of the kingdoms over to Robert after Jaime slew Arys. You should probably make him easier to summon, and give him a boost from any "House Stark" monster, or even from Robert himself. If you want to see what I did, I have Jon and Arya as part of my Azure Wing Deck, in the Dungeon Crawlers Set. They also have Ghost and Nymeria respectively, together with [i]Longclaw[/i] and [i]Needle[/i]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♦~Thug-Life~♦ Posted December 5, 2012 Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 Game of Thrones......... never heard of it, but it seems medieval so may start watching it. Pictures are okay, and effects seem rather strange. They depend on cards that you haven't made so make the cards. Don't just have the effects based on other cards because that can go down hill. Nice attempt though. Some cards are underpowered, but OCG seems okay. Good job. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictorSempra Posted December 5, 2012 Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 [quote name='TheSalsaBro' timestamp='1354682953' post='6085722'] Game of Thrones......... never heard of it, but it seems medieval so may start watching it. Pictures are okay, and effects seem rather strange. They depend on cards that you haven't made so make the cards. Don't just have the effects based on other cards because that can go down hill. Nice attempt though. Some cards are underpowered, but OCG seems okay. Good job. 8/10. [/quote]It's a book series, bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♦~Thug-Life~♦ Posted December 5, 2012 Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 It's on air too bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictorSempra Posted December 5, 2012 Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 The books are a far better experience. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♦~Thug-Life~♦ Posted December 5, 2012 Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 I don't read though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted December 5, 2012 Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 [i]A Song of Ice & Fire[/i], by George R. R. Martin, is a series of fantasy books that take place in a medieval setting with little magic (at least to start). The series is appropriate for a mature audience/reader, as it contains copious amounts of gore, sex, course language, etc. [b]It is not appropriate for children, even though it has child characters.[/b] [i]ASOIAF[/i] consists of 5 books so far: - [i]A Game of Thrones[/i] - [i]A Clash of Kings[/i] - [i]A Storm of Swords[/i] - [i]A Feast For Crows[/i] - [i]A Dance With Dragons[/i] Two more books are currently planned. Martin has also written two short stories that take place within the same universe, but a thousand years prior to the events of [i]GoT[/i]. They are [i]The Hedge Knight[/i] and [i]The Sworn Sword[/i]. Both have been adapted into graphic novels by Marvel. This series is marked by rotating chapters through which Martin writes according to a different character's perspective. While he writes a perspective character's chapter, he treats him or her as a protagonist, and as longtime fans have learned, each character is equally expendable (everyone has watched at least 1 favourite character die, so a meme here has become that Martin likes any series where characters are introduced, then die off, like [i]Sword Art Online[/i]). Many fans compare it to [i]The Sopranos[/i]. I like to think of it as Tolkien meets Ludlum (as in the [i]Bourne Trilogy[/i]). [i]ASOIAF[/i] will be entering its third season as an HBO series this April. All being well, [i]Game of Thrones[/i] will continue through all the books, until they are all complete. The first series has 12 1-hour episodes. The second series has 10 1-hour episodes. Just the first series outruns movie series like [i]Harry Potter[/i] for run-time, thus conveying the series's complexity even though it skips many things. HBO's [i]Game of Thrones[/i] is very popular because even though it is a fantasy series, the fact it uses very little magic means that even those who do not consider themselves fantasy geeks can enjoy it. It has also brought greater readership to the books, because audiences to the TV series have many questions. Again it is important to note that [b]it does not flinch from showing blood and gore[/b]. [i]Game of Thrones[/i] is also being adapted into a series of graphic novels (this one is not by Marvel, and it is extremely well don, judging by volume 1 of the first book). It also has its own TCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike_destrall Posted December 6, 2012 Report Share Posted December 6, 2012 [quote name='Xi-3' timestamp='1354582011' post='6084519'] "Lord Eddard Stark, King's Hand" has an effect that does not make sense, nor does his name. Ned never made any claim for Robert's throne, and would not have -- in fact he stepped down from it in order to hand control of the kingdoms over to Robert after Jaime slew Arys. You should probably make him easier to summon, and give him a boost from any "House Stark" monster, or even from Robert himself. [/quote] i cant see the card for some reason but if it is lord eddard stark king's hand i dont see how that name doesnt make sense since he was in fact the kings hand... the effect is to generic and i think he looks more to protect than to destroy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted December 6, 2012 Report Share Posted December 6, 2012 [quote name='mike_destrall' timestamp='1354814168' post='6086820'] i cant see the card for some reason but if it is lord eddard stark king's hand i dont see how that name doesnt make sense since he was in fact the kings hand... the effect is to generic and i think he looks more to protect than to destroy [/quote]He called the card "The King of the North, Eddard Stark." I changed the names in my post to make them reflect the characters better. To be clear in this case, it was Robb Stark who lay the claim to the title "King in the North." yet the picture shows a long-haired man holding a greatsword ([i]Ice[/i]) in front of a weirwood's hearttree. That makes the picture's subject Ned Stark, King Robert's loyal friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naruto8825 Posted December 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2012 Well Ned was King of The North at one point if I decide to make more I'll fix all issues Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted December 10, 2012 Report Share Posted December 10, 2012 No, Ned was never a king. He was the Warden of the North, which means he was protecting the Northern lands and its people in the name of the king. Note what he says at the execution ceremony near the beginning. I believe the speech includes something about dispatching justice in the name of King Robert Baratheon. Eddard was always loyal to Robert. He acted in the other's name, and even stepped down from the throne after he got it from Jaime, so he could hand it over to Robert. Lord Eddard Stark was never a king, or laid claim to any crown. That honour goes to Robb, as the "Young Wolf" and the "King in the North." Please, in the future, practice your due diligence and do research on the subject. I am doing the same right now, as I am working on a [i]Sword Art Online[/i] set: the anime is in the Fairy Dance Arc, so I am reading the light novels to get the information I need for the other arcs. Although I have some information, since I lack a feel for the later versions and characters you will not see the cards until I have finished all the volumes, even though I could otherwise simply use the wikis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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