Zazubat Posted December 5, 2012 Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 [img]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/RootofExistencePerksian-1.png[/img] Did I make the second effect too strong? Also, I think I might have worded it a little off. Can anyone help me with that. Plus, can't you just say, "Can only be Special Summoned..."? This card cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must first be Special Summoned by Tributing from either side of the field; 2 or more Xyz Monsters with the same name. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Xyz Materials sent to the Graveyard x 700.When this card is Special Summon this way: You can destroy cards on your opponent controls equal number of Plant-Type monsters sent to the Graveyard to Summon this card. If anyone gets the naming you get free internets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynchroTuner Posted December 5, 2012 Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 Yes, your OCG is a bit wrong. IMO The card itself seems fine, though tributing only monster with the same name seems a little difficult. Any specific monster were you thinking of while making the card? Though since it is either side of the field, ok, by xyz summoning the same monster as your opponent. This could although burn through a lot of your precious xyz monsters since it requires their xyz materials to be sent to the grave to get its atk. That's UP. But the second effect, yes, a little powerful but not so much, since the chances of your opponent using plant are slim and you using them yourself only would mean less atk points. Could be used though to get rid of opponent's xyz at the cost of own at the samt time getting a monster with decent atk points(if...). +700 for each would mean 2800 which is the usual for 2 xyz with 2 materials, that too if all of them were plants.. So, more or less, fine I would give this 6/10. OCG(I think)- Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must first be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 or more Xyz Monsters from either side of the field with the same name. When you do: You can destroy cards your opponent controls equal to the number of Plant-Type Monsters sent to the Graveyard to summon this card. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Xyz Materials sent to the Graveyard x 700. Okay. this is seriously not like you Zaziuma. What hapened? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted December 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 It can really be used for any Xyz monster, level 3's are easy to get out because of Tour Guide. Levaiar and Zenmaines are pretty handy, and they're also common in most deck because of their usefulness. Now for the OCG: I disagree with you on the first part. It's suppose to be "Must first be..." as seen on [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Dark_Necrofear"]Dark Necrofear[/url]. Though you're right about the first part. I didn't make it clear that it needs to be 2 cards, so I changed that. There's a space between x and the number as seen on [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fortune_Lady_Light"]Fortune Lady[/url] cards. By this way? Are you drunk xD I thought it was on your opponent's side of the field, I guess my modern OCG is a bit off. I'll have an updated version up in a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynchroTuner Posted December 6, 2012 Report Share Posted December 6, 2012 Yes, you are right, there is a space between x and the number. Typing error by me. I thought it was not supposed to be summoned by other ways. It's hard to know since the font size is pretty small and you also haven't posted the lore. Which part are you referring to regarding "By this way?" I am/was definitely not drunk, neither do I drink. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted December 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2012 [quote name='SynchroTuner' timestamp='1354790457' post='6086644'] Yes, you are right, there is a space between x and the number. Typing error by me. I thought it was not supposed to be summoned by other ways. It's hard to know since the font size is pretty small and you also haven't posted the lore. Which part are you referring to regarding "By this way?" I am/was definitely not drunk, neither do I drink. [/quote]I thought it was readable, to me it is. I'll add the lore. I'm ferering to this: When this card is Special Summoned by this way: There's no need for "by" in that sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynchroTuner Posted December 6, 2012 Report Share Posted December 6, 2012 Okay. I think you are right. But, if we change the order, the lore would be, I think, as I have edited in my previous post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted December 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2012 [quote name='SynchroTuner' timestamp='1354805691' post='6086723'] Okay. I think you are right. But, if we change the order, the lore would be, I think, as I have edited in my previous post. [/quote]not quite sure what you mean here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynchroTuner Posted December 7, 2012 Report Share Posted December 7, 2012 I mean that we don't have to put the by this way part if we can just say "When you do:" Check my first comment for the lore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted December 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2012 [quote name='SynchroTuner' timestamp='1354876201' post='6087464'] I mean that we don't have to put the by this way part if we can just say "When you do:" Check my first comment for the lore. [/quote]oh I see, it wasn't edited when I saw it, so I didn't see the change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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