Slimes!

[gimmepie]

We all know Revival Jam, the slime ball thing that looked cool in the anime but actually sucks beyond any possible doubt. Well here are some new cards for the slime/jam archetype that should hopefully make it at least almost decent. Unfortunately the images are still messed up after all >.>, I'll repost from yugico later

[img]http://i.imgur.com/UIz2E.jpg[/img]
Effect: While face-up on the field this cards name is treated as "Revival Jam". When this card is destroyed by an opponents card (by battle or by card effect) you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon it during your next Stand-by phase. When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect destroy one card on the field.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/TrTnJ.jpg[/img]
Effect: While face-up on the field this cards name is treated as "Revival Jam". When this card is destroyed by an opponents card (by battle or by card effect) you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon it during your next Stand-by phase. When this card is destroyed by battle you can add one "Slime" or "Jam" card from your deck to your hand.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/DEdMp.jpg[/img]
Effect: This face-up cards name is treated as "Revival Jam". When this card is destroyed by an opponents card (by battle or by card effect) you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon this card in your next stand-by phase. When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard you can pay 800 Life Points: Add one "Sludge" from your graveyard or deck to your hand.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/l98o4.jpg[/img]
Effect: This face-up cards name is treated as "Revival Jam". When this card is destroyed by an opponents card (by battle or by card effect) you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon this card in your next stand-by phase. Your opponent takes all battle damage from a battle involving this card.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/eRmjF.jpg[/img]
Effect: Neither player loses Life Points due to the effect of a "Jam" or "Slime" monster. Only "Jam" and "Slime" monsters can be Special Summoned. If this face-up card would be destroyed by your opponents an opponents card effect, you can tribute one "Revival Jam" instead.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/PcIT1.jpg[/img]
Effect: 3 Level 4 Aqua Monsters
This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn you can detach one Xyz material from this card: Equip one face-up monster on the field to this card. This card gains ATK equal to the level of an equipped monster x200. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect that targets this one card: Destroy an equipped card instead.

Probably more cards coming (thinking a card for spamming, a card for draw power and a card to reverse the effect they have on your LP)

Review and con/crit please!

[Shinobi Phoenix]

Please realize that most people aren't going to be able to comment on your cards because you haven't posted any of the stats yourself.


As you yourself stated, the images you are using from Yugico are broken, so then [u]why have you not posted the FULL information on the cards[/u], rather than just the effects? We don't see the names, ATK, DEF, Type, Attribute, or Levels. Nothing at all we can actually judge your work (the cards as a whole) on because the effects without the rest of the stats [u][b]to FRAME around[/b][/u] the effect leaves nothing to judge on power level of the card itself overall.

You probably shoudl get in some habit of at least putting the rest of the cards stats in with the lore anyway just to plan for situations like this. It doesn't even have take up much space if you use spoiler tags to hide the text anyway.