.Rai Posted December 12, 2012 Report Share Posted December 12, 2012 [center][IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/11sl8xk.jpg[/IMG][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted December 15, 2012 Report Share Posted December 15, 2012 The fact that his pants are so flat takes away from the depth you worked so hard to put into this piece. shame! And the text is not working. No siree. In addition, the lighting on his face is a gotta go moment. Lastly, the lighting he has on his lower body should batch up with the lighting presented around him. There are areas where there's yellow highlights which should be blue. Your concept is absolutely beautiful. I love the way you want to portray the lighting and the depth is just unf. If this piece was a man, it would be one of those really attractive men that was almost to a six pack and a chiseled face, but still needed to work on his abs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted December 15, 2012 Report Share Posted December 15, 2012 I feel as if it's just too chaotic, which wouldn't be a problem if everything meshed. The problem with this piece in particular is the lighting and colours, it would have work ten times better if they actually accented one another. When it comes to colour and lighting portrayed in a tag, it seems to be either hit or miss for you. Overall I like the concept and the execution in theory, but presented as is, not my cup of tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted December 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2012 [quote name=''Night' timestamp='1355580804' post='6093770'] I feel as if it's just too chaotic, which wouldn't be a problem if everything meshed. The problem with this piece in particular is the lighting and colours, it would have work ten times better if they actually accented one another. When it comes to colour and lighting portrayed in a tag, it seems to be either hit or miss for you. Overall I like the concept and the execution in theory, but presented as is, not my cup of tea. [/quote] I'm gonna agree with you here, and annoy myself. I'll probably stick to a single light source next time I make a tag for the practice. At the moment, I've been in a hump of constantly mushing stuff together without thought. Bad of me really. [quote name='Essence' timestamp='1355546999' post='6093608'] The fact that his pants are so flat takes away from the depth you worked so hard to put into this piece. shame! And the text is not working. No siree. In addition, the lighting on his face is a gotta go moment. Lastly, the lighting he has on his lower body should batch up with the lighting presented around him. There are areas where there's yellow highlights which should be blue. Your concept is absolutely beautiful. I love the way you want to portray the lighting and the depth is just unf. If this piece was a man, it would be one of those really attractive men that was almost to a six pack and a chiseled face, but still needed to work on his abs. [/quote] Lighting and depth on the lower half worried me. When I look at it, I realise that's it's basically a flat render on the bottom half. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted December 16, 2012 Report Share Posted December 16, 2012 [quote name='.Rai' timestamp='1355683735' post='6095063'] Lighting and depth on the lower half worried me. When I look at it, I realise that's it's basically a flat render on the bottom half. [/quote] Your job as a designer is to overcome challenges like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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