Mr. guy Posted December 14, 2012 Report Share Posted December 14, 2012 The final piece of the the swords family, one that I think would be very playable. [img]http://i.imgur.com/JeiFL.jpg[/img] Feel free to comment or suggest another image. Changes made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoshpalStefan Posted December 14, 2012 Report Share Posted December 14, 2012 First off, It's an interesting concept, though not one that I find very useful in comparison to the other swords. I really think the only reason this card might exist is as a counter to Inzektors. Second, I can't really suggest anything, but please try and find a more suitable image, since this one has the major "Black Background" flaw. Search over at DeviantArt or something, you should find something better. Third, capitalize the "l" the title, it doesn't look capitalized, but that might just look like that to me, just seems rather odd. Fourth and final, corrections in the text: "The ATK of your opponent's monsters becomes their original ATK. This card remains on the field until your opponent's next End Phase. While this card is face-up on the field, cards you control cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects." Not too many mistakes in the text, except for the second sentence and the misspelled word in the third, but overall it's good. My only suggestion, so that this card is not rather underpowered as it is currently, is to make it "This card remains on the field for 2 of your opponent's turns", or something similar to that. Just my suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. guy Posted December 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2012 The point of the card was to be a one turn variant of the swords family I think that this card is really good if you think about it. It protects all your cards (including spells and traps) from many problem cards during your turn and during your opponent's next turn, including but not limited to: MST D prison Veiler Hyperion/inzektors/high priestess Seems to me like it would be good if you're doing a major push for game, or in conjunction with other swords or stall cards. By the way I really appreciate the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted December 15, 2012 Report Share Posted December 15, 2012 I seems like a game finisher. I like it. Like a coldwave, but slightly more balanced. The part I don;t like about it is that is supports ftk/otk decks. Well, your monsters are still susceptilble to TT/Mirror. Other than that it's an interesting concept and a nice addition to the swords family. Although I can't say I like the picture too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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