Hey guys three new cards

[Raah i'm a gummybear]

One: Decay: the internal zombie
[IMG]http://i50.tinypic.com/snc668.jpg[/IMG]

Two: Balrog: the internal gate to the underworld
[IMG]http://i49.tinypic.com/2mow5cp.jpg[/IMG]

Three: Mini internal gazer
[IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/28j9u8m.jpg[/IMG]

[newhat]

Decay is pretty cool. It can't be forced with your own effects and it's rarely but hugely rewarding if you can pull it off. It's a Level 4 DARK Zombie that's useful outside of Zombies for discouraging Torrentials and Dark Holes.

Balrog's not bad, although your opponent has no reason to ever attack it.

What is the point of looking at the card that Gazer reveals? When would you not want to draw a card? I think it would be better if you took out the FLIP clause, because otherwise as a Tour Guide target it loses to Dark Mimic LV3 by 100 ATK, and making it a FLIP effect virtually guarantees this will die by battle.

[Chief Cotton]

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Decay is pretty cool. It can't be forced with your own effects and it's rarely but hugely rewarding if you can pull it off. It's a Level 4 DARK Zombie that's useful outside of Zombies for discouraging Torrentials and Dark Holes.

Balrog's not bad, although your opponent has no reason to ever attack it.

What is the point of looking at the card that Gazer reveals? When would you not want to draw a card? I think it would be better if you took out the FLIP clause, because otherwise as a Tour Guide target it loses to Dark Mimic LV3 by 100 ATK, and making it a FLIP effect virtually guarantees this will die by battle.
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I agree with you on Decay and Gazer, but I think Balrog has potential with cards that force your opponent to attack (such as [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Battle_Mania]Battle Mania[/url]).

The only thing you should work on bit by bit is the grammar and proper terms. If your mother tongue isn't English I'd be glad to help out P: Just let me know!