Hero

[Doku Ibara]

I wanted to try my hand at an elemental Hero card because I was tired of them only having two powerful no-fusion High level monster Neos, and Blade edge. So I took the screen shot of my City of Heroes character, and used it in this card. Enjoy.

 

 

Elemental Hero Frozen Undine (Water)

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Warrior/Effect

If there is a face up fusion monster with "Elemental Hero" in its name on your side of the field you may normal summon this monster from your hand without tributes. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step.

2600/800

 

Be honest point out any grammar errors, and opinions on its stats and effects would be nice as well. :)

[Doku Ibara]

Bump :)

[Slade]

OCG errors with capitalization, and if it's ultra rare, there should be a gradient "shine" to the card's picture to make it look more convincing. Plus, the picture was mediocre. Try getting a pic that isn't from a videogame (except if it's from, like, Gears of War, Half Life or Bioshock... those games look so dang realistic.)

[bury the year]

It's "meh"... 6/10

[Doku Ibara]

OCG errors with capitalization' date=' and if it's ultra rare, there should be a gradient "shine" to the card's picture to make it look more convincing. Plus, the picture was mediocre. Try getting a pic that isn't from a videogame (except if it's from, like, Gears of War, Half Life or Bioshock... those games look so dang realistic.)

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Thanks for the input, and pointing out of the errors that will be fixed. :) But i can't give it the gradient shine since I used the maker on this site, and have no idea how to do that. As for the picture that meh I wasn't going for realistic appearance I was using my own hero from city of heroes for this to be fun hehe ^_^ And for the record I thought gears of war , and half life were not all that fun. As for bioshock I have no input since I have yet to play it.