cordisdie Posted December 19, 2012 Report Share Posted December 19, 2012 new archtype Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
7swords Posted December 20, 2012 Report Share Posted December 20, 2012 OK this seams like it could end up being good but now it is very a bad set. Here are some of my ideas to fix it. First OCG! 1 The first letter of each word in a cards name needs to be capitalized. 2 Types need to be capitalized. 3 Swordsmen Of Anninilus effect should be, "When this card attacks a defense position monster inflict piercing battle damage." 4 In Annihilus cannot is one word, Will Of The Chosen One and Anninilus should be in quotes. Second Will Of The Chosen One needs to be a continuous spell card for its effect to work in the first place and Anninilus's attack and defense both need to be ? instead of 0. Third Anninilus attack can only get up to 1500, so unless you are planing on making more I would change that. Last this archetype doesn't seam to have a specific theme so when you make more try to make the theme clearer. Overall 3/10 but fix the OCG and add more and the rating will be at least 6/10. P.S. I like the pics but I would edit Swordsmen's pic to make it clearer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drcrisis Posted December 22, 2012 Report Share Posted December 22, 2012 3/10. Needs new effects. BUT, the idea is nice. The grammar is... really really bad sadly. The idea of the deck? Nice. needs more Annihilus monsters to work with. The spell is great, but don't make any annihilus cards too powerful as it can be abused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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