Legendary Dragon Posted December 19, 2012 Report Share Posted December 19, 2012 [size=2][font=verdana, geneva, sans-serif]Only a single for now, if people like this I'll gladly make more. [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/153926.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][spoiler; Ignore the fact that this is a Tiger][/color][/font]You can only Xyz Summon this card (from your extra deck) by using a Rank 6 Xyz Monster you control that wasn't Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Until the End Phase, it gains the following effects: ● When this card attacks a face-up Attack position monster, the attacked monsters loses 1000 ATK and its effects are negated until the end of the Battle Phase. ● When this card attacks a Defense position monster, this card inflicts piercing Battle damage to your opponent and the attacked monsters effects are negated until the end of the Battle Phase.[/spoiler] [font=verdana, geneva, sans-serif][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/161040.jpg[/img][/font] [font=verdana, geneva, sans-serif][spoiler; Star Lord: Cosmo Pegasus]You can Xyz Summon this card (from your extra deck) by using a Rank 4 Xyz Monster you control that wasn't Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn, during either player's Battle Phase, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Select 1 Level 4 or lower monster in your graveyard; banish it, and this card gains ATK equal to that monster's original ATK until the End Phase.[/spoiler][/font][/size] [size=2][font=verdana, geneva, sans-serif][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/162046.jpg[/img][/font][/size] [size=2][font=verdana, geneva, sans-serif][spoiler;Star Lord: Black Hole Dragon]You can only Xyz Summon this card (from your extra deck) by using a Rank 8 Xyz Monster you control that wasn't Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) When this card battles, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Monster effects on the field and in the graveyard are negated and cannot be activated until the damage calculation. When this card destroys a monster in battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to that card's rank/level x300.[/font][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][/spoiler][/font][/color][/size] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/162069.jpg[/img] [spoiler;Star Lord: Blue Moon Hydra]You can only Xyz Summon this card (from your extra deck) by using a Rank 7 Xyz Monster you control that wasn't Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn, during your opponent's Main Phase 1, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: All monsters they control must attack this card if able. When a monster with 2600 ATK or less attacks this face-up card, increase damage done from the battle x2. When a monster with 2800 ATK or higher attacks this card, detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to negate the attack and inflict 800 damage to your opponent.[/spoiler] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/162084.jpg[/img] [spoiler;Star Lord: Solar Raptor]You can only Xyz Summon this card (from your extra deck) by using a Rank 5 Xyz Monster you control that wasn't Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Select 1 monster your opponent controls; until the End Phase, that monster's effects are negated and its ATK and DEF are halved. When this card destroys that monster in battle, draw 1 card.[/spoiler] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/162093.jpg[/img] [spoiler;Star Lord: Meteor Archer]You can only Xyz Summon this card (from your extra deck) by using a Rank 3 Xyz Monster you control that wasn't Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Until the End Phase, this card gains the following effects: It can attack directly, and when this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent, send 1 random card from your opponent's hand to the graveyard and this card gains effect(s) based on the type of card that was sent. Trap: Destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. Spell: Destroy 1 Spell/Trap card your opponent controls. Monster: Return 1 card your opponent controls to the bottom of the deck.[/spoiler] [size=3][font=verdana, geneva, sans-serif][color=#000000]Star Lords are Xyz monsters based on the 88 Constellations, and they cannot be summoned like regular Xyz Monsters, so you can only summon them via Chaos Xyz Evolution.[/color][/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legendary Dragon Posted December 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2012 bumppp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted December 22, 2012 Report Share Posted December 22, 2012 Great to see some more Rank 7 support, it really needs more useful cards than just Big Eye IMO, anyways onto the card, it's kinda a weird Xyz Summon you have going on there, I don't really think you need that to make it balanced, it's pretty balanced as it is, not that much ATK though still enough to make it a good beater, plus it's detaching effect is nice, and not to OP. I really like this card, though you might want to fix the OCG a little at the end to say "the attacked monsters effects are negated until the end of the Battle Phase." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legendary Dragon Posted January 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2013 Updated the OP with new effects and a new card, whatcha think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted January 1, 2013 Report Share Posted January 1, 2013 There's one problem clause for me that exists: "If this card would be destroyed, you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card instead". It just makes these 2 cards really annoying to play around, and I don't particularly see why it's in there. I'd homestly cut it out or ammend it by goving it a once per turn clause. As for the cards, they're quite fine in and of themselves, and I could see each being used. They're good, albeit a bit slow, but their effects definitely make up for it. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathWielder Posted January 2, 2013 Report Share Posted January 2, 2013 I am not good with judging power or effectiveness, but I'd like to say that the concept of basing cards off the 88 constellations is a very cool idea. It has so much potential, but what could you possibly do for the Big and Little Dipper? Lol these are the questions. Again, very interesting idea. I'd like to see more Star Lord creations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkneptune Posted January 3, 2013 Report Share Posted January 3, 2013 I like the concept, very cool. The fact that they are Chaos Xyz monsters just blows my mind, love it. The effects are long, but in my opinion it compensates for being hard to summon. i definetly see myself using Cosmo Pegasus. id like to see more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legendary Dragon Posted January 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2013 I've added some more Star Lords. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkneptune Posted January 3, 2013 Report Share Posted January 3, 2013 I absolutely love the artwork on Solar Raptor and meteor archer, very cool. Also, a bit or trivia, In the English version of the anime, the summoning is called Chaos Xyz Evolution, however the original japanese name is Chaos Xyz Change! i have no idea why i went trivia, lol, anyway, great cards, very cool. the effects are so long to read, lol, but still very nice great job just on thing that came to mind, if they are based on constellations, wouldnt black hole, blue moon and meteor break the theme? I understand Solar raptor since the sun is a star, but the others are just cosmic phenomenon, not constellations Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legendary Dragon Posted January 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2013 They are based on constellations. Nova Leo - Leo Cosmo Pegasus - Pegasus Black Hole Dragon - Draco Blue Moon Hydra - Hydra Solar Raptor - Lizard Meteor Archer - Saggitarius I understand what you mean but I'm going with a cosmic phenomenon theme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathWielder Posted January 3, 2013 Report Share Posted January 3, 2013 [quote name='Legendary Dragon' timestamp='1357236165' post='6110213'] They are based on constellations. Nova Leo - Leo Cosmo Pegasus - Pegasus Black Hole Dragon - Draco Blue Moon Hydra - Hydra Solar Raptor - Lizard Meteor Archer - Saggitarius I understand what you mean but I'm going with a cosmic phenomenon theme. [/quote] Personally, I'd like to see these constellations: Ursa Major Ursa Minor O-Ryan Hercules Great work on the new ones you posted. Better than the first 2, and those were already really good. (Do you plan to make one for each of the 88 constellations? Or just several of them?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legendary Dragon Posted January 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 [quote name='DeathWielder' timestamp='1357255061' post='6110453'] Personally, I'd like to see these constellations: Ursa Major Ursa Minor O-Ryan Hercules Great work on the new ones you posted. Better than the first 2, and those were already really good. (Do you plan to make one for each of the 88 constellations? Or just several of them?) [/quote] I'm going to try my best and make all of them. The 6 shown now are just the "generic" ones so to say, like Utopia/Leviathan Dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legendary Dragon Posted January 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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