Another 2 D.D Support Cards

[LeguBrit]

[url="http://yugico.com/user/35254-S-Jam/card/35941-Random_Cards_I_felt_like_making/143236-D_D__Vanquisher_Lady"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/143236.jpg[/img][/url]

Lore:
Once per turn: You can Banish 1 Monster from your Graveyard to Target 1 Monster on the field; Destroy that Target. When this face-up card on the field is Banished, you can Special Summon 1 of your Banished "D.D."Monsters.

[url="http://yugico.com/user/35254-S-Jam/card/35941-Random_Cards_I_felt_like_making/143255-D_D__Uni-Leopard"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/143255.jpg[/img][/url]

Lore:
When this card destroys a Monster by battle, you can add 1 of your Banished "D.D." Monsters to your Hand. When this face-up card is destroyed, it is Banished.



It's almost like I'm obsessed, I know :S

Reviews are appreciated and the most helpful get reps.

[Iam Isthename]

Good to see another D.D. monsters again.

Well, here's my review:

First card:
D.D. Vanquisher Lady. I think it's kinda OP'd. I don't know why but my senses were like telling me it really is. Well maybe bcoz an effect that removes 1 monster from your graveyard and destroys a monster on the field is kinda too exaggerated for a level 3 monster. It even beats the crap out of Chaos Sorcerer that removes a monster on the field but can't declare an attack after doing that! You have to reconsider this effect. Maybe increase its level by 4 or 5, or make this card harder to summon to the field. For her another effect that "...[i]when this face up card on the field is banished, you can special summon 1 of your removed from play D.D. monsters[/i]", it's not that bad though but I have a suggestion. Change that effect into this one: ...[i]when this face up card on the field is banished from the field, you can banish 1 monster from your graveyard to special summon 1 of your banished D.D. monster except 'D.D. Vanquisher Lady'[/i]." just to make this card legit. This effect might be a good combo if you have your 'D.D. Explorer' in your graveyard. Why? Banish this card, banish D.D. Explorer' from your graveyard and special summon any powerful D.D. monster and bam! Explorer's effect enables you to add 1 D.D. monster from your banished area and add again this card to your hand, summon it, rinse and repeat.

This card still needs more fix but I'm giving you a 6.5 out of 10 for the mean time. Still a good card though.

Second Card:
D.D. Uni-leopard. Wait, wut? Unicorn + Leopard? The design is kinda cool but I hate unicorns( no personal feellings). It's good for me but you might notify me if you still want to modify this card.

I'll give it a 7.8 out of 10.

[LeguBrit]

Vanquisher Lady was supposed to be a kind of sacrificial thing; as long as you have Dimensional Fissure or Macro Cosmos, you can banish your best D.D. card from your grave and then destroy Vanquisher Lady and summon it. It is supremely broken, isn't it >_<

Uni-Leopard is a terrible name, I know. I just couldn't think of a better name.

[spoiler='Is this any better?']
[url="http://yugico.com/user/35254-S-Jam/card/35941-Random_Cards_I_felt_like_making/143236-D_D__Vanquisher_Lady"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/143236.jpg[/img][/url]

Lore:
Once per turn: You can Banish 1 [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]Monster[/url]from your Graveyard to Target 1 [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]Monster[/url]on the [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?ssp=Field"]field[/url]; Destroy that Target. When this face-up card on the [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?ssp=Field"]field[/url] is Banished, you can Special Summon 1 of your Banished "D.D."[url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]Monsters[/url].
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[Iam Isthename]

[quote name='LeguBrit' timestamp='1356970017' post='6107165']
Vanquisher Lady was supposed to be a kind of sacrificial thing; as long as you have Dimensional Fissure or Macro Cosmos, you can banish your best D.D. card from your grave and then destroy Vanquisher Lady and summon it. It is supremely broken, isn't it >_<

Uni-Leopard is a terrible name, I know. I just couldn't think of a better name.

[spoiler='Is this any better?']
[url="http://yugico.com/user/35254-S-Jam/card/35941-Random_Cards_I_felt_like_making/143236-D_D__Vanquisher_Lady"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/143236.jpg[/img][/url]

Lore:
Once per turn: You can Banish 1 [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]Monster[/url]from your Graveyard to Target 1 [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]Monster[/url]on the [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?ssp=Field"]field[/url]; Destroy that Target. When this face-up card on the [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?ssp=Field"]field[/url] is Banished, you can Special Summon 1 of your Banished "D.D."[url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]Monsters[/url].
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[/quote]Better than the first one but I do remind you that I'm not perfect in reviewing anything. I just only expressed my idea. Gotta change now, this card receives a 8.6 out of 10.

[Sora1499]

The thing that annoys me about the first card is that it's counter-intuitive to use in DDs. DDs don't like cards in the graveyard, they like em banished via macro and dfissure. So why would you make their boss centered around the graveyard? I'd give it a way to drop itself via a method in-tune with the archetype, i.e. "If you have 3 or more banished DD monsters, you can special summon this card (from your hand)" and replace every "banish from the graveyard" clause to "shuffle one of your banished cards into the deck" for our good ol buddy necroface, hurhurhur. I'm torn over its other effect because it is rather abusable, albeit a bit slow. The second card is fine and I like it just the way it is. Hope I helped.