Merciless Overlord Knic Posted December 31, 2012 Report Share Posted December 31, 2012 I have two cards in a set right now, and I need to make more. I would love if you guys could help me out with a few cards, giving me names or pictures or feedback or whatever. [spoiler='What I Have So Far'][img]http://i1237.photobucket.com/albums/ff463/niknikphoto/card_3_zps34e946a8.jpg[/img] [IMG]http://i1237.photobucket.com/albums/ff463/niknikphoto/createcard_zpsee54e1cf.jpg[/IMG] [img]http://i1237.photobucket.com/albums/ff463/niknikphoto/card_1_zps2f043acf.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1237.photobucket.com/albums/ff463/niknikphoto/createcard_zpsd7aa29a2.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted December 31, 2012 Report Share Posted December 31, 2012 Okay, your OCG is awful here. First off, you never say "can" when it's a mandatory effect, you say OR. You also never say "remove", you only say "destroy" or "return" about cards that are on the field. You also need to put name specific cards in qoutes like so "The Eternal Clock". With the second card, it's not even a Continuous Trap, I know some cards don't need to be, but there's no reason for it not to be. You also don't wait, rather you would write it like this: During the Standby Phase: Discard 1 card (no need to say your hand, you can't discard from anywhere else). Then, destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field. You see the problem here? It's way too overpowered, also what do you do when you can't discard? Nothing happens? It's second effect, tell me, how are you going to get 3 Level 5 monsters to Tribute? (not sacrifice, really you still use that?) Also waiting 5 turns is way too much for it to be worth it, it's easier to summon other high ATK monsters. Really, you don't need more cards, rather try to fix these, cause right now they are not too great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merciless Overlord Knic Posted December 31, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2012 I'm sorry, I haven't been following the OCG at all, I knew I'd hear that. Thank you for the reply. I will edit the cards. When I do that, since you seem to know what you're doing, could you help with other cards? Thanks a lot, though.Edited the cards, put one more in. Still want feedback, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkneptune Posted January 1, 2013 Report Share Posted January 1, 2013 interesting concept i must say. Since you are working around the Time there, why not make a Turn Back Time card, for revivals. or somethng future themed to add cards to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merciless Overlord Knic Posted January 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 i like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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