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The card I made for Chance's GCM project


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I made this during Chance's GCM project. Too bad I rarely see him anymore. Anyways, if it's busted or horribly underpowered, let me know, cuz I haven't touched upon this bad boy in months. Comment, review, rate, hate whatever. Enjoy!

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[spoiler='The Lore']2 level 7 monsters
Once only, while this card is face-up on the field: you can detach 2 Xyz materials from this card and target 1 card on the field or in a player's hand; banish that target. Then, apply the appropriate effect based on that target's card type (Spell, Trap, or Monster):
*Monster: Select 1 monster with an ATK, DEF, OR Level equal to the banished monster's ATK, DEF, OR Level, and add it to your hand.
*Spell: You can negate the activation of a spell card your opponent activates within their next 3 turns.
*Trap: Increase the Spell Speed of 1 trap card you activate within the next 3 turns by 1.[/spoiler]

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Okay, a few problems here, first you can't target cards in the hand, so make a change to that, also, you never say from where you add, I am guessing deck. The Spell Effect is interesting, havn't really seen such an effect that lasts for 3 turns, though I don't think the "next 3 turns" is necessary since it's a one time effect, and there's already a cost to activate it so just make it "Once: You can negate the activation of a Spell Card your opponent actiavtes."
With the Trap, again interesting effect, now how does this actually work? Would you be able use a card like CoTH after your opponent activates a Counter? And why would you ever really want that, you could just use it afterwards, though it's interesting and something I have never seen before. Now for it's amazing ATK. It's a Rank 7 without any restrictions, and is requires only 2 monsters, not all that hard, actually, so either make it so it's 3 or make it so it's specific like LIGHT or Machine-Type or what ever. Either that or make the effect say "if this card has no Xyz Materials, it cannot attack your opponent directly," or something alike that. Anyways, pretty nice card, not sure what the contest is about, but pretty cool, and could become a staple, even though it's 2nd and third effect are pretty weird.

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1. I'm pretty sure you CAN target stuff in the hand. The OCG of this card is wacky in general, I'll probably reconstruct it altogether in an hour or so.
2. Yup, from the deck.
3. I'll probably just do that, yeah.
4. I have no idea how the hell it works, Chance did that part himself. I'll probably reword the trap effect a bit.
5. Its ATK isn't very special, it stays like it is.
6. Make it a 3-mat?!?! Hayl naw! I want players to actually summon this, y'know?
7. Why are we supporting spell books and Georgia, again? I'm keeping it generic. It's not game-breakingly OP.
8. I don't think it needs a restriction clause...
9. I WANT this to be a staple, that's what why made it.
10. Thanks for your thoughts. I'll definitely rework it a bit.

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