Sora1499 Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 This bad boy got 2nd in Tama's contest! What do you guys think of it? Comment, review, rate, hate, whatever. Enjoy! [URL=http://yugico.com/user/31887-sora1299/card/33102-Chaos_Numbers_Contest/130895-Number_C17__Allevios_Dragon][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/130895.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [spoiler='You must be going blind']3 level 3 monsters You can also Xyz summon this card by using 1 face-up “Number 17: Leviathan Dragon” you control as the Xyz material (Xyz materials attached to that monster become attached to this card). While you have 1000 LP or less: This card gains 300 ATK for each Xyz material attached to it. One per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz material from this card; This card gains 1000 ATK, until the end phase. This effect can only be activated and resolved while you have 1000 LP or less.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Mugendramon Posted January 5, 2013 Report Share Posted January 5, 2013 You made a... Chaos Number. And it can... only use its effect once per turn. That's completely missing the point of CNumbers, which are meant to be ridiculously over the top beaters. A 3600 beater is not what you're looking for in a CNumber. Also totally ignored their naming gimmick. Kind of annoying, that. Remove the once per turn clause and it's acceptable. Also the wording at the end should read what the other CNumbers do; [b]"You must have 1000 Life Points or less to activate and to resolve this effect."[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted January 5, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2013 [quote name='Mugendramon' timestamp='1357396934' post='6111845'] You made a... Chaos Number. And it can... only use its effect once per turn. That's completely missing the point of CNumbers, which are meant to be ridiculously over the top beaters. A 3600 beater is not what you're looking for in a CNumber. Also totally ignored their naming gimmick. Kind of annoying, that. Remove the once per turn clause and it's acceptable. Also the wording at the end should read what the other CNumbers do; [b]"You must have 1000 Life Points or less to activate and to resolve this effect."[/b] [/quote] Thanks Mugen. I'll remove the OPT clause and rethink the name a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuskin Posted January 7, 2013 Report Share Posted January 7, 2013 You acctually wrote the "1000 life points or less" part, twice... but you can totally fix that. Great pic, Jazin Kay is really awesome, i get it's pics all the time. The effect is kinda... too strong you know, it gets to 3600, so there's no reason for detaching Xyz Materials, you'll be gaining 200 ATK points until the End Phase... Well OCG: Is right, but most "Number C" monster can be summoned anytime, this one only in the right time, it makes no difference but worth to advertise 8/10 Pic: 10/10 its pretty realistic compared to the original Leviathan Dragon... but i liked it Effect: 3/10 Its just lower the ATK points gained by attached Xyz Materials and it's done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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