Bright and Starbright

[groniack]

Hello guys,
It has been ages since i Have last posted here !!
This is an archetype based on Starbright Dragon. The main idea behind this archetype is to summon easilly this dragon. I have already posted this archetype but it was a period when this forum wasn't very active and i got only 1 reply. I hope things go better this time.


[spoiler=Starbright Dragon]

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When this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can tribute 2 monsters you control; Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. Once per turn: When a Level 3 or lower monster is Normal Summoned; Destroy that monster.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Bright Hammer Holder]

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When this card is Normal Summoned; You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Bright" monster from your hand. Once per turn: You can send 1 "Starbright Dragon" from your hand to the Graveyard; Inflict 800 damage to your opponent.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Bright Angel]

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Once per turn; You can send 1 "Bright" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. If this card is tributed; Add it to your hand instead of sending it to the Graveyard.[/spoiler]

[Zazubat]

These cards would work very well with Photon Galaxy actually. Both LIGHT, both have a Warrior, and a Dragon though the Fairy is somewhat out of place, but not a big deal. Now my problem is that it's too strong for such an easy summon, and anything with a low level that might be able to counteract it is destroyed. I like where you're going with this, but I think for such an easy summon it should be toned down a little, especially since your main goal is to get a lot of guys out at once. Hammers burn effect is not really needed, I would rather want an other effect instead, though sending is nice, though I will say, I'm not 100 % sure, but I think the Tribute that triggers when Dragon is sent to the Graveyard would miss the timing, so it might not be so useful there. But I'm not sure as said. For Angel, you might want to change it, cause decks that focuses on a lot of Tributing might have fun with this card. Change it to "For an effect of Starbright Dragon" or something like that. Now for the last thing, which I'm sure you didn't know. There's a card called Bright Star Dragon, which is both closely named to your dragon, but I doubt that your Archetype was suppose to support that card, especially since that card is a Level Changer, which your Archetype doesn't seem to support. So either make all of your cards say "Except "Bright Star Dragon"" or change your monsters to be Starbright, which would simply fix the problem. Also change their effects to say Starbright instead. Anyways, nothing too bad about it, though I hate how the card looks, not the image, but the name and text.

[groniack]

Τhanks for the post

Now that i look at hammer holder's effect it really seems that Starbright Dragon misses timing
I will fix that.

Well i Didn't know of Bright Star Dragon. Nevermind i will add to every card of mine "except Bright Star Dragon"

And as you already ponted out Starbright Dragon is A bit Powerful If i Add a cost like "If you activated this effect (i mean the destruction Effect) you cannot activate Trap Cards for the rest of this turn" do you think it will be fixed ?