Zazubat Posted January 8, 2013 Report Share Posted January 8, 2013 Too much? I think I made it a pretty tough beater, though it's secondary effect makes you want to detach, so that way you will lose any power you had, though it's still pretty tough. Maybe I should tone it down a little more. What do you think? [IMG]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/DarkHarpiesLady_zps1f862e03.png[/IMG] [spoiler=So this is my thing that makes you want to click it. LOOK AT THEM WINGS! Am I doing this right?] 3 Level 4 WIND monsters While this card has an Xyz Material attached that was originally a "Harpie" monster, except "Harpie's Brother" this card gains 400 ATK and DEF for each "Harpie Lady" attached to this card. Once per turn, when this card attacks: You can detach 1 Xyz Material; until the end of the Battle Phase, this card cannot be destroyed by card effects, also if your opponent targets this face-up card, you can target an other WIND monster you control instead. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted January 8, 2013 Report Share Posted January 8, 2013 Eh, doesn't seem worth making to be honest. both Lance and Chain can be chained to the activation making the detach kinda pointless. The only good thing about it is that it's a nice 3500 beater. So not really worth making since 3 Harpie lady #1 make for 3 2200 beaters. but thats just my opinion on the matter others might have different opinions or think it's a good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted January 8, 2013 Report Share Posted January 8, 2013 It's pretty decent, actually. A 3k attacker that can't be destroyed by card effects sounds pretty sweet to me. What balanced it is the materials clause: you need to put a lot into it to get something out. At least, that's what it does in theory. Technically, if you used stuff like harpie's channeler as the material it wouldn't get the boost. So I suggest that you put in "For every 'Harpie' monster" instead. Overall, it's a decent card that would be run at 1 for pushes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted January 9, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2013 [quote name='Archlord Sora' timestamp='1357683088' post='6115504'] So I suggest that you put in "For every 'Harpie' monster" instead. [/quote]Yeah I originally was gonna do that too, though I thought that making it like that would make it a pretty easy 25k plus the no destroy bonus. Plus, since it's pretty easy to summon with cards like Harpie Channeler and Elegant Egotist, though I will make it for all Harpie monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Rainagain Posted January 10, 2013 Report Share Posted January 10, 2013 Its name is DARK Harpie's Lady, so i think its attribute must be Dark, you can treat as Wind in the effect. The no destroy bonus is nice... but your opponent can destroy it in his/her turn because it only gain the invincible bonus in your battle phase. Very good card... 8/10 i think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted January 10, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2013 [quote name='Rainagain' timestamp='1357827920' post='6117192'] Its name is DARK Harpie's Lady, so i think its attribute must be Dark, you can treat as Wind in the effect. The no destroy bonus is nice... but your opponent can destroy it in his/her turn because it only gain the invincible bonus in your battle phase. Very good card... 8/10 i think [/quote]too make make it too overpowered with multiple Attribute boost effects, I'll keep it to one Attribute. The same goes with it's anti-destroy bonus, it would be pretty OP if it was also in your opponent's turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainagain Posted January 10, 2013 Report Share Posted January 10, 2013 OK... I think you dont need "once per turn" in the card text. It only attacks once per turn, and the eff last until the end of the battle phase. It wouldn't be that OP if it was also in opponent's turn like you think. When you detach 1 material to keep it safe, it loses 400 ATK, so it can be destroyed by battle easily. btw, i love the image... very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted January 10, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2013 [quote name='Rainagain' timestamp='1357829666' post='6117207'] OK... I think you dont need "once per turn" in the card text. It only attacks once per turn, and the eff last until the end of the battle phase. It wouldn't be that OP if it was also in opponent's turn like you think. When you detach 1 material to keep it safe, it loses 400 ATK, so it can be destroyed by battle easily. btw, i love the image... very nice [/quote]in case some effect makes it attack twice, such as Twin Sword of Flashing Light - Tryce, which does decrease ATK, but not by much it still could use it again if it really wanted, so I'll keep it like it is, no real need to change that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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