musicplusyugioh Posted January 9, 2013 Report Share Posted January 9, 2013 A dragon card I made easily>>>>V V [img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/uploads/monthly_01_2013/post-652517-0-45095600-1357770640_thumb.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabber2033 Posted January 10, 2013 Report Share Posted January 10, 2013 For a first card this isn't too bad. I'd say it's closer to balanced than broken. Level 10 = Two tribues so that's a bit of a hinderance. It's Water so it can't be summoned via Lightpuslar. Still think Chaos Dragons will main one or two for Rank 10 shenanigans with Darkness Metal and Trag. Gustaph Max at least becomes more usuable again. I'd give this a 8/10 only because the effect isn't too creative. Still pretty neat though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musicplusyugioh Posted January 10, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2013 Thanks, i'll improve though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorin Markov Posted January 10, 2013 Report Share Posted January 10, 2013 heres the lore fix: While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot target any other monsters you control exccept [i]"Freeza, Dragon Lord of Ice". [/i]When this card is sent to the Graveyard you may Special Summon it during your next Stand-by Phase. Lower the cards level or pump up its effect a little. rate: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainagain Posted January 10, 2013 Report Share Posted January 10, 2013 It seems broken to me, if you use Lavalval chain to send this card to the Graveyard, you can summon it during your turn? Btw, hieratic deck can summon your monster from the DECK, then let it be destroyed, then you have a 3k6 beatstick next turn.... I will fix that: [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase.[/background][/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchro Master! Posted January 10, 2013 Report Share Posted January 10, 2013 Use REDMD To SS this. 0/10 Broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleaknight Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 As previously said, not bad for a first card, but there's lots of room for improvement. First off, your cards cannot be targeted for what? For an attack, by card effects? Second, "you may" is not an official term, at least not a modern one. Always use "you can". And its effect to be Special Summoned from the Graveyard is broken - you can send it to the graveyard via a first turn Foolish Burial and instantly summon it. And there are some terms that must be used with the first letter as a capital letter - like [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummon and [b]G[/b]raveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted January 26, 2013 Report Share Posted January 26, 2013 Hey hey!! Guys! Don't be so hard on him.. this is his 1st card and as I recall, my 1st card was not better than this one!The effect is broken and the OCG is a little off...also the Level do not go with its effect.. By the italic are the effects you may add in order the card will be equal to its level an the bold are the corrections! ok? Let's see the effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 monsters on your side of the field from play. You cannot Summon any other monsters durng the turn this card is Summoned. While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot target any other monsters you control except "Freeza, Dragon Lord of Ice" as an attack target. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase.8/10 for your 1st try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AloneInTheWorld Posted January 31, 2013 Report Share Posted January 31, 2013 I give it 8/10 the picture looks great, but the effect is a bit to powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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